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stop giving 1 star, i just want to bring joy to all men of culture stop giving 1 star, i just want to bring joy to all men of culture stop giving 1 star, i just want to bring joy to all men of culture
A national treasure. This masterpiece, comparable to Don Quixote and the Shakespearean classics, shall forever be held in the hearts of men as the pinnacle of literature.
This is ultimate proof that webnovel fakes it novels rating, there's absolutely no way this shit is more than 3 stars Jesus Christ
I give respect to those who take a step on the interesting side. Some grammatical errors made it fought to read, but it’s alright
I didn't read the story yet but by the description alone I stop myself from reading it. Author if you are reading this, you need help. How about touch grass for a while and stop being a man of culture for a few weeks maybe a month. Don't take this as me berating you I'm just concerned for your well being. But for my opinion this story is clearly targeted to a specific audience so I'm not judging those people. So all in all, I'm just disappointed, maybe just change the description and personally the title as well
Although your command over literature needs a bit of work, I'm just glad you had the balls to attempt something new and exciting. Keep being you and being awesome. As a fellow cultured man, I wish you the best.
mas mas mas masmas..................................................................................................................................................
i really like this ita just that you dont update anymore but i will give it 5 stars
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The history is 10/10 autor pls continue the history I what to see astolfo pls continue The history is 10/10 autor pls continue the history I what to see astolfo pls continue The history is 10/10 autor pls continue the history I what to see astolfo pls continue
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Didn’t read it yet and Idk if I will. I decided to bring balance to the force because all the idiots throwing a tantrum. It’s embarrassing, I know only 1/5 (at most) of you are adults but it isn’t a reason to act like a preteen.
just giving it three stars since it wouldnt be fair to judge without reading it past the first chapter like most of the 1 star reviews probably but all i can really say is that its not ntr atleast?
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no word man just stop it get some help🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤧
this is the proof that God is dead 💀 🙏 😂 🤣 🙌 😔 💀 ☠☠☠☠☠☠👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💀💀💀💀☠☠☠☠☠👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
The synopsis says it all. It's a blight upon the world. It is trying to poison our cultured community. My review is just here to fight against all those unjustified 5 star reviews.
Leave the Internet forever. Your mom doesn't pay the bills for you to be a degenerate. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
No la leí todavía, pero daré las 5 estrellas porque , no creo que exista una historia que se la merezca. Igual y tampoco espero mucho de una historia creada específicamente para un público en particular
MORE!! ignore the haters their uncultured straws and give MORE!! femboys are limited enough as is... xdxdxdzdzdzdzdzzdxdxdxdxdxddddxdxdxd
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☹️🤔🙂😊😄😃😆😅😂🤣😭 Странный смешной рассказ. Пойдет передернуть пару раз. Хотя сюжета маловато.Но давольно забавно, что его вообще написали.
keep up the great work please comeback to update[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Это было бы лучше, если бы он не пил чужую сперму, а всем скармливал свою. Эх. Глупый автор. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
5 stars because i am glad you are back 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
stop giving 1 star, i just want to bring joy to all men of culture stop giving 1 star, i just want to bring joy to all men of culture stop giving 1 star, i just want to bring joy to all men of culture
A national treasure. This masterpiece, comparable to Don Quixote and the Shakespearean classics, shall forever be held in the hearts of men as the pinnacle of literature.
This is ultimate proof that webnovel fakes it novels rating, there's absolutely no way this shit is more than 3 stars Jesus Christ
I give respect to those who take a step on the interesting side. Some grammatical errors made it fought to read, but it’s alright
I didn't read the story yet but by the description alone I stop myself from reading it. Author if you are reading this, you need help. How about touch grass for a while and stop being a man of culture for a few weeks maybe a month. Don't take this as me berating you I'm just concerned for your well being. But for my opinion this story is clearly targeted to a specific audience so I'm not judging those people. So all in all, I'm just disappointed, maybe just change the description and personally the title as well
Although your command over literature needs a bit of work, I'm just glad you had the balls to attempt something new and exciting. Keep being you and being awesome. As a fellow cultured man, I wish you the best.
mas mas mas masmas..................................................................................................................................................
i really like this ita just that you dont update anymore but i will give it 5 stars
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ネタバレを明かす The history is 10/10 autor pls continue the history I what to see astolfo pls continue The history is 10/10 autor pls continue the history I what to see astolfo pls continue The history is 10/10 autor pls continue the history I what to see astolfo pls continue
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Didn’t read it yet and Idk if I will. I decided to bring balance to the force because all the idiots throwing a tantrum. It’s embarrassing, I know only 1/5 (at most) of you are adults but it isn’t a reason to act like a preteen.
just giving it three stars since it wouldnt be fair to judge without reading it past the first chapter like most of the 1 star reviews probably but all i can really say is that its not ntr atleast?
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ネタバレを明かす no word man just stop it get some help🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤧
this is the proof that God is dead 💀 🙏 😂 🤣 🙌 😔 💀 ☠☠☠☠☠☠👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💀💀💀💀☠☠☠☠☠👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
The synopsis says it all. It's a blight upon the world. It is trying to poison our cultured community. My review is just here to fight against all those unjustified 5 star reviews.
Leave the Internet forever. Your mom doesn't pay the bills for you to be a degenerate. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
No la leí todavía, pero daré las 5 estrellas porque , no creo que exista una historia que se la merezca. Igual y tampoco espero mucho de una historia creada específicamente para un público en particular
MORE!! ignore the haters their uncultured straws and give MORE!! femboys are limited enough as is... xdxdxdzdzdzdzdzzdxdxdxdxdxddddxdxdxd
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☹️🤔🙂😊😄😃😆😅😂🤣😭 Странный смешной рассказ. Пойдет передернуть пару раз. Хотя сюжета маловато.Но давольно забавно, что его вообще написали.
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Это было бы лучше, если бы он не пил чужую сперму, а всем скармливал свою. Эх. Глупый автор. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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