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Это было бы лучше, если бы он не пил чужую сперму, а всем скармливал свою. Эх. Глупый автор. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Hey I really like this story so far are you on like a hyenas or a break. just wondering since you haven't posted in a month I would like if you posted more
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Have you ever tried what you have written about author unless you are gay no offence just asking ___________________________________________
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I don't like the story never will. I sometimes come back and just read the reviews. At the start, I found it funny to read so many people dissing and being appalled at the story's content, but the more I read the more appalled I got how many people started cursing the author and suggesting psychiatrists, mental health issues, and even suicide. If at first, it read like ribbing the author now it just reads as another case of cyberbullying. I myself am a curious person and read some of it. I even at first expected the story to be a joke and find only wasda<afasf as content. But it is exactly as described in the synopsis and written in okayish English, none the less if you are into some really weird kinky fetish stuff the story may be a worthwhile read. I myself capitulated 3 chapters into the story, skimmed 8 more chapters, and fled. Normally I would give this story at most 3 stars due to my bias because seriously on preference alone I would only give 1 star, but objectively the story isn't bad only for persons with special taste. I gave 4 stars because the many 1 stars are from an objective point simply false. The story is no literal masterpiece but it is written in for a fanfiction good English, it at least has a plot and isn't only por*n and builds its own world with summoned characters, where most fanfictions don't even accomplish more than a tiny bit of original plot.
You forgat the gay tag bro.............. . ........................................................_________________-_-_-____________-_____--_--__-__-
I demand more chapters now, and drop this am I will hunt your 37 generations 😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠
This story is sick ............................-----------'----'-----#'....,,,,,,,.,,...,,,,,,,......,.,,,,,,,,,......,,..........,..,.,,..,..
hahahaha, very interesting story I hope the author does not abandon it............................................................................
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Honest review, i dont know why i like it, maybe its unique and have anime but honestly idk still goood, i mean its wierd and gay, im a 98% straight man but that 2% is liking this
._. I am completely speechless after reading the description, for 3 years I have not seen anything of this level of perversion in these cursed lands. after that description I am curious about this. It shouldn't be worse than that story where a woman pleasured herself with a fetus inside a condom (that woman's child)
Keep writing what you love, the book description Teold you what it’s About 5 stars ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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What ever you're on to make you write this, I want some of it too. Man this is crackfic on another level. And just for laugh, I will give you 5 stars.
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Im a man, now im questioning my sexuality or maybe discovered my fetish.....anyway the writing is good for a novel like this the character is kinda good, while the authors update is quick, how the plot goes is good the world backround is unique and somewhat expected, while the mc character is kindgood but i suggest make him a dignified degenerate king his a king after all , make him domineering king, on other hand how he talks to other character is sometimes cringy, overall good.
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Это было бы лучше, если бы он не пил чужую сперму, а всем скармливал свою. Эх. Глупый автор. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Hey I really like this story so far are you on like a hyenas or a break. just wondering since you haven't posted in a month I would like if you posted more
TrashpervertedBrainlessCoward1234567890987654321123456789098765432112345678909876543211234567890987654321123456789098765432112345678909876543211234567890987654321
Upload pls upload pls upload pls upload pls upload pls upload pls upload pls upload pls upload pls pls pls pls upload upload upload pls upload pls upload pretty pleasssssse
Have you ever tried what you have written about author unless you are gay no offence just asking ___________________________________________
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the world is ending the world is ending the world is ending the world is ending the world is ending the world is ending the world is ending the world is ending
I don't like the story never will. I sometimes come back and just read the reviews. At the start, I found it funny to read so many people dissing and being appalled at the story's content, but the more I read the more appalled I got how many people started cursing the author and suggesting psychiatrists, mental health issues, and even suicide. If at first, it read like ribbing the author now it just reads as another case of cyberbullying. I myself am a curious person and read some of it. I even at first expected the story to be a joke and find only wasda<afasf as content. But it is exactly as described in the synopsis and written in okayish English, none the less if you are into some really weird kinky fetish stuff the story may be a worthwhile read. I myself capitulated 3 chapters into the story, skimmed 8 more chapters, and fled. Normally I would give this story at most 3 stars due to my bias because seriously on preference alone I would only give 1 star, but objectively the story isn't bad only for persons with special taste. I gave 4 stars because the many 1 stars are from an objective point simply false. The story is no literal masterpiece but it is written in for a fanfiction good English, it at least has a plot and isn't only por*n and builds its own world with summoned characters, where most fanfictions don't even accomplish more than a tiny bit of original plot.
You forgat the gay tag bro.............. . ........................................................_________________-_-_-____________-_____--_--__-__-
I demand more chapters now, and drop this am I will hunt your 37 generations 😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠
This story is sick ............................-----------'----'-----#'....,,,,,,,.,,...,,,,,,,......,.,,,,,,,,,......,,..........,..,.,,..,..
hahahaha, very interesting story I hope the author does not abandon it............................................................................
☁🏃☁☁☁🎁☁ ☁☁🍄🍄🍄☁☁ ☁🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄☁ 🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄 🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄 ☁☁🍦🍦🍦☁☁ ☁☁🍦🍦🍦☁☁ 🐢☁🍦🍦🍦☁🚩 ☁🏃☁☁☁🎁☁ ☁☁🍄🍄🍄☁☁ ☁🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄☁ 🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄 🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄🍄 ☁☁🍦🍦🍦☁☁ ☁☁🍦🍦🍦☁☁ 🐢☁🍦🍦🍦☁🚩
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Honest review, i dont know why i like it, maybe its unique and have anime but honestly idk still goood, i mean its wierd and gay, im a 98% straight man but that 2% is liking this
._. I am completely speechless after reading the description, for 3 years I have not seen anything of this level of perversion in these cursed lands. after that description I am curious about this. It shouldn't be worse than that story where a woman pleasured herself with a fetus inside a condom (that woman's child)
Keep writing what you love, the book description Teold you what it’s About 5 stars ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Lol keep On keeping On ………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..
What ever you're on to make you write this, I want some of it too. Man this is crackfic on another level. And just for laugh, I will give you 5 stars.
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Im a man, now im questioning my sexuality or maybe discovered my fetish.....anyway the writing is good for a novel like this the character is kinda good, while the authors update is quick, how the plot goes is good the world backround is unique and somewhat expected, while the mc character is kindgood but i suggest make him a dignified degenerate king his a king after all , make him domineering king, on other hand how he talks to other character is sometimes cringy, overall good.
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