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I was hooked as soon it said "no harem". Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Goo!
I really liked this project, but there are mistakes that spoil it. 1) The strength of the protagonist changes almost every time in different battles. 2) Too little plot in the project. 3) There are few characters, and the existing characters are not well revealed.
imma give it a hard 3 because I read the author's other works before. but this? it disappoints me... to be honest it's "white bread". didn't live up to my expectations too.
Great fanfic but i wanted Querehsha and mc to be tgt too. Made my hopes up when u suggested both Esil and her with mc but then decided Esil. Can author still add her in? Cause it would be interesting as you can shape her the way you want idk maybe a yandere? So it would be pretty easy for her to join. (2 girls is not rlly a harem) Please~ author onii-chan~🥺🥰
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No Harem, thanks 🙏🏼 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Thank you so much I’ve been looking for a good gate guardian book forever It’s good I recommend It. The only thing wrong with it is I wish there was more chapters!!!!!!!!!
This has gotten my attention... Hope you continue as this holds promise... Good job with whats been written already! Wish to see more and how the story develops!
5 stars because it doesn't have harem . . . . . . , ... . ... .. . . .. , .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
A good story, but the plot hasn't really started as of chapter 11 so I will limit my review to other things. Slight spoilers ahead: I liked how informations were given in this opening act. It was done smoothly and depicting a clear picture, but for now we know little about the protagonist: he his capable in his original job, powerful but not because of his own achievement and a good guy willing to be an hunter, even if not out of necessity. If on one end his powers and actions are well contextualised they still left me hanging for knowing more about his personality and what drives his choices. For now we also lack any form of conflict or/and an antagonist; but as said before the story just started and these thing will follow. All in all I've enjoyed reading so far and my critique is just to make use of this review to possibly contribute in my small part to the development of a good story. So I hope we will get some more dialogue and POV different from narration in order to make this feel more personal and emotional. thanks for writing 👍 P.S. Take this with I grain of salt: I'm not a writer
your fic has a future, can't wait for when the shadow monarch's time comes (sung ji woo) and you want a review? To tell the truth I don't have much to say if it's to talk about points I think it would be more words per chapter and maybe povs I like to know what another character thinks about mc and what his presence does in people's minds consecutively changing the plot, but as it's way behind the canon it doesn't need to for now, your fic is VERY good and with potential I hope to see more of this beauty, as I said before you just need to improve the word count. PS: I made this review because I want this extra chapter and I WILL take it home
Though I still don't understand the reason people want Queresha to be the love interest (She is an evil monarch...). The story is very good and is especially interesting because the author incorporated a new power system, of an SCP, into Solo Leveling. Have never seen that in a Solo Leveling FF (and not in many others) and it's really well done up to now . Keep up👍
doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko doko doko doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko doko doko
good story so far with good development, story telling, good grammar and good character development and the most important of all . . . . . . . . QUERESHASA!!!!!!!!!
I like this.very good but Little.Good luck////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
querehsha👍..............................................................................................................................................................................
I was hooked as soon it said "no harem". Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Giggity Goo!
I really liked this project, but there are mistakes that spoil it. 1) The strength of the protagonist changes almost every time in different battles. 2) Too little plot in the project. 3) There are few characters, and the existing characters are not well revealed.
imma give it a hard 3 because I read the author's other works before. but this? it disappoints me... to be honest it's "white bread". didn't live up to my expectations too.
Great fanfic but i wanted Querehsha and mc to be tgt too. Made my hopes up when u suggested both Esil and her with mc but then decided Esil. Can author still add her in? Cause it would be interesting as you can shape her the way you want idk maybe a yandere? So it would be pretty easy for her to join. (2 girls is not rlly a harem) Please~ author onii-chan~🥺🥰
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No Harem, thanks 🙏🏼 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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ネタバレを明かす Thank you so much I’ve been looking for a good gate guardian book forever It’s good I recommend It. The only thing wrong with it is I wish there was more chapters!!!!!!!!!
This has gotten my attention... Hope you continue as this holds promise... Good job with whats been written already! Wish to see more and how the story develops!
5 stars because it doesn't have harem . . . . . . , ... . ... .. . . .. , .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
A good story, but the plot hasn't really started as of chapter 11 so I will limit my review to other things. Slight spoilers ahead: I liked how informations were given in this opening act. It was done smoothly and depicting a clear picture, but for now we know little about the protagonist: he his capable in his original job, powerful but not because of his own achievement and a good guy willing to be an hunter, even if not out of necessity. If on one end his powers and actions are well contextualised they still left me hanging for knowing more about his personality and what drives his choices. For now we also lack any form of conflict or/and an antagonist; but as said before the story just started and these thing will follow. All in all I've enjoyed reading so far and my critique is just to make use of this review to possibly contribute in my small part to the development of a good story. So I hope we will get some more dialogue and POV different from narration in order to make this feel more personal and emotional. thanks for writing 👍 P.S. Take this with I grain of salt: I'm not a writer
your fic has a future, can't wait for when the shadow monarch's time comes (sung ji woo) and you want a review? To tell the truth I don't have much to say if it's to talk about points I think it would be more words per chapter and maybe povs I like to know what another character thinks about mc and what his presence does in people's minds consecutively changing the plot, but as it's way behind the canon it doesn't need to for now, your fic is VERY good and with potential I hope to see more of this beauty, as I said before you just need to improve the word count. PS: I made this review because I want this extra chapter and I WILL take it home
Though I still don't understand the reason people want Queresha to be the love interest (She is an evil monarch...). The story is very good and is especially interesting because the author incorporated a new power system, of an SCP, into Solo Leveling. Have never seen that in a Solo Leveling FF (and not in many others) and it's really well done up to now . Keep up👍
doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko doko doko doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko don doko doko doko doko
good story so far with good development, story telling, good grammar and good character development and the most important of all . . . . . . . . QUERESHASA!!!!!!!!!
I like this.very good but Little.Good luck////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
querehsha👍..............................................................................................................................................................................
This was amazing. I hope this gets continued one day.