Zahage

The MC hit him in the face too... you wrote that...

so let me get this straight, the troll that was punched multiple time with sich strength was practically ok...the same troll that fainted from his own club falling on his head from what, 1m?! This chapter was just straight stupid

Chapter beginning made zero sense, he supposedly rented a room for a day, even if we assume he didn't stay the entire time in the system space, the time in the system space is 1000 years per 1 h in real world, so he stayed severely thousand years in his system space and is still this weak? If he didn't stay that long than him being kicked out of his room makes no sense because he couldn't have stayed for a day otherwise... so to sum it up, this chapter is bs

But isn't his reaction to meeting Arthur then strange, I mean he apparently does remenmber Arthur considering he hates him so much and when Arthur first appeared the MC said 'it was he a voice he didn't want to hear again' or something like that. I mean I am not opposed to introducing Arthur to the story (after all It's still your story) and the Player Manwha is cool as heck, it's just that I it seemed a bit inconsistent with the backgzround of the MC having already some supernatural experiences and his reaction to transmigration and his meeting with the strange being that transmigrated him. Of course if he didn't remenmber Arthur in like he doesn't remember anything supernatural ever happening than it would probably be ok. Now this is more personal preference, I would have found it cooler if he still had his memories and didn't take Ichigos power and the Omnitrix but got an Ego weapon instedad (and maybe some other characters power). The concept of the Omnitrix in stories is also something I look at with caution considering it's inconsistent power levels, I mean if somebody had the fully unlocked Omnitrix, there would be no more point in choosing any lower level Alien, I mean Alien X is OP but there is the drawback that it's really difificult to get it to do anything, but there is no point choosing any weak alien, exept mabe the one species Azmuth is from for it's IQ. My point being, while I think the Omnitrix only useful depending on the universe the user is in (except Alien X) so choosing it is never really smart if you don't know the universe you are going...

For one his denial after he transmigrated or even him thinking evzerything was a dream. That reaction doesn't make much sense to me. Second is his apparent lack of combat experience. From Arthurs words it can be seen that he should have fought many battles in the past not to mention in the second chapter (or first?) it was said that the MC gained Ichigos memories. Considering all of that I find his struggle in the first challenge a bit weird and generally his fight give (at least to me) the impression that .he is very inexperienced

The first part of the chapter with Arthur from Player made no sense considering the earlier chapters...

Why is he addressing Tang Wulin as "Tang". That doesn't make sense it's his last name and I thought they were supposed to be friends, he should address him as "Wulin"

Nope you are right the ending of the last chapter and this chapter are not properly connected