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Honestly I should have have just listened to the critic reviews. The story is overall well put together with pretty good grammar and story development. Things are fine until chapter 49, but it isn't NTR like people are saying. It simply comes down to the author changing their mind about Moka being in the MCs harem, but the way its done feels like a massive betrayal to the readers. The author set expectations for Moka to join the MCs harem, built them up very well, but got chapter 49 and basically did a 180. Basically the author tells the readers Lith can't see Moka that way because she was a 'daughter figure', but turns around and makes Moka fall in love with her 'brother figure' in a few sentences. I get it author, you changed your mind and thats fine... but tell us how it happened. It was basically 'his son's blood tastes good too (100+ years timeskip) Moka loves his son now' ggez
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Muy buena la historia, siempre que leo fanfiction de dxd son de la misma edad que los protagonistas, y leer algo distinto y bien escrito es bastante agradable. Siga con el buena trabajo un saludo.
This review is until chapter 51. I don’t know if the FF improve after this chapter. I recommend to read until chapter 49 before read the spoiler section. Writing Quality: 4/5 Some grammar error but it fine, I can understand. (I not native English speaker so I have a lot of those mistakes) Stability of Updates: 3/5 There is no visible schedule for updates. Story Development: 4/5 It’s good, sometimes It feel a little faster and you cannot understand what is happening but overall, it fine, most of the times you will have no problems understanding what the MC is doing and how the world is moving. World Background: 4/5 It feels good, I mean, the author makes some changes to fix a character on the story, also he make some original events on the story explain why things are like this. This is the spoiler section… Character Design: 3/5 Most of the character are from the canon or another animes, so don’t expect a lot of original character. Now the problem is… on chapter 49… this is a Before and After for this FF for most of us. I suggests you read till chapter 49 before continue reading because I don’t feel it’s a bad FF. Everything until this chapter was good for this point, means a lot of character development (at least more than other ff I have read) Well… the problem is, in the story the author put 2 characters most of us love, Moka from Rosario+Vampire and Milim from Tensura, there are in the peerage of the MC and everything seems to say both of them will be on the MC’s Harem (yeah, DxD ff without harem is not a DxD ff), but its not like this. Both of them will be in the MC’s son harem… well it could be fine if it’s only Milim (she never goes seriously for the MC) but Moka has another history… When MC “found” Moka she was a baby, so one of the excuses is the MC see Moka as a daughter/sister but the story tells us that Moka was in love with the MC (one side) then MC’s son born and her feelings change like nothing… years of feelings disappears because MC’s son has some potential and good blood... it makes me feels if Moka doesn’t get on a relationship with MC’s son soon he will have a son and she will fall in love with his son because he (the MC’s grandson) has better blood. The point is not that a character we love found another love interest but the story behind it was bad, there is no explanation or development of this change only bad excuses. Also, until this chapter we know nothing of this character except that his is the MC’s son, has a good potential and good blood taste for vampires… is like a heroine from the story goes to a relationship with a mob character. I feel after chapters of development of a character in one chapter everything goes to the trash can and change without reason.
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The story in itself is interesting, good writing quality compared to most story. The main problem I have is with the MC's son, since his appearance, the story have gone down a lot. It's the first time I wish for a character to die to further the MC develoment.
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Hello Theren, this is an super-nice fanfic, I will watch author's career with great interest. Although I think a lot of the crossovers are unnecessary and weird. Elsa, Ana, Erza/Escarlet, Raven and Gwen Tennynson? They have nothing to do with the DxD universe. I would understand if it was Fate or Danmachi, or even RWBY, depending on the context, but these 5 characters I mentioned don't fit right into the DxD universe.
Very clear 5 stars! The story about the territory and the structure of the characters are unique! Please keep it up! I look forward to every chapter!
This is definitely a Top Si Dxd Fanfic and Arguably all around the best Dxd fic, The World building is strong (my favorite parts), the Character Interactions is quite fun to. The only thing i didn't like is how mc just curbstomps the enemies he fights (Haven't read the Thor vs Mc)
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This is extremely good and became one of my favorite novels. Author, you are amazing and have mad talent.
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I'll be straight up honest bruh, everything was like 4-5 stars up till chapter 50, that's where everything started going downhill, bro got us attached to characters like da Vinci and Moka and just kinda gave them to other dudes, Mike to his son and Vinci to azazel MIGHT also have his other kids under his first son in thier peerage which he said he might to, if he does its just gonna go down even more, everything just had a downgrade, everything's forced and kinda bland now and characters(some)are doing some weird personality swap all the time
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Overall I love this novel the characters are good the mc is good I like the period it is set in and no perverted idiot named issie and other then a few spelling errors here and there the novel is excellent
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The build up over a certain relationship just to let it go left a bad taste. Should’ve listened to the comments and stayed away.
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Honestly I should have have just listened to the critic reviews. The story is overall well put together with pretty good grammar and story development. Things are fine until chapter 49, but it isn't NTR like people are saying. It simply comes down to the author changing their mind about Moka being in the MCs harem, but the way its done feels like a massive betrayal to the readers. The author set expectations for Moka to join the MCs harem, built them up very well, but got chapter 49 and basically did a 180. Basically the author tells the readers Lith can't see Moka that way because she was a 'daughter figure', but turns around and makes Moka fall in love with her 'brother figure' in a few sentences. I get it author, you changed your mind and thats fine... but tell us how it happened. It was basically 'his son's blood tastes good too (100+ years timeskip) Moka loves his son now' ggez
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Muy buena la historia, siempre que leo fanfiction de dxd son de la misma edad que los protagonistas, y leer algo distinto y bien escrito es bastante agradable. Siga con el buena trabajo un saludo.
This review is until chapter 51. I don’t know if the FF improve after this chapter. I recommend to read until chapter 49 before read the spoiler section. Writing Quality: 4/5 Some grammar error but it fine, I can understand. (I not native English speaker so I have a lot of those mistakes) Stability of Updates: 3/5 There is no visible schedule for updates. Story Development: 4/5 It’s good, sometimes It feel a little faster and you cannot understand what is happening but overall, it fine, most of the times you will have no problems understanding what the MC is doing and how the world is moving. World Background: 4/5 It feels good, I mean, the author makes some changes to fix a character on the story, also he make some original events on the story explain why things are like this. This is the spoiler section… Character Design: 3/5 Most of the character are from the canon or another animes, so don’t expect a lot of original character. Now the problem is… on chapter 49… this is a Before and After for this FF for most of us. I suggests you read till chapter 49 before continue reading because I don’t feel it’s a bad FF. Everything until this chapter was good for this point, means a lot of character development (at least more than other ff I have read) Well… the problem is, in the story the author put 2 characters most of us love, Moka from Rosario+Vampire and Milim from Tensura, there are in the peerage of the MC and everything seems to say both of them will be on the MC’s Harem (yeah, DxD ff without harem is not a DxD ff), but its not like this. Both of them will be in the MC’s son harem… well it could be fine if it’s only Milim (she never goes seriously for the MC) but Moka has another history… When MC “found” Moka she was a baby, so one of the excuses is the MC see Moka as a daughter/sister but the story tells us that Moka was in love with the MC (one side) then MC’s son born and her feelings change like nothing… years of feelings disappears because MC’s son has some potential and good blood... it makes me feels if Moka doesn’t get on a relationship with MC’s son soon he will have a son and she will fall in love with his son because he (the MC’s grandson) has better blood. The point is not that a character we love found another love interest but the story behind it was bad, there is no explanation or development of this change only bad excuses. Also, until this chapter we know nothing of this character except that his is the MC’s son, has a good potential and good blood taste for vampires… is like a heroine from the story goes to a relationship with a mob character. I feel after chapters of development of a character in one chapter everything goes to the trash can and change without reason.
ネタバレを明かす The story in itself is interesting, good writing quality compared to most story. The main problem I have is with the MC's son, since his appearance, the story have gone down a lot. It's the first time I wish for a character to die to further the MC develoment.
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Absolutely love this. This story is a hidden gem. The best DxD fanfic that I ever read. Keep up the good work author.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Hello Theren, this is an super-nice fanfic, I will watch author's career with great interest. Although I think a lot of the crossovers are unnecessary and weird. Elsa, Ana, Erza/Escarlet, Raven and Gwen Tennynson? They have nothing to do with the DxD universe. I would understand if it was Fate or Danmachi, or even RWBY, depending on the context, but these 5 characters I mentioned don't fit right into the DxD universe.
Very clear 5 stars! The story about the territory and the structure of the characters are unique! Please keep it up! I look forward to every chapter!
This is definitely a Top Si Dxd Fanfic and Arguably all around the best Dxd fic, The World building is strong (my favorite parts), the Character Interactions is quite fun to. The only thing i didn't like is how mc just curbstomps the enemies he fights (Haven't read the Thor vs Mc)
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The Best DxD Fanfic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is extremely good and became one of my favorite novels. Author, you are amazing and have mad talent.
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I'll be straight up honest bruh, everything was like 4-5 stars up till chapter 50, that's where everything started going downhill, bro got us attached to characters like da Vinci and Moka and just kinda gave them to other dudes, Mike to his son and Vinci to azazel MIGHT also have his other kids under his first son in thier peerage which he said he might to, if he does its just gonna go down even more, everything just had a downgrade, everything's forced and kinda bland now and characters(some)are doing some weird personality swap all the time
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Overall I love this novel the characters are good the mc is good I like the period it is set in and no perverted idiot named issie and other then a few spelling errors here and there the novel is excellent
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Its a fun read. Keep up the good work. Thanks for writing this. .............................................................................................................................
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The build up over a certain relationship just to let it go left a bad taste. Should’ve listened to the comments and stayed away.