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at least add a black clover tag bro, absolutely I have no idea how to find this fanfic and it's about black clover.......................................................................................................
This fanfic was so so, not that good but definitely not bad. The author wrote a note in his first chapter that he has made some mistakes in this fanfic and he doesn't recommend anyone to read it, but so far till chapter 53 I haven't found any mistakes or something like that
Как по мне получилось довольно прекрасно. Продолжай в том же духе. Успехов!!!!!!! [изображе[изображение = обновление][изображение = обновление][изображение = обновление]
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Regardless of what others are saying (especially about the romance aspect) I enjoy this story very much. I like mc’s personality and his relationship with his wives. I enjoy romance in stories like this and I will most certainly continue to read it. Good luck to you and Godspeed mr author. :)
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i only read till 20th chapter so i don't really know what happens later but till than the story was sh8, but i enjoyed reading ur novel anyway, so, thanks.
Es muy entretenido el fanfic y es agradable la personalidad del mc una de las pocas en la que si sigue su personalidad como debe ser y no de comportarse como un niño como duele pasar en muchas otras
The writing quality is pretty good its very easy to read with little to no mistakes. You update more than most people do a month. The characters feels really dull and lifeless. Asta doesn't even say their name. It's just "Wife", no saying their real names just wife. Then his wives don't call him his name just "Husband. Then he got all of the harem members so fast no real meaning full development. I like who the harem members are but you need to make them have a better love life than just "HuSbAnD" or "WiFe" The background is a harem black clover i just wish it was better
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Great novel, this is one of the best black clover fanfic that i have ever read. Every character feels like they have life and emotions. Even Yuno who somehow became an arrogant and villain at first got his redemption and have someone who loves him. Every character too have its own story. The battles are great too and exciting. So for me this is 5 stars. Please keep up the good work👍👍👍👍
lol one more chapter and it will be at 69! also great novel don't drop and take breaks if you want.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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I just have one question.....do you have Nero as a wife? my friend here wanting to know...
The story is going well but sometimes the author does make sometime someplace to be confusing and it is make me almost lose interest, keep up the good work✌✌✌✌
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everything is good but have space for improvement, there are some grammatical errors, and sometimes it doesn't explain what happened or why it happens.
Pleasant reading! ............................................................................................................
It’s very difficult for me to explain how I feel about this ff it’s not the best but it’s better than most. From what it seems the author sped up the beginning to fast to the point where there wasn’t enough character interaction for me it just seems that the novel started on a wrong foot and it’s foundation is very rocky but other than that it’s fine but I don’t really want to read it anymore because it simply feels rushed and not all together
I write this review as one of the thousands of notices that I put, I suppose that if they read it, first of all it is an alternate universe where I will do everything to my liking, and also things would develop quite quickly because more than a fanfic it is a project I'm doing to learn some things. If you don't like things to unfold too quickly or anything typical, don't even bother reading.
Guys I made several mistakes in this ff, so i do not recommend to read it I was considering this as a learning project and I made a lot of mistakes and that's a big reason why I don't recommend reading it.
at least add a black clover tag bro, absolutely I have no idea how to find this fanfic and it's about black clover.......................................................................................................
This fanfic was so so, not that good but definitely not bad. The author wrote a note in his first chapter that he has made some mistakes in this fanfic and he doesn't recommend anyone to read it, but so far till chapter 53 I haven't found any mistakes or something like that
Как по мне получилось довольно прекрасно. Продолжай в том же духе. Успехов!!!!!!! [изображе[изображение = обновление][изображение = обновление][изображение = обновление]
Me encanta esta novela, te daré todas mis piedras! :vvvvv [img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Regardless of what others are saying (especially about the romance aspect) I enjoy this story very much. I like mc’s personality and his relationship with his wives. I enjoy romance in stories like this and I will most certainly continue to read it. Good luck to you and Godspeed mr author. :)
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i only read till 20th chapter so i don't really know what happens later but till than the story was sh8, but i enjoyed reading ur novel anyway, so, thanks.
Es muy entretenido el fanfic y es agradable la personalidad del mc una de las pocas en la que si sigue su personalidad como debe ser y no de comportarse como un niño como duele pasar en muchas otras
The writing quality is pretty good its very easy to read with little to no mistakes. You update more than most people do a month. The characters feels really dull and lifeless. Asta doesn't even say their name. It's just "Wife", no saying their real names just wife. Then his wives don't call him his name just "Husband. Then he got all of the harem members so fast no real meaning full development. I like who the harem members are but you need to make them have a better love life than just "HuSbAnD" or "WiFe" The background is a harem black clover i just wish it was better
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Great novel, this is one of the best black clover fanfic that i have ever read. Every character feels like they have life and emotions. Even Yuno who somehow became an arrogant and villain at first got his redemption and have someone who loves him. Every character too have its own story. The battles are great too and exciting. So for me this is 5 stars. Please keep up the good work👍👍👍👍
lol one more chapter and it will be at 69! also great novel don't drop and take breaks if you want.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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I just have one question.....do you have Nero as a wife? my friend here wanting to know...
The story is going well but sometimes the author does make sometime someplace to be confusing and it is make me almost lose interest, keep up the good work✌✌✌✌
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everything is good but have space for improvement, there are some grammatical errors, and sometimes it doesn't explain what happened or why it happens.
Pleasant reading! ............................................................................................................
It’s very difficult for me to explain how I feel about this ff it’s not the best but it’s better than most. From what it seems the author sped up the beginning to fast to the point where there wasn’t enough character interaction for me it just seems that the novel started on a wrong foot and it’s foundation is very rocky but other than that it’s fine but I don’t really want to read it anymore because it simply feels rushed and not all together
I write this review as one of the thousands of notices that I put, I suppose that if they read it, first of all it is an alternate universe where I will do everything to my liking, and also things would develop quite quickly because more than a fanfic it is a project I'm doing to learn some things. If you don't like things to unfold too quickly or anything typical, don't even bother reading.
Guys I made several mistakes in this ff, so i do not recommend to read it I was considering this as a learning project and I made a lot of mistakes and that's a big reason why I don't recommend reading it.