127レビュー
4.74
- テキストの品質
- アップデートの安定性
- ストーリー展開
- キャラクターデザイン
- 世界の背景
あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください
レビューを書く
It's a nice fic, grammar is very good. However, since the MC foreshadows a lot through the Force, there aren't really any problems which makes you realise that he doesn't have to overcome any hurdles in the course of the story. Otherwise recommendable.
I highly recommend this book, I've already read it multiple times and I'm still reading it.
this story had the whole plate a perfect beginning with lots of twist of adventure and character development with a heartwarming conclusion to end it.
I really liked this version of Game of thornes even though the MC was very overpowered.
it was good. Normaly fanfics are too over the head with plots, but this one was pleasant.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This was such an awesome read and I wish I had found it much earlier than I did today
it was written well enough for me to consider it one of the best novel if not for the part where he keeps saying he is a dragon but he is not arrogant. in fact i consider him to patient and forgiving that he sound like a saint. it just didn't sit right with me especially if dooku was his master a sith. what kind of discipline over pride do you possess to not kill or torture someone who openly insults you infront of alot of people. just because you dont want to be seen a going mad doesn't mean you cant get angry or cruel. any way this is jist my personal opinion. other may find the mc's ways appropriate. that's about my only problem so i stopped at chapter 39. good luck
Excellent book and good job completing it as most don’t. Worth the read for any fan
I have absolutely nothing bad to say about this other than jon not finding a way to leave the planet and enter the galaxy a be a potential player in star wars, but this was always meant to be a just GoT ff with certain elements of SW. I really enjoyed it , the chapters were long so while there may have only been 74 chapters...compared to most stories, it would probably be double. I would say his ability to use the force to look into the past and future may be a little op but if you consider yoda could do it too within an instant then maybe not?
He didn’t really do much his power carried him heavy. Everyone fell so easily he could Have made it more interesting bye making him conquer more lands n find new magic or somehting but I guess it was ok.
I loved it a relatively short but well-told story, a more than satisfactory experience ........................................................................
it was an honor to read this masterpiece. This is one of the best GoT fanfics out there.
One of the best GOT fanfics that I've read with an actual ending. With its own twist of bringing the force into in a modest way allowing Jon to use "magic" that dosent break the story.
Anyone know how much of the Maester/Bloodraven story lines are made up by the author? I’m far from a GOT superfan, but I don’t remember anything about those from the books or the show.
Decent writing, very readable. MC does become OP near the start by Star Wars influence. The story is fast and there are sudden info dumps, which can be unpleasant. GoT AU. Overall, decent.
It's a nice fic, grammar is very good. However, since the MC foreshadows a lot through the Force, there aren't really any problems which makes you realise that he doesn't have to overcome any hurdles in the course of the story. Otherwise recommendable.
I highly recommend this book, I've already read it multiple times and I'm still reading it.
this story had the whole plate a perfect beginning with lots of twist of adventure and character development with a heartwarming conclusion to end it.
I really liked this version of Game of thornes even though the MC was very overpowered.
it was good. Normaly fanfics are too over the head with plots, but this one was pleasant.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This was such an awesome read and I wish I had found it much earlier than I did today
it was written well enough for me to consider it one of the best novel if not for the part where he keeps saying he is a dragon but he is not arrogant. in fact i consider him to patient and forgiving that he sound like a saint. it just didn't sit right with me especially if dooku was his master a sith. what kind of discipline over pride do you possess to not kill or torture someone who openly insults you infront of alot of people. just because you dont want to be seen a going mad doesn't mean you cant get angry or cruel. any way this is jist my personal opinion. other may find the mc's ways appropriate. that's about my only problem so i stopped at chapter 39. good luck
Excellent book and good job completing it as most don’t. Worth the read for any fan
I have absolutely nothing bad to say about this other than jon not finding a way to leave the planet and enter the galaxy a be a potential player in star wars, but this was always meant to be a just GoT ff with certain elements of SW. I really enjoyed it , the chapters were long so while there may have only been 74 chapters...compared to most stories, it would probably be double. I would say his ability to use the force to look into the past and future may be a little op but if you consider yoda could do it too within an instant then maybe not?
He didn’t really do much his power carried him heavy. Everyone fell so easily he could Have made it more interesting bye making him conquer more lands n find new magic or somehting but I guess it was ok.
I loved it a relatively short but well-told story, a more than satisfactory experience ........................................................................
it was an honor to read this masterpiece. This is one of the best GoT fanfics out there.
One of the best GOT fanfics that I've read with an actual ending. With its own twist of bringing the force into in a modest way allowing Jon to use "magic" that dosent break the story.
Anyone know how much of the Maester/Bloodraven story lines are made up by the author? I’m far from a GOT superfan, but I don’t remember anything about those from the books or the show.
Decent writing, very readable. MC does become OP near the start by Star Wars influence. The story is fast and there are sudden info dumps, which can be unpleasant. GoT AU. Overall, decent.