Atryuss

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Atryuss
Atryuss
1 months ago
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"It doesn't sound bad. Kung Fu is for everyone but Rapunzel. Are you sure about that? If we train you, we will show no mercy." Jin seriously said to Rapunzel. In fact, he has long wanted to train her but he doesn't know if she would like it.

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

Movies · SlimeSage

Atryuss
Atryuss
1 months ago
Commented

i will read "Sparky" no matter what.

Atryuss
Atryuss
1 months ago
Commented

He will write the adaptationof Basilisk.

The story would follow two protagonists. Rival clans. A blood feud. Enemies forced to work together after their clans are nearly wiped out. 

Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius

Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius

Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday

Atryuss
Atryuss
1 months ago
Replied to AgoodbookIread

fells like the plot of Basilisk

They hate each other, of course, but that hatred turns into something neither of them expects. Slow-burn romance. Forbidden love. Make the readers work for it. 

Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius

Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius

Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday

Atryuss
Atryuss
1 months ago
Commented

My personal opinion, is that you lost me with that whole transformation into a "half-demon" like entity. It dehumanized the caracter... made it less relateble.

Atryuss
Atryuss
2 months ago
Commented

why not just have children, they wpuld be half elves, no?

Atryuss
Atryuss
2 months ago
Commented

Man, that wad hard to read. Good, but hard. It was a great change, cause Aldir interfearence in the story should cause some damage too.

Atryuss
Atryuss
3 months ago
Commented

Mine is Jan 1° too, but from 94.

Gwen blinked at the notification, before filling that area out, as January 1st, 1993. After that, it was the birthplace that was the problem, noticing her hesitation, Gordon glanced at the paper before speaking "Just place it as Gotham kid, I'll deal with the rest" Hearing this, Gwen gave the man a grateful nod, and filled the final parts of the form out.

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_

Atryuss
Atryuss
5 months ago
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"It's nice to meet you, Mr. Cullen, though not the best timing, I guess," he said, scratching his head awkwardly.

Twilight: Rebirth

Twilight: Rebirth

Movies · DumbedDown

Atryuss
Atryuss
7 months ago
Posted

it was good. Normaly fanfics are too over the head with plots, but this one was pleasant.

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