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The long lost daughter

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作者: Anusha14

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Thor never knew his daughter, she was taken from him the moment her mother held her in her arms. It was during the battle of Ragnarok, that Allison foster came to life at 3:15 A.M on September 15. While the father she never knew, was busy defending his planet and people, she cried for the first time. Her mother made sure that no one ever found out about her, the reason being that it would be too dangerous for her, she would inherit all of her father's enemies. Thus, the moment she was born she was sent to the Abbott children's home. The only thing she had remaining from her mother was the necklace she wore, a letter for when she turned 20 and a pink blanket used to wrap around her tiny body.
( Endgame and Infinity war never happen)
* None of the marvel characters belong to me! I only own Allison and her friends!

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No entiendo la trama. ¿De un momento a otro ella destruirlo una ciudad? ¿Que paso con su amiga? ¿Thor murió? Todavía no encuentro una "dirección" para leer esto PD: no digo nada de esto con mala intención, solo doy mi opinión deseando que mejores y crees capítulos más entendibles

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Son0fartemis_

The story is amazing and I am currently waiting for more. The way you brought out the feelings of thor's daughter and the fact she is so oblivious to her powers makes this interesting. I am curious to see how long her life span should be.

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so listen..this story is like you playing a game and finding random files of the past for a boring character. Mc is plain boring and truth she is a little idiot too. then what can i say about the story you have a father who wanna find his daughter, waste 25 chapter with useless talks and backround story's and when he is about to find her..the dauther kill him by accident plus she kills some thousands people more. totally very confusion story and very slow pace or with no reason at all. to much drama with out giving nothing to readers.

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