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At first as ive read the mix review i have some doubts but i was surprised 🙀 , i managed to finish this ff. It was great fic! Although there where some words that were spelled incorrectly or just some wrong words that was used but i dont think it was that big deal that the other reviews were talking about. Anyways, i know its 2y late hahaha and i just discovered this. So future readers just jump in. Thank you Author - san.
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Wonderful story 👏🏻ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Great story for one piece and author should put complete at the title 😁 Nejeekdkdidhejejehduxux6euenxkdidhcidjejduxjdjxjxjdixkxjxjxjdjejcucuduxixjdjdjxjxjjcdjejdjxjxjdjxjxjxidkdjdjcuxuejejdhdudjehdjjejeekxijddjdjxjdjdjdjxjkxdjdjdjdjjdkddkkxjdkxdkdkdkdk
A very good fanfiction novel in the One Piece AU. I very much loved this story since the plot is good and quiet interesting. The only thing that king of ruined it for me is the grammar which is simply going from bad to worse, and I really hope this fanfic gets an editor very soon to fix all this mistakes.... All in all if you don't mind the grammar then I recommend this fanfic to anyone who likes this gender.
It is a good read. Not completely accurate One Piece ff, however, it is interesting. Beside, All authors deserve respect for their dedication.
Just finish the novel. First [grammar] Its readable but author should have checked it for grammar error Second [18+ scene] Can't really imagine sa heroines of the story. How they express themselves how the interact have some difference in the anime. And the 18+ scenes are for some reason weird, doesnt actually feel something there. Third [last fight] That arc/scene is kinda bland. Even if you dont include it, it doesnt really matter
Even though the earlier chapter weren't so good but it just got better and more interesting i love it and sad that it ended so fast so thank you for the hard work 👌👌🔥📖💕💕💯💯
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Little better than average.... there is lot of problem here-- oh major one is every one piece girls falling in love with him quickly for apparently no reason... 2nd-- its good that he doesn;t kill inneccesarly but the problem is he never kill , he even not kill the vicious pirates even after in bounty hunting for long time... 3rd -- he is not cautious and take risks of life for his morals even if he knows that there will be better way if he wait or everything would be okey even if he didn't do anything still he risks his life and from all those the only thing he gets is a member of harem
Its a good novel, you should read it. You would feel a bit bored during the start but its worth it
One of the best completed OP fic. It's been a fun ride, can't say much since it's already completed anyway. Thanks Author!! Thanks Author!! Thanks Author!! Thanks Author!! Thanks Author!!
Esta muy bien, solo que limitó mucho el harem. Y se olvida o ignora varias chicas potenciales.(Viví, Shirahoshi, Perona, Rebecca, Baby5, Su primera jefa la cual nos dejó con la duda de su embarazo, Yamato, Hina, etc) Porque para fines prácticos no hay mucha diferencia de un harem de 9 chicas a uno de 20. Ni que el autor hubiera desarrollado tanto sus relaciones a como lo hizo con Mikita. En fin,mas allá de eso es un Fanfic entretenido.
One of the best one piece novels I have read, i would love if the story didn't end and he would keep traveling with his girls and children to different worlds.
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Can someone please explain how is this actually rated so high or am I just actually reading something totally different from all these reviews or is this straight up fake reviews or smth ???
Boa história para matar o tempo, obrigado ao escritor. Espero que escreva novas novels no futuro, porém tente melhorar um pouco na escrita, e errar um pouco menos nos nomes[que houve algumas vezes.]
there are few reviews i give and this is one among them. everything is fine but too much harem and op characters.... but it's like ok ok to read on free time.
Really really good story. The system is well used: at the start the MC has a good progression but that's because he makes real smart choices. For most of the story he faces strong ennemies relative to him; him putting his crew together throughout the story is also cool and the way he integrates himself with major events in One Piece is very well done. Only small problem is that he eventually becomes really REALLY OP but that's kind of expected from those stories and it still well done (even the penultimate fight of the story took me by surprise)
Just perfect, Great, Masterpiece material. Thank the author for giving me extraordinary times. The way the characters developed are really unique. The story is OP but he gained that 20 % of that Op by training and interesting to read.
to say that reading this has been a blast and i had fun and enjoyed every scene but the power scaling is really wonky.
Jajajajajaaj me fascinó me encanto la verdad esta historia fue muy buena aunque podrías haberlo alargado más pero bueno me entretuvo y divirtió bastante
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The MC is one of the biggest hypocrites I've even seen. Let's not even mention the problems in this fanfic like the awful writing quality, poorly managed harem/romance and the subbar usage of his system and powers.
writing quality 4/5 while the translation can be understood but the writing is still bad story development 1/5 it basically full on young master Harem route. like literally know girl, say she beautiful, sleep with her, know another girl, flirt with her, sleep with her, girl sick MC get pass to polygamy with 0 logic. and repeat. character design 3/5 the system' and MC grow is good not rushing become strong have a plot to actually become strong, the flaw is any girl MC look he can only think to bang her. side character have no character at all as long as MC happy side character happy. update 5/5 it already completed tho i cant even finish after chapter 49 or volume 1. world background 3/5 while it is good author giving in depth story in the beginning about baruque works and such but not much else cause he didnt even want to give explanation about any oc or other new background he add
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Wonderfully done. Good pace of story, good grammar, and interesting powers/choices. Also a relatively smart mc, and a functioning harem done well.
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At first as ive read the mix review i have some doubts but i was surprised 🙀 , i managed to finish this ff. It was great fic! Although there where some words that were spelled incorrectly or just some wrong words that was used but i dont think it was that big deal that the other reviews were talking about. Anyways, i know its 2y late hahaha and i just discovered this. So future readers just jump in. Thank you Author - san.
Спасибо, было очень интересно читать это произведение, мне оно очень понравилось [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wonderful story 👏🏻ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Great story for one piece and author should put complete at the title 😁 Nejeekdkdidhejejehduxux6euenxkdidhcidjejduxjdjxjxjdixkxjxjxjdjejcucuduxixjdjdjxjxjjcdjejdjxjxjdjxjxjxidkdjdjcuxuejejdhdudjehdjjejeekxijddjdjxjdjdjdjxjkxdjdjdjdjjdkddkkxjdkxdkdkdkdk
A very good fanfiction novel in the One Piece AU. I very much loved this story since the plot is good and quiet interesting. The only thing that king of ruined it for me is the grammar which is simply going from bad to worse, and I really hope this fanfic gets an editor very soon to fix all this mistakes.... All in all if you don't mind the grammar then I recommend this fanfic to anyone who likes this gender.
It is a good read. Not completely accurate One Piece ff, however, it is interesting. Beside, All authors deserve respect for their dedication.
Just finish the novel. First [grammar] Its readable but author should have checked it for grammar error Second [18+ scene] Can't really imagine sa heroines of the story. How they express themselves how the interact have some difference in the anime. And the 18+ scenes are for some reason weird, doesnt actually feel something there. Third [last fight] That arc/scene is kinda bland. Even if you dont include it, it doesnt really matter
Even though the earlier chapter weren't so good but it just got better and more interesting i love it and sad that it ended so fast so thank you for the hard work 👌👌🔥📖💕💕💯💯
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Little better than average.... there is lot of problem here-- oh major one is every one piece girls falling in love with him quickly for apparently no reason... 2nd-- its good that he doesn;t kill inneccesarly but the problem is he never kill , he even not kill the vicious pirates even after in bounty hunting for long time... 3rd -- he is not cautious and take risks of life for his morals even if he knows that there will be better way if he wait or everything would be okey even if he didn't do anything still he risks his life and from all those the only thing he gets is a member of harem
Its a good novel, you should read it. You would feel a bit bored during the start but its worth it
One of the best completed OP fic. It's been a fun ride, can't say much since it's already completed anyway. Thanks Author!! Thanks Author!! Thanks Author!! Thanks Author!! Thanks Author!!
Esta muy bien, solo que limitó mucho el harem. Y se olvida o ignora varias chicas potenciales.(Viví, Shirahoshi, Perona, Rebecca, Baby5, Su primera jefa la cual nos dejó con la duda de su embarazo, Yamato, Hina, etc) Porque para fines prácticos no hay mucha diferencia de un harem de 9 chicas a uno de 20. Ni que el autor hubiera desarrollado tanto sus relaciones a como lo hizo con Mikita. En fin,mas allá de eso es un Fanfic entretenido.
One of the best one piece novels I have read, i would love if the story didn't end and he would keep traveling with his girls and children to different worlds.
ネタバレを明かす Can someone please explain how is this actually rated so high or am I just actually reading something totally different from all these reviews or is this straight up fake reviews or smth ???
Boa história para matar o tempo, obrigado ao escritor. Espero que escreva novas novels no futuro, porém tente melhorar um pouco na escrita, e errar um pouco menos nos nomes[que houve algumas vezes.]
there are few reviews i give and this is one among them. everything is fine but too much harem and op characters.... but it's like ok ok to read on free time.
Really really good story. The system is well used: at the start the MC has a good progression but that's because he makes real smart choices. For most of the story he faces strong ennemies relative to him; him putting his crew together throughout the story is also cool and the way he integrates himself with major events in One Piece is very well done. Only small problem is that he eventually becomes really REALLY OP but that's kind of expected from those stories and it still well done (even the penultimate fight of the story took me by surprise)
Just perfect, Great, Masterpiece material. Thank the author for giving me extraordinary times. The way the characters developed are really unique. The story is OP but he gained that 20 % of that Op by training and interesting to read.
to say that reading this has been a blast and i had fun and enjoyed every scene but the power scaling is really wonky.
Jajajajajaaj me fascinó me encanto la verdad esta historia fue muy buena aunque podrías haberlo alargado más pero bueno me entretuvo y divirtió bastante
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The MC is one of the biggest hypocrites I've even seen. Let's not even mention the problems in this fanfic like the awful writing quality, poorly managed harem/romance and the subbar usage of his system and powers.
writing quality 4/5 while the translation can be understood but the writing is still bad story development 1/5 it basically full on young master Harem route. like literally know girl, say she beautiful, sleep with her, know another girl, flirt with her, sleep with her, girl sick MC get pass to polygamy with 0 logic. and repeat. character design 3/5 the system' and MC grow is good not rushing become strong have a plot to actually become strong, the flaw is any girl MC look he can only think to bang her. side character have no character at all as long as MC happy side character happy. update 5/5 it already completed tho i cant even finish after chapter 49 or volume 1. world background 3/5 while it is good author giving in depth story in the beginning about baruque works and such but not much else cause he didnt even want to give explanation about any oc or other new background he add
ネタバレを明かす Wonderfully done. Good pace of story, good grammar, and interesting powers/choices. Also a relatively smart mc, and a functioning harem done well.
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