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what happened? where are the chapters bruh? I remember reading this few months ago and I love it, and now I am planning rereading this but it's gone 😑😑😔
This is one of the best fanfics out there, I personally have reread this for atleast 5 times. As I was about to attempt my 6th, all of the chapters disappeared.. I am saddened by this fact so Author if you can, please bring back the chapters. Thank you.
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I just finished reading all the published chapters in 2 hours (84 chapters), and I got to say I could see how the author improved throughout the story gradually. Frankly, I've read so many fanfics of Naruto that I don't really care if the plot is moving with Canon or not. I really hope the author will continue to publish more chapters soon :)
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Oi Penulis! apakah novelmu ini berhenti? ah sial, tolong janganlah! katanya kalau sudah selesai ujian, novelmu bakalan dilanjutkan bab bab lainnya? ah tapi apa? itu hanya omong kosong belaka! sial!!
The concept is cool and the story is decent, the grammar is a pain though nad could be fixed with simple apps, mc has a weird way of being low key KEK( getting 1rst place and befriending naruto is kinda stupid ) and although I'm not sure he keeps it getting enma so early on would just be a death sentence ( also kami-E or paper art gets confused with tekkai sometimes ).
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Everything about this story is great😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Its a great fast moving read, i would definitely recommend. But it i lost interest after the boruto arc start, both because of the story and update speed/stability
I really really enjoy the overallstory, your writing style and the character developement. So smooth to read and enjoyable. Please don’t drop this it’s gold
what a bland fanfic, for those who hasn't read this yet then skip it, just go watch the original cause this is just a recap with additional character.
mc i want to be low key to avoid danzo , after a chapter the dude invite naruto to eat and become friend 0.0; ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Its been month since last update,waiting for chapters if u dropped it please do tell ….......................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............!!!!!!...
Nice! Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice! Next! NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Its decent to read, atleast is not annoying. How to be lowkey: 1.being the first place 2.befriend with naruto 3.pursue a clan girl Sigh
One of the best fan fic novels But there is a problem that the hero of our novel is almost unconquerable. I suggest adding a character from the other side who competes with the hero I also add a kind of mystery and make unexpected events to increase the reader's enthusiasm Finally, thanks for the good story
very good, especially after entering boruto MC It doesn't change because almost all fanfics that I read after having children the MC changes to their children, keep the spirit of updating...........
Im too actually write a review, the story os not bad but far from good. The mc is literally a babysitter. He involves himslef with naruto's battles. The mc also is naruto 2.0 but without the yelling, he follows all of canon and in love with naruto and sauske. Also the higher ups fo leaf village dont question him, tsudne asks how he cutted a biju bomb and he says his bloodline. No one questions his technquies, power, or how he got them, just move on like its normal. If you want to re experince the naruto anime, go read this novel.
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Waiting for release😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭please after u said 7 days still its not releasing i need ittt please😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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romance is well…. well, poorly finished, the idea is interesting, the content too, but it lacks depth, the speed of the story is very fast leaving out many aspects and summarizing long speeches in simple sentences, this leaves you with an interesting read, but not very relevant, you can enjoy this when you don't have anything to read and don't want to think too much.
I really like this story. Is there anywhere I can find it? I want to read it again. Even machine translation is acceptable.
what happened? where are the chapters bruh? I remember reading this few months ago and I love it, and now I am planning rereading this but it's gone 😑😑😔
This is one of the best fanfics out there, I personally have reread this for atleast 5 times. As I was about to attempt my 6th, all of the chapters disappeared.. I am saddened by this fact so Author if you can, please bring back the chapters. Thank you.
Badly written and cringe.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I just finished reading all the published chapters in 2 hours (84 chapters), and I got to say I could see how the author improved throughout the story gradually. Frankly, I've read so many fanfics of Naruto that I don't really care if the plot is moving with Canon or not. I really hope the author will continue to publish more chapters soon :)
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Oi Penulis! apakah novelmu ini berhenti? ah sial, tolong janganlah! katanya kalau sudah selesai ujian, novelmu bakalan dilanjutkan bab bab lainnya? ah tapi apa? itu hanya omong kosong belaka! sial!!
The concept is cool and the story is decent, the grammar is a pain though nad could be fixed with simple apps, mc has a weird way of being low key KEK( getting 1rst place and befriending naruto is kinda stupid ) and although I'm not sure he keeps it getting enma so early on would just be a death sentence ( also kami-E or paper art gets confused with tekkai sometimes ).
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Everything about this story is great😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Its a great fast moving read, i would definitely recommend. But it i lost interest after the boruto arc start, both because of the story and update speed/stability
I really really enjoy the overallstory, your writing style and the character developement. So smooth to read and enjoyable. Please don’t drop this it’s gold
what a bland fanfic, for those who hasn't read this yet then skip it, just go watch the original cause this is just a recap with additional character.
mc i want to be low key to avoid danzo , after a chapter the dude invite naruto to eat and become friend 0.0; ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Its been month since last update,waiting for chapters if u dropped it please do tell ….......................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............!!!!!!...
Nice! Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice! Next! NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT NEXT! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Its decent to read, atleast is not annoying. How to be lowkey: 1.being the first place 2.befriend with naruto 3.pursue a clan girl Sigh
One of the best fan fic novels But there is a problem that the hero of our novel is almost unconquerable. I suggest adding a character from the other side who competes with the hero I also add a kind of mystery and make unexpected events to increase the reader's enthusiasm Finally, thanks for the good story
very good, especially after entering boruto MC It doesn't change because almost all fanfics that I read after having children the MC changes to their children, keep the spirit of updating...........
Im too actually write a review, the story os not bad but far from good. The mc is literally a babysitter. He involves himslef with naruto's battles. The mc also is naruto 2.0 but without the yelling, he follows all of canon and in love with naruto and sauske. Also the higher ups fo leaf village dont question him, tsudne asks how he cutted a biju bomb and he says his bloodline. No one questions his technquies, power, or how he got them, just move on like its normal. If you want to re experince the naruto anime, go read this novel.
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES
Waiting for release😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭please after u said 7 days still its not releasing i need ittt please😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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romance is well…. well, poorly finished, the idea is interesting, the content too, but it lacks depth, the speed of the story is very fast leaving out many aspects and summarizing long speeches in simple sentences, this leaves you with an interesting read, but not very relevant, you can enjoy this when you don't have anything to read and don't want to think too much.
I really like this story. Is there anywhere I can find it? I want to read it again. Even machine translation is acceptable.