Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology

Bro you should take ideas from Chanakya arthshastra for warfare(not only physical but psychological war ) and not only copy techniques from modern world . You are writing about india. If you just implement all the foreign ideas in the kingdom and not something from Indian culture and wire something new, the book will just become a wish fulfilment type of Novel

1yr 49

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Vighnesh_Sahu_2841

brother it's a very good novel just upload frequently and beware of copyright issue as we have recently seen what happened when "the rise of Australia" (banned on web novel) when it became popular. show us a good time for the first time I have seen a proper edited novel on India. And you can gather information and plot building aspects from the above mentioned novel and the tyrant of steel, it's a good novel. Thank you for giving a new start to Indian rise novels.

1yr 35

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DaoistpirqtQ

I am amazed and excited upon the fact that someone is willing to write an Indian history and that too by being Transmigrated as one of the heirs of the Great Vijaya Nagara Empire I hope you will not abandon this

1yr 30

LV 2

Good story idea👍👍. I hope you will make the king more ruthless 👹👹to enemies and majestic as it is a medivial type of period and do not make it democratic only in The 17 the century. Also, try to let Mc participate in wars to develop a little warrior 🗡️🗡️personality also not only scholarly 👨‍🏫👨‍🏫type. Also in the story Mc is a king not a civil servant so he should not feel embarrassing when his subjects bow to him. Being overly kind to subjects will make them easily make selfish arguments and rebellion for power

1yr 27

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Chirashu_Jindal

Bro why did mc ban Gurukuls ? Isn't Vijaynagar a Hindu empire ? In his own empire, the mc cannot openly preach Hinduism. He had to stop other educational institution like churches etc to stops birth of foreign ideas and conversion but why gurukuls . And there is no proper explanation of education system. And there is no equality or secularism in 16 th century so that you have to do everything equal for Muslims also. Gurukuls were important parts of Hindu culture and you shut them down . I thing you are just colonising India like British only introducing foreign ideas. Now you will also start introducing ing Muslims in admiration also . Many still are not loyal to India in today's time and you are expecting them to be loyal in that time. Plz restart the gurukuls and place on restrictions on communities n harmful for empire. You don't have to worry over equality . You are not in peaceful timewhere you have to to introduce equal policies for all people. You are the king of an empire who have to expand empire either by force or peace and expel all anti Hindu people. Not please them on terms of equality like today's times . If the mcs cannot tolerate bloodshed give the control to other king and only act as a minister. In that time when Muslims rulers commit atrocities on non Muslims, you cannot win over people by peaceful means, mercy and without bloodshed. You have to be cruel to spill innocent blood also. Plz reply

11mth 13

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TREEHOUSE

India trash..🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

8mth 9

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Guardian_Of_Nexus

Just because you dare to write about ancient India. Here my five Star Review.No more words need....As suggestions can be given in chapter paragraphs too.Keep it up author 👍🐱

10mth 8

LV 2

Hey good story idea 👌.but there are some problems . You are just straight introducing reforms in every ch .Story is about india not Vijaynagar empire . You start a thing in a ch but do not show the consequences it has and there is no continuity in it . The king is harming the interests of the nobles and the nobles do not do anything and just sit. If it was the in reality , 😑 he would have been assassinated🗡️ in 2 months. Also the truth is that an empire is not formed by fairness and do not talk about equality in 17th century. And even in today's era there is no equality. On one side the British and Mughals are aggressively transforming Hindus and you want to give fairness to all Muslims(no grudge) .I am not talking about just killing people of other religions .Reforms should be slowly applied and not suddenly. He is just a newly crowned king and does not have enough prestige. Medicinal kingdoms do not work on justice but ⚔️.

1yr 8

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Gaurav_Singapore

if you are willing to upload frequently I will be your strong supporter author 🙏

1yr 7

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Mithun_ReddyGaru

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1yr 7

LV 4

John_Grace

The novel started as a good one but as time went on it actually because more interesting and addictive. The writing style of the author also improved significantly. And I think the best part of the novel is the main character's system or golden finger which again more of a supernatural power than a game style window which gives quests and rewards. His power allows him access modern day knowledge and impart them to others in a way that they would feel as if they have received an inspiration which will lessen the dependency to the mc in terms of technology and help in unique innovation of the particular sector.

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7mth 6

LV 4

gaurav_Kumar_1424

A good attempt at novel with Indian history. It leaves much to be desired( beware I am comparing with some of the very good novels on this app) but none the less an entertaining one. I would have loved it more if it was more detailed with clear show of hardship rather then a smooth sailing in start. Anyways good luck for your novel I appreciate the effort of more Indian content.

10mth 6

LV 4

SolaceViolet

I think I forgot to leave a review previously. Here is the 5 stars

1yr 6

LV 2

You should also make a spy network which is solely in control of king as there are many traitors or betrayers in the kingdom. In many cases, arms generals or nephews seize power and make the king a puppet ruler line fromn1542 to 1565 Rama raya made Sadasivam raya (the legal ruler) puppet ruler. In Battle of Talikota, which had seemed an easy victory for the large Vijayanagar army, instead became a disaster as two Muslim commanders (Gilani brothers) of the Vijayanagara army betrayed and switched sides and turned their loyalty to the united Sultanates during critical point of battle.

1yr 6

LV 4

SuryaputraKarna

A good novel, although it has some plot holes and some mistakes it is overall a noice novel. I guess i am a bit bias cause it is a novel on ancient Bharat

11mth 5

LV 1

DemonVenerable_12

I'm kind of disappointed; I mean I'm not saying that the idea is bad but it feels the story is unrealistic for the most part and the interaction between characters is just straight out weird with lots of unfamiliar terms at that point time furthermore it feels rushed and those interviews at the start was awkward- I think you should pay more attention to details and making it more realistic and engaging and that is clearly lacking. It'd be better to showcase problems of caste system and how to solve these first then go ahead with military part while also taking care of nobles which are more of a tumor. I've read another Indian novel- (India that could be by Maddymudda) So I had great expectations! Nice try to be honest much appreciated as I too hail from the south so it's quite fascinating to read this novel which has great potential, I would really like it if you could attempt a rewrite or something to attract more audience.

1yr 4

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Good story author. Just a little action missing. You should take some ideas from story ‘Peace Online- India’ for warfare and tactics. And how a king should command .

1yr 4

LV 4

Gaurav_Pawar_6672

for those who can't afford to buy locked chapters you could fololowmy strategy for Free read: lvl4 account gives you 3 ads daily means 3 chapter unlocks you should open another WN account and it will give you another 3 chapters unblock daily. You could buy at least 2 free pass weakly basis that means in 10 days you get 6×10+2= 62 chapters which means 186 monthly. You can catch up with latest chapters in like 2-3 months. Author at least deserve this much dedication from my prospective at least. By the way author, nice work , keep going 🥰[img=update][img=update] And you should know Australia and New Zealand is free estate in 17th century 😉😉

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