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Shameless Editor’s review! (No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story) I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119) The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!) The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging. Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven) With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom. So why not give it a read?
I love everything about this. The protagonist, the yandere wives, the fights [img=update]
Still in the beginning chapters, but really appreciating and liking the story so far. Looking forward to what I'm hoping to see in the future. I'm a guy with 4 older sisters, I can see things.
A Thrill Ride from Start to Finish!" From the first sentence to the final page, this book keeps you hooked. The tension never falters, and the characters feel incredibly real.
Great novel, goated and mega op Mc, great harem. I wasn't a big fan of in**st at first since there wasn't even a warning in the synopsis but whatever. and I am really spitted in my opinion of daughters being added in the harem, at one side, characters like Ophis and Nero seems like a good addition but the actual daughters from his wives being added just feels kinda disgusting, specially when the harem is already so big that author can't even handle it properly but whatever. action and adventure tag seems like a scam later on, this Mc is so strong that he doesn't do shet with his powers. Mc has so many powers that we literally be needing a spreadsheet to remember everything and this is also common for his harem as well. Mc becoming so strong that I am just worried that this author is making victor so strong in lower worlds that when higher world arc starts, there won't be anything left to look forward to it. I just pray that this author isn't dumb enough to scrap all hype for the actual higher worlds with this. and truth be told, author really isn't good with actually showing is what victor can actually do by literally doing it, it's always just he 'can' do this but no instance of him actually doing it. it's mostly all garbage narration of his power but no instance of application of those powers. I do feel as I read the novel that this author is a feminist or smth, coz only women are strong and competent and men aside Mc are all trash. it didn't bother me all that much since I legit only cared about Mc but from a story telling perspective, it would be consider *** writing and it only exist so Mc will be surrounded by women like any Cn_manhua out there where Mc be only surrounded by jade beauty. oh also funnily enough even tho Mc is a family man and most of the time in the novel is spent with harem, this author still couldn't name all of his daughters and what are all the wives concept in like the 200 chapters since they were all born and also harem becoming goddeses and author keep introducing more and more characters. idk what even here is the priority. overall I think author really needs to work on his pacing for the story and explain stuff more properly and tame down the harem addition. also for the life of me I couldn't figure out why the harem is so big but it's not even smut oriented and author is so trash at dealing with different time of personality in his harem, heck later on author even turn all lf them into same dragon race, now even the unique racial stuff in the harem no longer exists.
good read, lots of plot twist and humor Author has a good grasp on keeping the reader entertained
Ever since I read this book....I keep praying for the actual anime to be made.....it will make a fortune
I love love love this book. due to this book, I found purpose. that is not an understatement
Very good story, character development, I like the story so much that it has already become my favorite novel. 😆
What can I say other than STOP READING THIS REVIEW AND READ THE NOVEL!!! This novel is really, really good. I don't even know what I should write, everything about this novel is perfect. The world, the story, the MC and the girls. I can't say more, other than you should definitely read this masterpiece. No Yuri No NTR Spoiler!!! You are still here? Then here comes the spoiler: If you don't like big harems, and I mean really big, then this novel is not for you (the MC get as of currently 50 girls, not including his daughters which I'm sure he will get in the future)
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Author anything happened to you? why there hasn't been any chapter update for so long?
loving the story as always but I wanted to see some character development of characters like histia and how Victor managed to get her to be his wive, how Victor forgave naty and other characters I wanted to read those parts. so hopefully in the future he'll release this parts please I need to see this devedevelopment's please victor_weissmann. That's all I wanted to say the novel is ininteresting as always keep of with the good work.
the best ever novel within all of webnovel. loving the story as always but I wanted to see some character development of characters like histia and how Victor managed to get her to be his wive, how Victor forgave naty and other characters I wanted to read those parts. so hopefully in the future he'll release this parts please I need to see this devedevelopment's please victor_weissmann. That's all I wanted to say the novel is ininteresting as always keep of with the good work.
I really liked this novel coz it had a realistic world where power wasn't measured by levels but by techniques ,weapons and other things
At this point having read all of it twice I just had to comment this I don't like Voilet's character a single bit sure she's the first yandere and did all that for victor but I find her personality absolutely intolerable sometimes this feeling intensified more during my second read. So i had to tell you all about this and needed to ask too if someone else felt that way too or is it just me ?
I’m currently listening to this story on YouTube I’m some where between chapter 140-160 and I can say that this story is really good and really interesting
nice book, overall writing is perfect if you're looking for another fantastic read check out paradox of being ancient sukani's Return
I fell in love with this novel at first glance, and now i am proud to say it did not disappoint. I basically had to work up my own lifestyle from a fictional character, his basically my role model now .😁😁. keep it up.
This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Yes, I had commented on this in the past, but it was deleted... T_T, I'll just go here as a reminder, sigh. About the novel, give it a try, as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I improved as the volumes went on. I hope you like it.
Shameless Editor’s review! (No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story) I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119) The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!) The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging. Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven) With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom. So why not give it a read?
I love everything about this. The protagonist, the yandere wives, the fights [img=update]
Still in the beginning chapters, but really appreciating and liking the story so far. Looking forward to what I'm hoping to see in the future. I'm a guy with 4 older sisters, I can see things.
A Thrill Ride from Start to Finish!" From the first sentence to the final page, this book keeps you hooked. The tension never falters, and the characters feel incredibly real.
Great novel, goated and mega op Mc, great harem. I wasn't a big fan of in**st at first since there wasn't even a warning in the synopsis but whatever. and I am really spitted in my opinion of daughters being added in the harem, at one side, characters like Ophis and Nero seems like a good addition but the actual daughters from his wives being added just feels kinda disgusting, specially when the harem is already so big that author can't even handle it properly but whatever. action and adventure tag seems like a scam later on, this Mc is so strong that he doesn't do shet with his powers. Mc has so many powers that we literally be needing a spreadsheet to remember everything and this is also common for his harem as well. Mc becoming so strong that I am just worried that this author is making victor so strong in lower worlds that when higher world arc starts, there won't be anything left to look forward to it. I just pray that this author isn't dumb enough to scrap all hype for the actual higher worlds with this. and truth be told, author really isn't good with actually showing is what victor can actually do by literally doing it, it's always just he 'can' do this but no instance of him actually doing it. it's mostly all garbage narration of his power but no instance of application of those powers. I do feel as I read the novel that this author is a feminist or smth, coz only women are strong and competent and men aside Mc are all trash. it didn't bother me all that much since I legit only cared about Mc but from a story telling perspective, it would be consider *** writing and it only exist so Mc will be surrounded by women like any Cn_manhua out there where Mc be only surrounded by jade beauty. oh also funnily enough even tho Mc is a family man and most of the time in the novel is spent with harem, this author still couldn't name all of his daughters and what are all the wives concept in like the 200 chapters since they were all born and also harem becoming goddeses and author keep introducing more and more characters. idk what even here is the priority. overall I think author really needs to work on his pacing for the story and explain stuff more properly and tame down the harem addition. also for the life of me I couldn't figure out why the harem is so big but it's not even smut oriented and author is so trash at dealing with different time of personality in his harem, heck later on author even turn all lf them into same dragon race, now even the unique racial stuff in the harem no longer exists.
good read, lots of plot twist and humor Author has a good grasp on keeping the reader entertained
Ever since I read this book....I keep praying for the actual anime to be made.....it will make a fortune
I love love love this book. due to this book, I found purpose. that is not an understatement
Very good story, character development, I like the story so much that it has already become my favorite novel. 😆
What can I say other than STOP READING THIS REVIEW AND READ THE NOVEL!!! This novel is really, really good. I don't even know what I should write, everything about this novel is perfect. The world, the story, the MC and the girls. I can't say more, other than you should definitely read this masterpiece. No Yuri No NTR Spoiler!!! You are still here? Then here comes the spoiler: If you don't like big harems, and I mean really big, then this novel is not for you (the MC get as of currently 50 girls, not including his daughters which I'm sure he will get in the future)
ネタバレを明かす Author anything happened to you? why there hasn't been any chapter update for so long?
loving the story as always but I wanted to see some character development of characters like histia and how Victor managed to get her to be his wive, how Victor forgave naty and other characters I wanted to read those parts. so hopefully in the future he'll release this parts please I need to see this devedevelopment's please victor_weissmann. That's all I wanted to say the novel is ininteresting as always keep of with the good work.
the best ever novel within all of webnovel. loving the story as always but I wanted to see some character development of characters like histia and how Victor managed to get her to be his wive, how Victor forgave naty and other characters I wanted to read those parts. so hopefully in the future he'll release this parts please I need to see this devedevelopment's please victor_weissmann. That's all I wanted to say the novel is ininteresting as always keep of with the good work.
I really liked this novel coz it had a realistic world where power wasn't measured by levels but by techniques ,weapons and other things
At this point having read all of it twice I just had to comment this I don't like Voilet's character a single bit sure she's the first yandere and did all that for victor but I find her personality absolutely intolerable sometimes this feeling intensified more during my second read. So i had to tell you all about this and needed to ask too if someone else felt that way too or is it just me ?
I’m currently listening to this story on YouTube I’m some where between chapter 140-160 and I can say that this story is really good and really interesting
nice book, overall writing is perfect if you're looking for another fantastic read check out paradox of being ancient sukani's Return
I fell in love with this novel at first glance, and now i am proud to say it did not disappoint. I basically had to work up my own lifestyle from a fictional character, his basically my role model now .😁😁. keep it up.
This is my first attempt at making a novel, I hope you guys like it... Yes, I had commented on this in the past, but it was deleted... T_T, I'll just go here as a reminder, sigh. About the novel, give it a try, as it was my first novel, I made a lot of grammatical mistakes in the beginning, but I improved as the volumes went on. I hope you like it.