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Death by a God caused young Nox Silver to be given a second chance at life with three wishes.
He will train and kill for himself to surive in this new war striken world that he finds himself in.
And maybe along the way he will his reason to live in this shinobi world.
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レビューを書くHey its author san and Im sorry but I gotta give five stars just so I can start getting people to see my fic. And i now its not perfect 3.5 at best since just rushed it out so I can see what people think of it.
Dude....i like it👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌[=UPDATE=] [=UPDATE=] [UPDATE=] MORE/MORE/MORE/MORE/MORE/
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Its well a bit ruff but it has potential so ill support ya kid. But you just need to extend it to a least 1.5k word and try to add 100 words per chapter to help it be more worth while to read.
作者 MADZ_HACKER
Good novel, the story is quite interesting. suggestions for writers of this novel, please put different marks such as speaking : "...." , thoughts : '....', speaking system : [....] and give pov. for this story I hope the MC pair is not from OCs such as Temari, Karin, Ino or Hinata so that readers are interested. I hope MC will be a little smart in handling the situation and smart in manipulating everyone or politics which will bring MC a better life because he is a transmigration (rencarnation). MC should not be too OP at the beginning and hope that there is an epic moment in every fight that makes it grow (badas). Thanks 😁