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Decided to rewrite the Synopsis as multiple people now have brought to my attention that it makes it seem like MC will just follow Arthur around everywhere and that’s just not the case.
Now the synopsis begins.
Jaron dies and is given the opportunity to reincarnate into a world of his choosing with one wish to help him along the way. He chooses the world of The Beginning After The End.
Born into the body of an orphan of mysterious origins, Jaron uses his knowledge of the books to help himself awaken his core early. He meets new characters as well as familiar ones as he learns about his own origins in this world. He comes to develop a deep bond with his new family and his priories shift. He’s no longer preparing himself just to face the future enemies, but also protect his newfound family. The Helstea’s
Hope you enjoy, as I have enjoyed writing this fanfic and it’s changed greatly from what I originally intended for it. I want to try and add some depth to things we just really don’t know.
Alright now that the summary is out of the way, here is what you can expect.
Upload schedule has so far been fairly consistent with at least one chapter per day and multiple on my days off of work. I can’t promise I’ll always keep that pace, but I will do my best. Also I do not reread or proofread what I have written. I apologize for the many misspellings due to auto correct I’m sure you’ll come across. I’m no expert in writing either, so expect run on sentences and the like, but I do try to keep everything as grammatically correct as possible.
Im not the most knowledgeable when it comes to TBATE, so I’ll mostly just be trying my best to make with what I remember. I may even re read the books as I write to keep it fresh in my brain, so if anything is inconsistent with the story I apologize in advance.
Oh well, on with the story.
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I like the idea of a tbate ff. but what your synopsis says is that mc's goal in life is to be Arthur's lap dog, with that my hopes calmed in this fic
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Righteous MC who waves his morality around. Check. Powerful but still subservient protagonist. Check. Fanboying MC who can't help but adore the main cast. Check. Minor deviations from the canon (at best). Check. Here you have your typical, let's 'fix it' fanfiction. Where the main ambition of the (clearly two-dimensional) protagonist is to fix everything that went wrong in the original manga. How very original.
Loving the book so far Anticipating the next chapters Pls continue this piece of work! What really stood out for me was this MC's ability to walk silently and his abnormal connection to swords.
The idea that layed premise of this story was good, but author continued to ruin it with unnecessary drama and cringe, then the whole story kinds of just keep regressing
Hey just finished reading this novel.. I loved it and waiting for future updates and this is my first TBATE FF.. CAN anyone tell me if there is any other good FF of TBATE.. cause I am fan of TBATE but I don't like Arthur character that much too much depressing later on story
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I'm still on Chapter 2, but I'll leave my 5-star rating here to try to at least downplay the 1-star ratings with silly justifications. The author has repeated several times that the protagonist is not, and will not be, Arthur's puppy. He will only help Arthur when he needs it, and if he needs it. Because the MC will probably have his own adventures. Now, the justification 'Hur dur Being around Arthur is boring, idiot, garbage!' It makes no sense. This is a Fanfic, the author does what he wants, and if in the story he wants the MC to be close to Arthur, then he will be close to Arthur. If you don't like the author's MC helping Arthur, just don't read it.
so he is going to simp orginal mc im out and i bet he only get oc girls yeah nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I would have rated it 3.5 but I can see that the author is really passionate(?) about it so I have given it 4 stars, I don't want to write a half-hearted review seeing the author is trying his best so here i go: 1)The author tried to make original character and original plots due to the reason that there isn't much to go about as the source material doesn't have that much info about its own world, I think that actually was lacking and I though why , I have read many fic where the plot used was original and they are good but I couldn't say the same for this one and see the plot that the author tried to make isn't bad at all but I still find i lacking and I think the reason for it is the MC. 2) The MC of the story is really lackluster, to me he has no drive and no force that makes him act, yeah there is the aim to get strong enough so I survive the future but isn't that the goal of life itself,to get strong to survive. There is also the aim to help Arthur which again is really a lackluster goal, it feels like the mc whole goal is for someone else, it would be alright if he was a side character but since he is the main character that goal feels really lacking.Looks i don't mind if he hangs out with arthur and things like that but make him have a new goal, I still think that he doesn't realize that his new life is not real and he thinks it's a dream because of his personality, I recommend you flesh out your main character, I am reading a one peice fanfic on this website where its all original plot and its entertaining to read not because the original plot is good but because the main character feels like a main character. To end this review I would like to say thank you for your hardwork and to not drop this fic because of hate you would be getting because this is a well written fic, yes it has its own problem but still its well written none the less.So keep up the hard work 👍
what's wrong with those other low star reviews that I'm seeing?? The reason stated for those low star is totally wronggg, I bet they did not even read the story and decided to just hate it. For others whose deciding whether to read this then dont listen to those low star reviews since its totally misleading. In my opinion this is a good tbate fanfic and you should give it a read.
Really good didn’t want to read it because of some of the reviews but im glad I did for those worried about him following the mc he doesn’t or about him being weaker he isn’t i would really recommend giving this a shot it gets really good when he starts his adventure
I personally love this fanfic. I hope the author would not let the haters get to him and continue writing this fanific. [img=update][img=update]
I really like this fanfic. I might just be biased but there are so little fanfic of tbate that i generally like what I come across. Some of the reviews are just there to get the rating down they don't even know how the story is progressing. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I Love tbate and Its rare to find a fanfic about it, so automatic 5 stars. the mcs personality is good, and the characters are fleshed out nicely.
I really love the book because there is not many the beginning After the end FanFiction
Its a very well written book. The story building is also very good. The reactions and dialogues are very detailed and expressive. I am loving it till now and hoping for more......Thank you for writing such a wonderful fic
I haven't read the story and I don't know if I'll read it, because you literally said in the synopsis that your main character isn't going to be the main character, he's going to be someone's babysitter, I'm just going to read this because I have hope and most of all I like pain MUAHAHAHA (the Review is made by the synopsis, since the main character seems to be disappointing, and since he's going to be a nanny the story won't change much, but that's me judging without knowing)
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from the synopsis this is gonna be a Arthur lap dog fanfic where the mc becomes a slave to Arthur and no matter how strong the mc is Arthur is still better than him because he is a "genius" be I'll still give a 5 star because creation is hard