Combat Maid Harem

LV 13

Daoist_Little_Yun

I practice the Dao of Shamelessness! You'll see how cultured I really am when you read this novel. Why don't you tip maids too? Maids are special, you know? They clean your clothes, cook dishes, and especially do night services! Crazy, right!?

LV 13

Daoist_Little_Yun

UPDATE DECEMBER 2, 2021: I have written a summary for Chapters 1 - 37. It's very short and should spare you from the bad chapters I had written in the past. I know I should've done this sooner, but I really hate rewriting. It's very mentally taxing to that point that I get lazy. Before 2022, I aim to finish rewriting all of those chapters for a brand new start for my novel, and I hope all of you gain a maid fetish after reading my novel. Thank you! Spread maid love to the world!!

LV 15

AimanFaroqq

this is my thought on this novel after reading up to 48 chapters i will be dead honest, this is a novel that i must say.. a hidden gem with extremely big potential to grow with good marketings. It has nice story, good and normal pace plot development, and good character development. I prefer you to put the power level in this world as we still don't know how does one determine their strength. I wish you will have these in the future but anyway its a good novel for me to spend my money on but at the same time, this novel have something that might make veteran readers burst into anger. First of all, although i said the character development is good, the way you write it out can piss people off. I almost threw my phone out of anger reading the first 40 chapter. Yes you want to make MC a naive dumb boy but smart i can accept that, but you exaggerate it. You make him look like a beta japanese male weeb in japan. I suggest you need to fastened his maturity progression in the next 10 chapters or veteran readers will immediately drop this novel. Also about Aleshia, just like I said, u exaggerate it. You make her way too paranoid and this will leave reader a bad taste in their mouth regarding her. Its nice to see a proper relationship progression over his maids one by one as to make the story longer and interesting but dont make it too out of line that it disrespect MC dignity as a noble. Also he is not giving any punishment at all. I would like to see all his maids total obedience to him Also for future readers.. i suggest you all to fast read chapter 1 to 40 as to avoid you leaving this novel.Trust me you will be eager to swipe your card past those chapters. Also trust me as long author not losing few screws in the head for future development, this novel will be a good workout for your slumbering dragon. I will give 4* at the moment because of the updates, character development and world background. I will give 5* after this have more chapters, clarification on power level and a better, brave and mature MC with his maids not being so paranoid. Best of luck. I have insulted and scolded a lot of authors in webnovel considering how they are so terrible making improvement in their novels. I have high expectation on this. Dont let me down My 💰 on you

Tbh, I've only read until chapter 22 because the MC is bad and waiting for character development for 39 chapters isn't worth the read. Author could've made the character development in a much shorter time frame than having to wait almost 40 chaps, I GUARANTEE that most of your readers have dropped the story because of how long the character development is. The writing quality is amazing since you can really understand the story well and the Grammer mistakes are next to none. The story can be slow at some points but it fleshes out the side characters well. All in all the story is great I love it but the MC is really off putting and some readers can't handle that, including me. If you can handle waiting for a character development then try this story out, it's good. If you can't then don't waste your time reading this.

LV 11

PyconXD

Look, I sacrificed and read everything (64 ch's), I don't know why the author dragged such a bad start, he wanted to show a character evolution while increasing the mc's strength, but it took a long time and I bet that's why he lost so many readers , it was a good read, I don't lie, I liked what happened from chapter 45 on, it was torture to read before that, but it was good even after the fight with the noble devil , it has potential, but you need to prepare to read in 40 very frustrating chapters, until this chapter the mc will be weak, fearful, perverted, cowardly... so far it was the worst mc I've ever seen, but in chapter 40, something happens to him that changes everything, besides changing his personality, he gets stronger and more confident, in addition to correcting some of his flaws, he doesn't become the best mc's, but he's readable. The story is good, after chapter 40 it gets very interesting, if you wait until then, you'll like it. Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't complain about this, I didn't find any errors) Update stability: 5.0 (I don't follow since the beginning, but since I started every day new chapters have been posted) Story development: 5.0 (the story is great, it has everything to last a hundred chapters, but the MC development is depressing and frustrating because it takes so long) Character designs: 1.0 (only 4 things are quoted from the characters: whether he's handsome or not, apparent age, hair color and whether he's fat or thin, it's kind of hard to imagine the characters with these descriptions where they don't even talk about details , not even for the main characters) World Background: 2.0 (difficult to assess, almost nothing has been presented yet) PS; But the next arc has a lot of potential, I confess that I'm a little excited about it, so I can increase my score more, remembering that the soap opera is at the beginning, there's a lot to happen, I'm not offending this comment, but I give my honest opinions about romance.

LV 4

Daoist569568

don't like story begineeing section. Too much coward type mc. come on man you could at least developed the scenrio. mc lacking some gut man.

LV 13

absolue

I liked it a lot, being a strong supporter of the maids but unfortunately it's over for me, what can I say I hate the yuri in the harem, especially here I feel like the mc is getting ntr by his maid, in short so disappointing it should at least be said in the summary, I don't mind it's a threesome but here bruhh anyway it's chap 150 for info 😤

LV 12

PeerlessIsLonesome

Don't do it, Save yourself .................................................................................................................

LV 1

Upty_Dupty

What can I say? This novel is just too disgusting. I've read till the chap 100. Don't know how I was able to endure so far. The author degrades a girl because she isn't pure. It seems like he is a 40ty y.o. virgin and doesn't know what a true relationship means. Futhermore plot is too chaotic. Mc is going to be a merchant, then mage, transmigrator and so on. Quality is bad too. I'm too lazy to explain all flaws of this novel. Drop

LV 14

Spabsta

If I was the author I woulda stopped writing. All the reviews but like 2 are how bad it is 😭 honestly that just tells me I shouldnt read it and indeed I wont. Gg on you for still writing but I suggest make ur mc better next time u make a novel

LV 4

BL00DY

I really like this story especially how MC evolve with each contact with his past life personality. Besides, the plot of getting the maids is amazing, as well as growth of their relationship.

LV 3

Matlock

Within 100 chapters the story went from mediocre to absolutely stupid. Massive plot holes, literally the entire plot just drops off a cliff for no reason.

LV 4

Ero_no_Kami

I like the concept of this novel but... When I ever think the Beta Mc make me want to throw up.................................................................

LV 3

Neon_4535

it would be a better if mc wasn't a beta I read 200+ chapters mc is still beta and idiot

LV 4

isktrion

fk this novel............... the mc should have left aliesha even if he didn't kill her or punished her.. whole mood is ruined.. ufycigivibobbibiviviviv

LV 13

Topanl4w

Right, the first 10+ Chapters were so STUPID, CRINGE, FORCED, and LAME. The Guards' behaviour & reaction, the girl action to the MC, the old healer behaviour, the conflict, everything is so forced and stupid. THE MC haven't shown up yet after the first chapter. it gets better. But that beginning is too horrible. i'm the 'first 10 Chapters guy', and those chapters are 3 star almost 2.

LV 4

joshy_rob

the books a massive headache. it's hard to care about the main character because he's like thin air besides getting bullied in the beginning. I don't like to use terms like beta but this mcs as lame as they come. What is there to look forward to? Not much some chapters deep. Im sure this book is just the antithesis of my being and cause pain only relieved in review. Good luck to the author and fans

LV 15

Devon_Pangburn

POTENTIAL SPOILER: This would be much higher. At least 4's across the board. However, in a semi-smut novel, the author has opted to make the MC a cringe, purity worshipping man. Thats why its not higher. I wont spoil the scene, but the MC blames a character for not being a virgin in a situation that clearly isnt her fault. Not cool. Outdated, immature and misogynist thinking.