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It is extremely rushed for no reason and lacks any sort of worldbuilding, details, plot and meaningful progression.
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This book is really good can't wait for the next book please make the next chapter soon
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The MCs girls get with 4 big guys and MC becomes a cuck and wears the green hat.
good read enjoyed had me thinking about it all day tttttttttttttttt ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
author-chan, this is amazing,please don't ever stop, I love it so much I wish you could post 5 chaps everyday..............can you post 5 chaps everyday???
This novel is rubbish no introduction no clarification on the setting and no explanation on the the protagonist's power, yeah he is a vilsomething but lots of readers won't no what it is, and don't get me started on the character he is empty he has no soul no essence to speak of all that metahuman stuff was clearly copied from other novels and the supporting characters had no introductions no description no real interaction with the protagonist yeah they talked but there no true emotions.
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To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin type suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!
Dropped at chapter 4. In general just wasn’t my type of story. It’s extremely rushed, as the story feels out of place. Doesn’t really build into the world from the start. MC is just like well this happened. Then mc automatically can do this and says we will do this. So all around I just don’t like the pacing and world building. If that’s something you don’t mind. I say give it a read.
For first 10 chapter it's a bit rushed. But after that the story is perfect, the writing become better and event not rushed anymore.
Sooo...loved this a lot but that one chapter made me almost vomit. Could've been done in a better way I gotta say .It was actually disgusting, but if you move past that it gets better.
I'm going to give it 3.8 as I'm not really giving it a chance to read it as I read the first few chapter's and there's bad grammar and it's not a viltrumite in marvel but a dude who somehow gets the powers and he's not a transmigrator or anything but he's just some guy and it seems to be a harem (I didn't far enough to see a single Romance let alone it be a harem yet) but that doesn't bother me but it's kinda just obvious as he's In a cell with all these around females and he gets the knowledge of the powers from some kind of flashbacks and also it seems to be he got kidnapped out of nowhere but it's strange as how did they know about his genes like is he a actual mutant who has the powers but then if thats the case how did he get the powers and that's kinda something that raises questions, is he a mutant with the powers of viltrumite or is he a legit viltrumite and if he is a viltrumite then what implications is it? like is viltrum here? is omni man here? has a viltrumite been assigned to earth? how strong are you? mark and his dad nolan are unique viltrumites as omni man nolan are one of the strongest viltrumites around and mark is also a very strong viltrumite and they killed tons of viltrumites together. so how strong is he? average viltrumite? or strong like mark and nolan? weak for a viltrumite but real strong for people? now if viltrum exist in this world with a ton of viltrumites then do they know about the mc here? like there's a lot of questions. probably would have gotten the answers if I stuck around but hey I wasn't coming back so now if someone has the time to read all of this it'd be some questions for them to ask if they decide to read this. I bet there going to act like all viltrumites are strong like mark and nolan so in the authors mind he'd make our dude strong like mark or stronger and if it's weaker then he'd be "nerfing" him. it'd be bs if he made him on par with nolan as nolan is very old and it'd still be bs if he was on par with mark real quick but it's cool I won't be there to complain. now you go complain if he gets equal to nolan without at least hundreds of years. he took thousands but he's a mc so hundreds is understandable.
The story and the idea behind it was actually the best I’ve seen compared to others on this app. The story development was excellent and overall was very good, but that’s really only until like chapter 55 I think? where he came back after his death. After that I don’t really see how the story can continue to maintain the good trend and you can tell it’s starting to deteriorate because it has harem. It’s not like I’m hating on it because I don’t like when there’s harem in the story or anything, but the authors trying too hard to please the fans or what not and starts to forget to make the characters feel like an actual character and just start throwing them into the harem and making the story predictable from a mile away.
I liked it at first, but then it all started going wrong. Where do I start? Harem members just randomly appear in a relationship with the mc. There is zero development in any of their relationships with the mc. There are no developments with the characters to the point where you don’t care about them and are easily forgettable, even the mc. Mc knew of all the people he wanted to recruit but just happened to forget about all of the main antagonists? Even the ones he said he knew of he just forgot about entirely until something bad happened. Everything is just so forced it’s hard to read. I read up to chapter 50 hoping for it to get better. It did not. It’s just the same forced plot over and over. I love these fan fictions but this is definitely one of the worst I’ve read. Idk how it’s so popular.
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it's a good fanfic , the start was a bit rushed but pace become better later on. Till now found no problem in the story, i even enjoyed small crossovers with cw arrowverse..
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An interesting take on Marvel with a Viltrimite and the changes that would occur. There are many grammatical errors, but it has passion. The insta romance is a bit weird though.
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Story is great man, but please use grammarly or something to correct the mistakes.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
would have been a great story if not for the freaking harem. sucks to see so much potential going down the drain,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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I absolutely love this novel it's so good that it should be made into a series of movies or a show and I love how the story has progressed it gave a lot of room for places to go in the future I 1,000,000% support a continuation of this novel if I can help in any way I'll gladly do it
okay, first of, the story has potential to be something good but its too rushed ,its like the first 3 chapters have already skipped so much detail and I can't even enjoy it
It is extremely rushed for no reason and lacks any sort of worldbuilding, details, plot and meaningful progression.
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This book is really good can't wait for the next book please make the next chapter soon
Uau, a quantidade de coisas estranhas aqui é fascinante. Uau, a quantidade de coisas estranhas aqui é fascinante. Uau, a quantidade de coisas estranhas aqui é fascinante.
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The MCs girls get with 4 big guys and MC becomes a cuck and wears the green hat.
good read enjoyed had me thinking about it all day tttttttttttttttt ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
author-chan, this is amazing,please don't ever stop, I love it so much I wish you could post 5 chaps everyday..............can you post 5 chaps everyday???
This novel is rubbish no introduction no clarification on the setting and no explanation on the the protagonist's power, yeah he is a vilsomething but lots of readers won't no what it is, and don't get me started on the character he is empty he has no soul no essence to speak of all that metahuman stuff was clearly copied from other novels and the supporting characters had no introductions no description no real interaction with the protagonist yeah they talked but there no true emotions.
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To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin type suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!
Dropped at chapter 4. In general just wasn’t my type of story. It’s extremely rushed, as the story feels out of place. Doesn’t really build into the world from the start. MC is just like well this happened. Then mc automatically can do this and says we will do this. So all around I just don’t like the pacing and world building. If that’s something you don’t mind. I say give it a read.
For first 10 chapter it's a bit rushed. But after that the story is perfect, the writing become better and event not rushed anymore.
Sooo...loved this a lot but that one chapter made me almost vomit. Could've been done in a better way I gotta say .It was actually disgusting, but if you move past that it gets better.
I'm going to give it 3.8 as I'm not really giving it a chance to read it as I read the first few chapter's and there's bad grammar and it's not a viltrumite in marvel but a dude who somehow gets the powers and he's not a transmigrator or anything but he's just some guy and it seems to be a harem (I didn't far enough to see a single Romance let alone it be a harem yet) but that doesn't bother me but it's kinda just obvious as he's In a cell with all these around females and he gets the knowledge of the powers from some kind of flashbacks and also it seems to be he got kidnapped out of nowhere but it's strange as how did they know about his genes like is he a actual mutant who has the powers but then if thats the case how did he get the powers and that's kinda something that raises questions, is he a mutant with the powers of viltrumite or is he a legit viltrumite and if he is a viltrumite then what implications is it? like is viltrum here? is omni man here? has a viltrumite been assigned to earth? how strong are you? mark and his dad nolan are unique viltrumites as omni man nolan are one of the strongest viltrumites around and mark is also a very strong viltrumite and they killed tons of viltrumites together. so how strong is he? average viltrumite? or strong like mark and nolan? weak for a viltrumite but real strong for people? now if viltrum exist in this world with a ton of viltrumites then do they know about the mc here? like there's a lot of questions. probably would have gotten the answers if I stuck around but hey I wasn't coming back so now if someone has the time to read all of this it'd be some questions for them to ask if they decide to read this. I bet there going to act like all viltrumites are strong like mark and nolan so in the authors mind he'd make our dude strong like mark or stronger and if it's weaker then he'd be "nerfing" him. it'd be bs if he made him on par with nolan as nolan is very old and it'd still be bs if he was on par with mark real quick but it's cool I won't be there to complain. now you go complain if he gets equal to nolan without at least hundreds of years. he took thousands but he's a mc so hundreds is understandable.
The story and the idea behind it was actually the best I’ve seen compared to others on this app. The story development was excellent and overall was very good, but that’s really only until like chapter 55 I think? where he came back after his death. After that I don’t really see how the story can continue to maintain the good trend and you can tell it’s starting to deteriorate because it has harem. It’s not like I’m hating on it because I don’t like when there’s harem in the story or anything, but the authors trying too hard to please the fans or what not and starts to forget to make the characters feel like an actual character and just start throwing them into the harem and making the story predictable from a mile away.
I liked it at first, but then it all started going wrong. Where do I start? Harem members just randomly appear in a relationship with the mc. There is zero development in any of their relationships with the mc. There are no developments with the characters to the point where you don’t care about them and are easily forgettable, even the mc. Mc knew of all the people he wanted to recruit but just happened to forget about all of the main antagonists? Even the ones he said he knew of he just forgot about entirely until something bad happened. Everything is just so forced it’s hard to read. I read up to chapter 50 hoping for it to get better. It did not. It’s just the same forced plot over and over. I love these fan fictions but this is definitely one of the worst I’ve read. Idk how it’s so popular.
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ネタバレを明かす it's a good fanfic , the start was a bit rushed but pace become better later on. Till now found no problem in the story, i even enjoyed small crossovers with cw arrowverse..
Ah eh eh eh eh eh eh cash is eh is eh HD eh HD eh HD ssh or eh of ssh if eh at if ssh of eh hog ssh if eh your eh if van HD foo HD eh u eh it eh HD book in foo if eh it ssh did shud eh ssh bug foo if foo HD ssh HD ssh hog eh hog fog
An interesting take on Marvel with a Viltrimite and the changes that would occur. There are many grammatical errors, but it has passion. The insta romance is a bit weird though.
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Гарем, нестабильный сюжет, неоправданные действия персонажей, картонный неописанный мир. Автор совершенно не старался из-за чего это произведение и не имело даже шанса стать интересным.
Story is great man, but please use grammarly or something to correct the mistakes.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
would have been a great story if not for the freaking harem. sucks to see so much potential going down the drain,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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I absolutely love this novel it's so good that it should be made into a series of movies or a show and I love how the story has progressed it gave a lot of room for places to go in the future I 1,000,000% support a continuation of this novel if I can help in any way I'll gladly do it
okay, first of, the story has potential to be something good but its too rushed ,its like the first 3 chapters have already skipped so much detail and I can't even enjoy it