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Whelp, at first I thought this story was amazing. And it was, at first, in the begging but then the story became worse and worse. And the bad writing quality does not help either.
Just finshed watching invincible, I wanted to read the comics but sadly the place I’m at is not recognized by my amazon so gotta wait, this will do though for now, thanks.
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Please. No. Please. Always hated clone stories. Just forced drama. He has the greatest plot armor I have seen. Please. No. Please. Always hated clone stories. Just forced drama. He has the greatest plot armor I have seen.
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Why only nathaniel? kill reed, ross and all the senators and others. Why only nathaniel? kill reed, ross and all the senators and others.Why only nathaniel? kill reed, ross and all the senators and others.
ネタバレを明かすWhy so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed?
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finally need to see the return. Hope all those senators,politicians, reed, all employees of essex, ross and others die horribly. finally need to see the return. Hope all those senators,politicians, reed, all employees of essex, ross and others die horribly.
the story is really great that I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great story development and the author is doing a great, no, superb job with keeping the timeline in order, well, as much as possible anyway.
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It was very good but author needed conflict. He made it be making Mc forget stuf. All this drama could have been avoided. Mc randomly discovered that he cant use full power and had to die to remake his body. Stalling tactic by author to create bad situation for Mc to fix...
I like Invincible, recent i see the serie, and i like it Thinkid Mark .........................................................................................
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Pretty good story, if I had any complaints it would be the unmarked time skips like I was reading one chapter and by the next several years have passed and there wasn't even a side note about it.
It's a great concept so far, the plot is pretty good however, it does feel rushed at times. The crossover is weird but interesting to see strength, ability limits and comparative skills of different comic and show varieties levels of these characters.
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Whelp, at first I thought this story was amazing. And it was, at first, in the begging but then the story became worse and worse. And the bad writing quality does not help either.
Just finshed watching invincible, I wanted to read the comics but sadly the place I’m at is not recognized by my amazon so gotta wait, this will do though for now, thanks.
I Love your book man, continue[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Please. No. Please. Always hated clone stories. Just forced drama. He has the greatest plot armor I have seen. Please. No. Please. Always hated clone stories. Just forced drama. He has the greatest plot armor I have seen.
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Why only nathaniel? kill reed, ross and all the senators and others. Why only nathaniel? kill reed, ross and all the senators and others.Why only nathaniel? kill reed, ross and all the senators and others.
ネタバレを明かすWhy so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed? Why so rushed?
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finally need to see the return. Hope all those senators,politicians, reed, all employees of essex, ross and others die horribly. finally need to see the return. Hope all those senators,politicians, reed, all employees of essex, ross and others die horribly.
the story is really great that I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great story development and the author is doing a great, no, superb job with keeping the timeline in order, well, as much as possible anyway.
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It was very good but author needed conflict. He made it be making Mc forget stuf. All this drama could have been avoided. Mc randomly discovered that he cant use full power and had to die to remake his body. Stalling tactic by author to create bad situation for Mc to fix...
I like Invincible, recent i see the serie, and i like it Thinkid Mark .........................................................................................
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Pretty good story, if I had any complaints it would be the unmarked time skips like I was reading one chapter and by the next several years have passed and there wasn't even a side note about it.
It's a great concept so far, the plot is pretty good however, it does feel rushed at times. The crossover is weird but interesting to see strength, ability limits and comparative skills of different comic and show varieties levels of these characters.
Good........................................................................................................................................................................................................
trash just trash .