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A great novel with an incredible potential. The world building is rich and intriguing. I'm actually quite frustrated by the low number of chapters because I feel the greatness that this story can reach. It's also the first time that I've been moved by a story on this platform therefore I'm very eager to read the rest of this story (^w^)/. Keep the good work, author. You have something precious between your hands ^_^.
Woooooow woooooow pitié pitié pitié s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît si tu vas bien 👍 met a jour cette histoire ceux ceux cette merveille pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaase Pitié s'il te plaît 🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺😩😩😩😣😣😢🥺🥺😭😭😗😚
Amazing Story!! I really like it, defiantly needs not be continued with more face slapping!
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I love everything about this story, super sad to see that it was last updated so many months ago. I hope it gets updated again eventually, either way thanks for writing such an enjoyable story thus far!
An interesting story, with such a unique concept. The characters are well developed and relevance in the story. The world building is good as well. Naturally there is always room for improvement, I think you should give the fml more depth and character development. I understand she is learning of emotions but we have only seen her display 2 extremes on the spectrum of emotions. At times she may come across as arrogant. But nonetheless this is definitely one of my favourites, due to its uniqueness. I truly hope that you continue this work of yours, as it would be akin to a sin to not let us as readers get to see the journey of the fmc and fml as a whole as well as how they end up at the end of their story.
A unique concept, masterfully written. naturally there is room for improvement. I must say though i would like to see more growth for the fml. she currently lacks depth as a character. she mainly comes off as an individual who hasnt struggled. I would like to see her go through adversity.The world building is good but perhaps skewed in the sense we are introduced to heaven plane before fully experiencing the eastern continent.
Great story, flows well. Brilliant character building, each character is relevant and has a back story. Great Yuri potential(most important). Stable world building. Only problem would be the updates, when will it be updated, had it been dropped?
I just want to know if you are ever coming back to finish this because I see a lot of unfinished novels on your page hope you do cause these yuri cultivation novels are extremely rare.
It's an interesting read, hard to find good female lead stories out there, even hard to find good female lead yuri stories, so this was definitely an enjoyable read.
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that abhors you and I? All that awaits you is a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return
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When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting
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I rate you 5 stars. everything is good, especially the story development. nothing to complain about because when I read, I can feel myself there to enjoy. since everything is easy to understand, typos or errors are just nothing. hahaha good job author, keep on writing ^^ God bless you!
Loving the novel keep it up! Only complaint is that we know little of everything, since it was never explained, such as why she is doing this.
easy to understand story is well structured a few misspellings the characters are well developed and not boring. I look forward to seeing how it develops
Overall the story is great. Let me say this before anything else. Character design is good but not great. We have the general and expected patterns applied at least till chapter ~40. Worldbuilding is also not bad. Not much is revealed in the beginning though you discover more and more hints how this world functions, which is great and makes up the general naming of regions (They are are named after the cardinal directions). The reason why my rating is so low is the horrendous grammar. Genders get swapped, tenses messed up, words go missing, syntax and semantic are shredded, singular and plural are decided by the throw of the dice. I get that the author is not a native but is it really that hard to get grammerly or a similar free software to check the writing before you post? Can’t comment on the yuri yet. I’m only ~40 chapters in and the relationship is still in a budding stage. Is cute though. A little too much plot armour in some cases but imho it’s tolerable.
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Came in with big hope for a original cultivation novel, and after reading about 50chapter it somewhat is, but not to the degree i hoped. The world is like almost every cultivation story is. Writing quality is very good for webnovel and so far the plot is very catching. My problem is the MC and her companion. I had hoped for a story where someone would start out more robotic and trubles connection with emotion, but by chapter 10, the MC is already in love with her companion. From there the story takes a strange turne where everything feels like it's trying to rush in to a relationship and romance without building the characters one bit. Rushing for romance and lemons is the sad end for so many potential good cultivation novels.
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i recommend this book i love snowy she is so strong and amazing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This novel might be good but I hate super gifts in my notifications. I'm shamelessly adding a poor review because I'm forced to look at a notice for this novel.
Another shameless 5-stars review from author. Do you like Yuri? Do you like OP MC with System? Do you like Cultivation World where Young Master ruthlessly slapped? Just give it a try, you will get a triple-delight!
A great novel with an incredible potential. The world building is rich and intriguing. I'm actually quite frustrated by the low number of chapters because I feel the greatness that this story can reach. It's also the first time that I've been moved by a story on this platform therefore I'm very eager to read the rest of this story (^w^)/. Keep the good work, author. You have something precious between your hands ^_^.
Woooooow woooooow pitié pitié pitié s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît si tu vas bien 👍 met a jour cette histoire ceux ceux cette merveille pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaase Pitié s'il te plaît 🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺😩😩😩😣😣😢🥺🥺😭😭😗😚
Amazing Story!! I really like it, defiantly needs not be continued with more face slapping!
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I love everything about this story, super sad to see that it was last updated so many months ago. I hope it gets updated again eventually, either way thanks for writing such an enjoyable story thus far!
An interesting story, with such a unique concept. The characters are well developed and relevance in the story. The world building is good as well. Naturally there is always room for improvement, I think you should give the fml more depth and character development. I understand she is learning of emotions but we have only seen her display 2 extremes on the spectrum of emotions. At times she may come across as arrogant. But nonetheless this is definitely one of my favourites, due to its uniqueness. I truly hope that you continue this work of yours, as it would be akin to a sin to not let us as readers get to see the journey of the fmc and fml as a whole as well as how they end up at the end of their story.
A unique concept, masterfully written. naturally there is room for improvement. I must say though i would like to see more growth for the fml. she currently lacks depth as a character. she mainly comes off as an individual who hasnt struggled. I would like to see her go through adversity.The world building is good but perhaps skewed in the sense we are introduced to heaven plane before fully experiencing the eastern continent.
Great story, flows well. Brilliant character building, each character is relevant and has a back story. Great Yuri potential(most important). Stable world building. Only problem would be the updates, when will it be updated, had it been dropped?
I just want to know if you are ever coming back to finish this because I see a lot of unfinished novels on your page hope you do cause these yuri cultivation novels are extremely rare.
It's an interesting read, hard to find good female lead stories out there, even hard to find good female lead yuri stories, so this was definitely an enjoyable read.
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that abhors you and I? All that awaits you is a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return
like it, like it, like it! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting
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ネタバレを明かす I rate you 5 stars. everything is good, especially the story development. nothing to complain about because when I read, I can feel myself there to enjoy. since everything is easy to understand, typos or errors are just nothing. hahaha good job author, keep on writing ^^ God bless you!
Loving the novel keep it up! Only complaint is that we know little of everything, since it was never explained, such as why she is doing this.
easy to understand story is well structured a few misspellings the characters are well developed and not boring. I look forward to seeing how it develops
Overall the story is great. Let me say this before anything else. Character design is good but not great. We have the general and expected patterns applied at least till chapter ~40. Worldbuilding is also not bad. Not much is revealed in the beginning though you discover more and more hints how this world functions, which is great and makes up the general naming of regions (They are are named after the cardinal directions). The reason why my rating is so low is the horrendous grammar. Genders get swapped, tenses messed up, words go missing, syntax and semantic are shredded, singular and plural are decided by the throw of the dice. I get that the author is not a native but is it really that hard to get grammerly or a similar free software to check the writing before you post? Can’t comment on the yuri yet. I’m only ~40 chapters in and the relationship is still in a budding stage. Is cute though. A little too much plot armour in some cases but imho it’s tolerable.
PLEASE HAVE STABLE UPDATES FFS D; -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Came in with big hope for a original cultivation novel, and after reading about 50chapter it somewhat is, but not to the degree i hoped. The world is like almost every cultivation story is. Writing quality is very good for webnovel and so far the plot is very catching. My problem is the MC and her companion. I had hoped for a story where someone would start out more robotic and trubles connection with emotion, but by chapter 10, the MC is already in love with her companion. From there the story takes a strange turne where everything feels like it's trying to rush in to a relationship and romance without building the characters one bit. Rushing for romance and lemons is the sad end for so many potential good cultivation novels.
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i recommend this book i love snowy she is so strong and amazing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
ネタバレを明かす please update more i absolutely love this story ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖 💕 ♥ 💜 ❤ 💗 💖
This novel might be good but I hate super gifts in my notifications. I'm shamelessly adding a poor review because I'm forced to look at a notice for this novel.
Another shameless 5-stars review from author. Do you like Yuri? Do you like OP MC with System? Do you like Cultivation World where Young Master ruthlessly slapped? Just give it a try, you will get a triple-delight!