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This is an early review as i just started it & currently at chapter 25. (I did not read the Auxiliary Volume, i went straight to the story to see the actual build of the story within the content of the chapters) I find the story is paced too fast at the beginning & makes it chaotic as the MC is just starting in the new life with no real knowledge of who they are now & the author just jumps around with different sudden interactions to create plot points. The MC at times is oblivious without common sense & not trying to find out more details about this new world or to speak up, but yet acts on impulse with creating interactions that create issues. MC acts like people are too dangerous to stand up to question/interact with them, but then with one person they decide she wants to fight them to see how powerful they are. I will keep reading & hope this is just some hurdles as the author is trying to setup this story with their ideas & readers input & can make it more steady as their direction becomes more solid. I will reevaluate my review as i get further in & redo my review to how it is going IMO.
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I've already started the rewrite. But I don't intend to publish it until I've at least completed the first two volumes. By optimistic estimates, you can expect the first release around the end of Jan next year.
Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!
Fantasy · DaoistDumbledore
Even if she ends up with one, i have seen others use harem tag as mainly the "other women" are more into wanting to hang with the MC to show their affection & to have a close bond in helping the MC with their goals, even thou they have a little bit of ecchi interactions.
Xiao Hong will end up with only one partner, but since you have reached this point, you know very well that Xiao Hong is quite lustful. And in a world where harems are a norm… well, you can imagine her thoughts. This will be part of her character development. I haven't really decided how I should go about this: Like, would she cheat? Or officially have two partners? Or would it be an 'on and off' kinda relationship - bouncing between partners? Or something else? Do you think I should label it a harem even if she ends up with one? Let me know in the comments below.
Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!
Fantasy · DaoistDumbledore
So far it has been a enjoyable story. We get world build weaved in as we start to follow the 2 as they begin to understand each other with their different backgrounds & races. Nicely written scenes & interactions as the story build up. Let's see where the story will go.
plus her mother likes to play dress up with them.
Our mother along with several servants bathed us in special water and then took us to a room that contained many clothes. I almost had a panic attack when I looked at the amount of clothes.
Reincarnated as a Girl in a World of Cultivation.
Fantasy · Tennouji_Kotarou
I think the panic attack is that her mother with play dress-up doll with so many cloths.
Our mother along with several servants bathed us in special water and then took us to a room that contained many clothes. I almost had a panic attack when I looked at the amount of clothes.
Reincarnated as a Girl in a World of Cultivation.
Fantasy · Tennouji_Kotarou
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The Vampire & Her Witch
Fantasy · JustJae