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En lo personal es una historia que me encanta, espero que la continúes a pesar que ya paso tiempo que la actualizaste En lo personal es una historia que me encanta, espero que la continúes a pesar que ya paso tiempo que la actualizaste
We are waiting for a new chapter. Еададалалалдавдвдвддаадабпбпбадададададдаадададдаададдаададдаададдададададааддадададададададададададад
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I'm sorry but that title triggered me in all the wrong ways ,fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfio
Es una historia muy interesante, hay muy pocas de Lucifer y debo decirlo, me encatana esta historia, espero con ansias el proximo capitulo. Ta bien bonito el perrito.
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will there be more chapters or maybe rewrite? cuz its godly idea!! i really liked these 14 chapters :p i really hope that i could read more of this :C
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Im suprised this fanfic has zero negative reviews almost like there dissapearing, but i digress the fanfic itself is alright the aide characters are boring and have no personality.
Increíble Leelo,solo hazlo Es lo totalmente asombroso,y son solo un par de minutos de lectura(desgraciadamente, al menos todavia) Solo dale la oportunidad, se lo merece, si hay algo decente que se pueda leer aquí,este esta entre los 50 primeros en el rango de fanfic
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Normally I don't do this, but this book its amazing, a great work, the MC, the plot and the background are fantastic (maybe at the beginning a little cliche but who cares hahaha), the only bad thing about this its the update timeframes, but I can manage, author thanks for your work and please don't drop it, I beg you!!
I was going to read this but then I saw the harem tag :( ..................................................................................
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I have seen your history with writing and I’m impressed and I’m fairly you wrong just drop for no reason so i suggest reading this to any One in the cusp of doing so
Muito bom, eu gostei muito do personagem Lúcifer, estou ansioso pra ver o relacionamento dele com a Nat e talvez mais tarde com a Feiticeira Escarlate.
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I like your story and your idea is also good, but so few chapters... I think I will be back in a few months to read more. Don't drop this because it has potential
Well since the things he writes are magnificent i will give this 5 stars. His kyrptonian marvel one was great and it was really the first harem ive liked so i expect this to be the same.
Meh.😒😒😒😒😒the world seems fake. and this system only makes everything worse😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
En lo personal es una historia que me encanta, espero que la continúes a pesar que ya paso tiempo que la actualizaste En lo personal es una historia que me encanta, espero que la continúes a pesar que ya paso tiempo que la actualizaste
We are waiting for a new chapter. Еададалалалдавдвдвддаадабпбпбадададададдаадададдаададдаададдаададдададададааддадададададададададададад
ネタバレを明かす I'm sorry but that title triggered me in all the wrong ways ,fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfio
Es una historia muy interesante, hay muy pocas de Lucifer y debo decirlo, me encatana esta historia, espero con ansias el proximo capitulo. Ta bien bonito el perrito.
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will there be more chapters or maybe rewrite? cuz its godly idea!! i really liked these 14 chapters :p i really hope that i could read more of this :C
please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚please update 😭🤚
soooooo gooood please don't stop [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Im suprised this fanfic has zero negative reviews almost like there dissapearing, but i digress the fanfic itself is alright the aide characters are boring and have no personality.
Increíble Leelo,solo hazlo Es lo totalmente asombroso,y son solo un par de minutos de lectura(desgraciadamente, al menos todavia) Solo dale la oportunidad, se lo merece, si hay algo decente que se pueda leer aquí,este esta entre los 50 primeros en el rango de fanfic
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Normally I don't do this, but this book its amazing, a great work, the MC, the plot and the background are fantastic (maybe at the beginning a little cliche but who cares hahaha), the only bad thing about this its the update timeframes, but I can manage, author thanks for your work and please don't drop it, I beg you!!
I was going to read this but then I saw the harem tag :( ..................................................................................
Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good! Very Good!
I have seen your history with writing and I’m impressed and I’m fairly you wrong just drop for no reason so i suggest reading this to any One in the cusp of doing so
Muito bom, eu gostei muito do personagem Lúcifer, estou ansioso pra ver o relacionamento dele com a Nat e talvez mais tarde com a Feiticeira Escarlate.
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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
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I like your story and your idea is also good, but so few chapters... I think I will be back in a few months to read more. Don't drop this because it has potential
Well since the things he writes are magnificent i will give this 5 stars. His kyrptonian marvel one was great and it was really the first harem ive liked so i expect this to be the same.
Meh.😒😒😒😒😒the world seems fake. and this system only makes everything worse😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒