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I have to say this story seems to be one of the most unique stories I have read so far. Though I have to wonder why is there not more angel self inserts? But overall this story is an amazing story that is well thought out and creatively unique.
I'm too lazy to write a full review and it's late so I'll give this a 5/5 for getting my attention and making me laugh. Good luck author :DD
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this is awesome. I always wanted to read stuff like this it's amazing. I hope you continue and don't think about the haters and I hope you get through the depression if you still have it god please you.👍♥️👍♥️
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It's a great fan fic. The concept is good and the execution so far has been great. ---------‐---------------------------------------------------
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Well, for now the fan-fic is very interesting, keep it up author, ah, just my opinion, don't make this fan-fic a "kingdom building" if you know what I mean, it would be better for Lucifer to act alone, and having companions / friends who help you with some fights and among other things, you know.
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I have to say this story seems to be one of the most unique stories I have read so far. Though I have to wonder why is there not more angel self inserts? But overall this story is an amazing story that is well thought out and creatively unique.
I'm too lazy to write a full review and it's late so I'll give this a 5/5 for getting my attention and making me laugh. Good luck author :DD
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this is awesome. I always wanted to read stuff like this it's amazing. I hope you continue and don't think about the haters and I hope you get through the depression if you still have it god please you.👍♥️👍♥️
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It's a great fan fic. The concept is good and the execution so far has been great. ---------‐---------------------------------------------------
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Well, for now the fan-fic is very interesting, keep it up author, ah, just my opinion, don't make this fan-fic a "kingdom building" if you know what I mean, it would be better for Lucifer to act alone, and having companions / friends who help you with some fights and among other things, you know.
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