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A satisfactory combination of system and normal cultivation setting A plus point for adding more races than the tipycal elf,dwarf,... +:mc isn't some stupid guy unaware of everything +:He isn't cold-blooded which is rare in recent novels +: Hunting beasts scenes appears real because we don't see mc hunting them with just a single slash of his sword -: the only thing that worries me a bit is that I don't see any description on what is beyond advanced dimension
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Overall the novel is decent. But thee are just somethings that I can't move past. One of these is the numbers. Another is how the MC personality and how he acts is conflicting with what the author wrote and described.The numbers is the biggest one for me. At one point the MC is jumping, and exerting force to evade an enemy. this would be understandable, if the enemy wasn't even 2ft tall. 45 cm is 1.47 ft. Don't include numbers if they make no sense.
Almost dropped the story because I could tell that it was finished and short but with that said I’m glad I didn’t drop it. Hope there will be a second book about Shane that was mentioned by the author. I would definitely reads it to follow the story.
Hello, I really liked your book, in all its aspects, and therefore I would like to know when the release of the promised continuation (2 volumes of the book) will begin?
very enjoyable read and with a lot of potential. I only feel that the last stages were somewhat rushed.
When is the seque coming? God eyes ended and well, that explains the syst and all that… soooo… is there a next part comin? ………………. Lol ………….
Amazing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Dont abandon the sequel even if u take another year
It’s quite to go through the start of Shane’s journey at the age of 16 to himself by finding a way to live and to survive what life with the unknown throws at him in one way, shape or form along with that he actually try’s to get out of his father’s/dad’s shadow without any help unless you count the advice, tips, hints, clues or whatever he deals within his makeshift Uncles and Auntie’s. Personally, I think that he has a long road of hardships with ups and downs of good and bad no matter what others had thought of him.
It just end like that or not but i hope it not end yet and will continue . Well the story is quite nice and the storyline is quite interesting.
This story is interesting and fit the authors universe. It contains another variation of pet beasts/soul sounds and world build that is really interesting. a Good story to read if you follow the author's other stories. However my criticism is that some parts feel rushed and that supporting characters (friends) one thing will be important end up being ignored and not refered again. the colleagues Olivia, Aimy and Leon disappeared in the story, and even Shane friends in the Elun race that really invest in him, are ignored when the calamities start to happen (no late story interaction with them when the system is failing and humanity is migrating, even though the Elun helped him and invested in him due to some foresight skill, it almost seems that Shane abandons them).
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Is God's Eyes and Pirmordial Dimension connected/in the same universe or multiverse. I asking this because I saw that both novels mentioned the Corvi race.
The concept is intriguing but that is where it ends. After that, wether it is story progression, being coherent or the Main character, everything is disappointing. Considering the militarised nature of the world, the lack of respect MC shows towards its military is very surprising. The only apt character trait that author has been able to bring forth is how a typical wealthy son would act. He has his narrow point of view which is based on the elite pov as is usually is.
well made background. not the most perfect and abit rushed towards the end. one of those novel that doesnt make it feels like its dragging out on purpose after 400+ chpts. abit disappointed about the sudden ending, could had lasted another 200 chpt before it moved on i felt.
Basically the story still to be continue on another book, but yes, The story was good enough to fill your Sunday. I read this book on single day on limited free event. the story basically like that Apocalypse came to mc planet and then everything begun to evolve.
loved this book a little bit different from the normal reincarnation novels. Giving everyone a system is pretty unique. The battles and lore will definitely keep me coming back. Please hurry up with either sequel! 3-1-22
great find and an amazing read. just wo during when the sequel will be coming out for this. it has great character development, an amazing plot line, and so much potential. can't wait for more.
This story, just like the author's other novels, has such a deep story and attention to detail. It is within the same multiverse as the others, and if you enjoy this story, I HIGHLY recommend the others. I can't tell you how many nights I've stayed up binge reading, rereading, and just thinking about the possibilities this story can go in the future. There are only 2 issues I saw, which are easy to overlook once I got accustomed to the author's writing: information tends to be repeated (which in some cases is helpful due to the amount of info provided) and the slight grammatical and spelling errors, but this is because these stories are written in English, which the author has said is not his first language. That in itself deserves praise, as many (myself included) can only speak/write/understand one language, and the face he has written 3 different stories (with I believe over 1300 chapters combined) in a secondary language is phenomenal. I hope one day these stories can be adapted into web comics (one example being Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint) as I truly believe they deserve it. Thank you HG for all that you do!
Liked the story very much. Same interest from beginning to the ene of first chapter. I will be awaiting for the next chapter to be started in the life of MC.
I have read some or all of hundreds of novels on webnovel. This is one of about 20 that have had me anxiously awaiting the next chapter. The other books are decent reads but this one has me hooked. The reinvention of Arthurian lore is truly well done and mingles well with the author's adaptation of world building "dimensions".
It was an amazing read can't wait until the author releases the 2nd part / book 2 of the of the series if you likes his writing/style check out God's Eyes or his latest novel Spirit Soul
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Except some rare spelling/writting improvements this first tome of Shane's adventures is very nice ! I can only look towards diving into this world !
[Author note: With this chapter, the first volume of Shane's adventure comes to an end. Thank you for accompanying me in Shane's adventures and I hope you all enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. As I am building a multiverse, it is very important for the timelines to be aligned, which means that I have to divide Shane's journey into two parts! I don't want to spoiler you guys too much, after all! I hope this won't come across as an absolute shocker to all of you. My writing journey has just begun and I have a new novel in store for you. It will be released in order to create a suitable timeline and trust me, it is even better ;) This new novel will be released on the 1st January 2022, while the sequel detailing Shane's escapades will follow once the time is ripe! Happy reading!!] I understand what the Author is trying to do here and I hope it works out for him and his LNs. However, for me this means that I have to wait over a year or two to finally get to read anything more about this LN while he writes other ones. Right now as a reader all I care about is this one and moving forward with the story. By the time he gets back to this LN I will have stopped even caring about it or the MC.
heavily enjoyed this one. there were a couple spots I found boring but they were necessary and others may actually enjoy those sections. well worth the read.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Author has an amazing writing stYle, Thats able to instantly draw you in(get your stonea ready youll know what i mean) The flow of the story is easy to follow gobing you enoygj to maintain the mystery it should have Until the end of the ride.
Sleep, eat, read, enjoy repeat. Not enough for you? Well how about I tell you how good the author is. I would but that would consider as a spoiler and I am no spoiler guys especially for something enjoyable. So just READ
i haven't started reading yet, but since the comments are cool I'll try it .
The story itself is quite nice, the information "dump" is quite easily consumable and doesnt overwhelm as its written well, in this novel in comparison to god eyes we have more detail for the cultivation, with how the first three stages are preparatory for actual tranformations or evolutions to come, how in these three supposed perfect foundations for body and energy can be made, and further levels dont have these foundations to segregate but will have "actual cultivation" so more on their own comprehensions and raw power, while building on their formidable base which they can create before breaking through to the 4th level, the academy is also finally including more characters which is a fresh feeling and much needed Now for other things Seeing as the other novel is heavily focused on beasts, i honestly hope we dont actually see an actual beast army here like we will potentially see in the other one The novel is again quite smooth and in 161 chapters has set quite a nice base, from the slow start to the quick catchup to now competing with the same age, which has made the novel quite enjoyable to read, though honestly freaky situations only happening alround the mc in 200 years of history has to stop at some point now that its been done 2-3 times Lastly and my only problem with this novel honestly except the unending monologues and constant calculative and nuetral thought process of the mc which doesnt match his personality anyway, adding some actual additional characters his age who have conversations is much needed, the monologues at 161 chapters are finally starting to live out their welcome with the base for the story set The mc, has been depicted in quite a paradoxical way, ill ignore the reincarnated stuff as thats honestly not really given much to his personality except a sense of adventure which he wouldve gotten himself anyway in time , we have in these chapters seen so many defining features which are parts of a much more high profile personality, be it his unbending will, ambition for freedom and power, cunning, volatile temper, greed, used to killing thus calmer and having more time for calculations, having lived with the stronngest humans who have been told to themselves have high profile personalities and not at all passive or subdued, even implying the mc has taken much of his own personality from looking at his father and aunts and uncles, these characterics he suddenly shows in situations are supposed to be his personality not just parts of it, him having resentment towards being kept in the mansion and not let out for anything he likes to do has been implied but its just not strong enough to the extent where he doesnt seem to actually resent anyone but take everything as love, which is illogical for a teenager (even if reincarnated teenager) he is immature and should resent but doesnt, hes said to be lazy and a tantrum thrower, but these are barely shown,hes even said to be overbearing when fighting or in an agressive mood due to the things hes had to go theough in his childhood Honestly its quite weird with so many traits that the mc has been shown to have a neutral and passive personality and thought process(monologues) it makes no sense, nobody can have a neutral personality and have these volatile and high profile /active traits rather hes shown to be abnormally passive,neutral,polite and nice as if something is suppressing his soul and actual personality and it only breaks out when hes put in a situation, plus being trapped in one place for all his life should make him want to know lots of people, make lots of noise, couse a havoc, let the seven sins of his personality take over, make mistakes, whereas what we see is a guy who doesn't want any attention and is somehow a lone wolf, is lonely but wants to keep to himself, doesnt talk to people much, ofcourse not many his equals have been shown for him to equally talk to but thats not something that can be helped, he has no teenage pangs or much interest in the opposite gender or anything even though hes a 2 time teenager, who should be facing hormonal mood swings This personality of the mc with a rational, nuetral, passive, pragmatic core is paradoxical to his traits and is illogical, the god eyes mc having almost the same personality is another minus, but the god eyes mcs personality is justified unlike this one Unless the mc is fixed to what has actually been written about him rather than this, this story being very well written and a brilliant read takes a back seat as the mcs perspective makes no sense and almost makes it seem like the mcs soul is suppresed or that were somehow reading about the god eyes mc rather than this ones Honestly, i like the book and hope that the mc is atleast tweaked/fixed to some degree as i really hope to read till the end!
ネタバレを明かす A satisfactory combination of system and normal cultivation setting A plus point for adding more races than the tipycal elf,dwarf,... +:mc isn't some stupid guy unaware of everything +:He isn't cold-blooded which is rare in recent novels +: Hunting beasts scenes appears real because we don't see mc hunting them with just a single slash of his sword -: the only thing that worries me a bit is that I don't see any description on what is beyond advanced dimension
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
Overall the novel is decent. But thee are just somethings that I can't move past. One of these is the numbers. Another is how the MC personality and how he acts is conflicting with what the author wrote and described.The numbers is the biggest one for me. At one point the MC is jumping, and exerting force to evade an enemy. this would be understandable, if the enemy wasn't even 2ft tall. 45 cm is 1.47 ft. Don't include numbers if they make no sense.
Almost dropped the story because I could tell that it was finished and short but with that said I’m glad I didn’t drop it. Hope there will be a second book about Shane that was mentioned by the author. I would definitely reads it to follow the story.
Hello, I really liked your book, in all its aspects, and therefore I would like to know when the release of the promised continuation (2 volumes of the book) will begin?
very enjoyable read and with a lot of potential. I only feel that the last stages were somewhat rushed.
When is the seque coming? God eyes ended and well, that explains the syst and all that… soooo… is there a next part comin? ………………. Lol ………….
Amazing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Dont abandon the sequel even if u take another year
It’s quite to go through the start of Shane’s journey at the age of 16 to himself by finding a way to live and to survive what life with the unknown throws at him in one way, shape or form along with that he actually try’s to get out of his father’s/dad’s shadow without any help unless you count the advice, tips, hints, clues or whatever he deals within his makeshift Uncles and Auntie’s. Personally, I think that he has a long road of hardships with ups and downs of good and bad no matter what others had thought of him.
It just end like that or not but i hope it not end yet and will continue . Well the story is quite nice and the storyline is quite interesting.
This story is interesting and fit the authors universe. It contains another variation of pet beasts/soul sounds and world build that is really interesting. a Good story to read if you follow the author's other stories. However my criticism is that some parts feel rushed and that supporting characters (friends) one thing will be important end up being ignored and not refered again. the colleagues Olivia, Aimy and Leon disappeared in the story, and even Shane friends in the Elun race that really invest in him, are ignored when the calamities start to happen (no late story interaction with them when the system is failing and humanity is migrating, even though the Elun helped him and invested in him due to some foresight skill, it almost seems that Shane abandons them).
ネタバレを明かす Is God's Eyes and Pirmordial Dimension connected/in the same universe or multiverse. I asking this because I saw that both novels mentioned the Corvi race.
The concept is intriguing but that is where it ends. After that, wether it is story progression, being coherent or the Main character, everything is disappointing. Considering the militarised nature of the world, the lack of respect MC shows towards its military is very surprising. The only apt character trait that author has been able to bring forth is how a typical wealthy son would act. He has his narrow point of view which is based on the elite pov as is usually is.
well made background. not the most perfect and abit rushed towards the end. one of those novel that doesnt make it feels like its dragging out on purpose after 400+ chpts. abit disappointed about the sudden ending, could had lasted another 200 chpt before it moved on i felt.
Basically the story still to be continue on another book, but yes, The story was good enough to fill your Sunday. I read this book on single day on limited free event. the story basically like that Apocalypse came to mc planet and then everything begun to evolve.
loved this book a little bit different from the normal reincarnation novels. Giving everyone a system is pretty unique. The battles and lore will definitely keep me coming back. Please hurry up with either sequel! 3-1-22
great find and an amazing read. just wo during when the sequel will be coming out for this. it has great character development, an amazing plot line, and so much potential. can't wait for more.
This story, just like the author's other novels, has such a deep story and attention to detail. It is within the same multiverse as the others, and if you enjoy this story, I HIGHLY recommend the others. I can't tell you how many nights I've stayed up binge reading, rereading, and just thinking about the possibilities this story can go in the future. There are only 2 issues I saw, which are easy to overlook once I got accustomed to the author's writing: information tends to be repeated (which in some cases is helpful due to the amount of info provided) and the slight grammatical and spelling errors, but this is because these stories are written in English, which the author has said is not his first language. That in itself deserves praise, as many (myself included) can only speak/write/understand one language, and the face he has written 3 different stories (with I believe over 1300 chapters combined) in a secondary language is phenomenal. I hope one day these stories can be adapted into web comics (one example being Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint) as I truly believe they deserve it. Thank you HG for all that you do!
Liked the story very much. Same interest from beginning to the ene of first chapter. I will be awaiting for the next chapter to be started in the life of MC.
I have read some or all of hundreds of novels on webnovel. This is one of about 20 that have had me anxiously awaiting the next chapter. The other books are decent reads but this one has me hooked. The reinvention of Arthurian lore is truly well done and mingles well with the author's adaptation of world building "dimensions".
It was an amazing read can't wait until the author releases the 2nd part / book 2 of the of the series if you likes his writing/style check out God's Eyes or his latest novel Spirit Soul
Great read ĺlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllløøøllkjllljlljlkjkkkkklkkkklklkklllllllllllllooo lllllllĺlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
Except some rare spelling/writting improvements this first tome of Shane's adventures is very nice ! I can only look towards diving into this world !
[Author note: With this chapter, the first volume of Shane's adventure comes to an end. Thank you for accompanying me in Shane's adventures and I hope you all enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. As I am building a multiverse, it is very important for the timelines to be aligned, which means that I have to divide Shane's journey into two parts! I don't want to spoiler you guys too much, after all! I hope this won't come across as an absolute shocker to all of you. My writing journey has just begun and I have a new novel in store for you. It will be released in order to create a suitable timeline and trust me, it is even better ;) This new novel will be released on the 1st January 2022, while the sequel detailing Shane's escapades will follow once the time is ripe! Happy reading!!] I understand what the Author is trying to do here and I hope it works out for him and his LNs. However, for me this means that I have to wait over a year or two to finally get to read anything more about this LN while he writes other ones. Right now as a reader all I care about is this one and moving forward with the story. By the time he gets back to this LN I will have stopped even caring about it or the MC.
heavily enjoyed this one. there were a couple spots I found boring but they were necessary and others may actually enjoy those sections. well worth the read.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Author has an amazing writing stYle, Thats able to instantly draw you in(get your stonea ready youll know what i mean) The flow of the story is easy to follow gobing you enoygj to maintain the mystery it should have Until the end of the ride.
Sleep, eat, read, enjoy repeat. Not enough for you? Well how about I tell you how good the author is. I would but that would consider as a spoiler and I am no spoiler guys especially for something enjoyable. So just READ
i haven't started reading yet, but since the comments are cool I'll try it .
The story itself is quite nice, the information "dump" is quite easily consumable and doesnt overwhelm as its written well, in this novel in comparison to god eyes we have more detail for the cultivation, with how the first three stages are preparatory for actual tranformations or evolutions to come, how in these three supposed perfect foundations for body and energy can be made, and further levels dont have these foundations to segregate but will have "actual cultivation" so more on their own comprehensions and raw power, while building on their formidable base which they can create before breaking through to the 4th level, the academy is also finally including more characters which is a fresh feeling and much needed Now for other things Seeing as the other novel is heavily focused on beasts, i honestly hope we dont actually see an actual beast army here like we will potentially see in the other one The novel is again quite smooth and in 161 chapters has set quite a nice base, from the slow start to the quick catchup to now competing with the same age, which has made the novel quite enjoyable to read, though honestly freaky situations only happening alround the mc in 200 years of history has to stop at some point now that its been done 2-3 times Lastly and my only problem with this novel honestly except the unending monologues and constant calculative and nuetral thought process of the mc which doesnt match his personality anyway, adding some actual additional characters his age who have conversations is much needed, the monologues at 161 chapters are finally starting to live out their welcome with the base for the story set The mc, has been depicted in quite a paradoxical way, ill ignore the reincarnated stuff as thats honestly not really given much to his personality except a sense of adventure which he wouldve gotten himself anyway in time , we have in these chapters seen so many defining features which are parts of a much more high profile personality, be it his unbending will, ambition for freedom and power, cunning, volatile temper, greed, used to killing thus calmer and having more time for calculations, having lived with the stronngest humans who have been told to themselves have high profile personalities and not at all passive or subdued, even implying the mc has taken much of his own personality from looking at his father and aunts and uncles, these characterics he suddenly shows in situations are supposed to be his personality not just parts of it, him having resentment towards being kept in the mansion and not let out for anything he likes to do has been implied but its just not strong enough to the extent where he doesnt seem to actually resent anyone but take everything as love, which is illogical for a teenager (even if reincarnated teenager) he is immature and should resent but doesnt, hes said to be lazy and a tantrum thrower, but these are barely shown,hes even said to be overbearing when fighting or in an agressive mood due to the things hes had to go theough in his childhood Honestly its quite weird with so many traits that the mc has been shown to have a neutral and passive personality and thought process(monologues) it makes no sense, nobody can have a neutral personality and have these volatile and high profile /active traits rather hes shown to be abnormally passive,neutral,polite and nice as if something is suppressing his soul and actual personality and it only breaks out when hes put in a situation, plus being trapped in one place for all his life should make him want to know lots of people, make lots of noise, couse a havoc, let the seven sins of his personality take over, make mistakes, whereas what we see is a guy who doesn't want any attention and is somehow a lone wolf, is lonely but wants to keep to himself, doesnt talk to people much, ofcourse not many his equals have been shown for him to equally talk to but thats not something that can be helped, he has no teenage pangs or much interest in the opposite gender or anything even though hes a 2 time teenager, who should be facing hormonal mood swings This personality of the mc with a rational, nuetral, passive, pragmatic core is paradoxical to his traits and is illogical, the god eyes mc having almost the same personality is another minus, but the god eyes mcs personality is justified unlike this one Unless the mc is fixed to what has actually been written about him rather than this, this story being very well written and a brilliant read takes a back seat as the mcs perspective makes no sense and almost makes it seem like the mcs soul is suppresed or that were somehow reading about the god eyes mc rather than this ones Honestly, i like the book and hope that the mc is atleast tweaked/fixed to some degree as i really hope to read till the end!
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