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Quick author review: If the release date and time do not match. Then graciously accept my sincerest apologies to everyone. Because if it does occur. Then I was preoccupied with robbing merchants during that time in order to steal some books for college since this poor little bandit needed to pass. As a result, consider this a future apology to future readers. Once again. Do be careful and keep an eye out for the legendary bandit who is on the run. By the author: BlindBandit
Background is great. Writing quality is noteworhty. Story development is solid and tension is there. Plot is creative. Characters are great and the dialogue is superb. I would have liked to see a bit more description of how the characters looked and what the setting looked like. The world background seems to be solid and well fleshed out. Good job.
Oh wow! I must say, the author's horror writing is incredible. He perfectly portrays a sharp contrast between creepy and normal; horror-thriller and modern-regular. This book is definitely unique and captivating. Great work.[img=recommend]
The epilogues are the crucial foundation to this book. The way the author tried to explain the world background is very detailed, and this has helped for the development of the further story. I can't seem to take my focus away from the book, the plot is too intriguing and the characters are awesome!!!! Great Work!!!
Very descriptive and gory, Right up to my taste. Though it was a slow-paced novel, it's very nice to read nonetheless. Good luck on your journey author! I wish you the best.
I don't usually read these kinds of novels as I would be scared for my life. But, what the heck I gave it a shot, and hartie-har har, I've now petrified. Thanks, author!
Simply amazing, good background, characters are lifelike, no grammatical errors, and most especially, very horrifying to read at night and entertaining. !! It's a great book. I recommend.
It's great, and there is plenty of it to read for now since the author is generous! The story is compelling and the idea is refreshing and all of that is packaged in a giftbox of great writing, unique pacing and immense potential. I wish you the best of luck, author and great work for pumping out such good content! Read it! Have a good day!
Didn't see any errors from it. Well-descriptive narration. The title and the prologue is hooking enough for the readers to read the book. give this a read, everyone!
Wow!!! The cover page is stunning! The synopsis is short, but gives an idea of what to expect from the story and makes the reader interested in the plot. The story is really dark... and nicely written. Well done!
Oh my god! This is an incredibly distinct book. The beginning chapters were full of paranormal activity and terrifying to read. I was so scared of what would happen next as I am afraid of horror stories, but I just couldn't stop reading due to the catchy storyline. The writing style is very descriptive, and the author's imaginations are out of this world. All these spark the readers' curiosity. Nice job on creating such a distinct piece, author.💕
Good stuff you got going here! The opening was quite bizarre in terms of description, leaving me a bit confused at times, but it set a good tone for the rest of the story. Keep up the good work!
This story had an intriguing start and the writing quality is great. The pacing of the story is a bit slow. But I guess it is needed for character and relationship building. You have a good story here! Keep on updating! :)
Your work was really wholesome the story and the idea was hooking I loved the way you explained every little thing and there were few punctuation errors just fix them and it's beyond perfect Good work author
What's about this novel? I got interested in the first part. Can you tell me more and I'm proud of you that you mention the Philippines😅. For the readers who want to read this, there's no problem with the grammar in the first quarter.
This story revolves around a teenager trying to survive in an apocalypse world with religious overtones set with modern and fantasy elements. The first chapter does a good job of setting the horror one will find upon waking up to Judgement Day, and the feeling remains consistent throughout the rest of the chapters. The writing could use some polishing here and there, but otherwise it is enjoyable.
I like a good book that plays with your emotions. I laughed, was sad and even felt angry in this one. What a fantastic control of the readers emotions. It is really worth trying out.
I have not gone too far in this book,but it has a certain catchy element. That make you want to read more, the story development is top notch. Well-done👍 I would definitely want to see June and Bryan love develop too with each chapter. Added to my library 😉
I do very much like the tone and atmosphere of this book. I also like how you add the feel and nature of each time and year that this book takes place. Most importantly, the worldbuilding is fantastic and the character development is in-depth. This story is really great and I do wish for more chapters!
Seems really interesting from the get-go. The starting introduction is really eye-catching and really sucks one inside. Hopefully the trend continues in the future also
Impressive. Chapters are in sync in terms of direction. No info dumps whatsoever. What I appreciate from this novel is the technique of showing all of the things that we the readers need to know as we continue reading on. In terms of info placement, this novel excels at that. The words used here invoke imagery, and that's an important thing if you want to have your readers engaged as they read. So good job author on that. Been a while since I had an engaging read featuring fantasy and horror, and if you're a fan of any of those genres, then this book is recommended for you.
Judgement day has arrived. I judge this book to be..... highly polished. The writing style is clean, not too cloudy and not too informal and underworked. You walk a fine line here mate, and you do it well.
This novel is very enjoyable, and has an interesting plot . the pace the of the story is a little slow but other from that the story is perfect .
This story is interesting. You learn about Bryan and his day to day life, especially his relationship with others. It starts slow but picks up later. There are some writing mistakes but are easy to fix. Overall, this novel is interesting so have a read! It might call to you~
Character build up is really great and capturing in this novel! I don't usually read this kind of novel, but I am sure it gives me true vibes of thrilling world with you writing style! The way you bring up that backstory in the prologue also made easier to inderstand the mc! Keep up the good work author!💛💛
finally I found a interesting book🥰🥰🥰 such a wonderful book💜💜💜 I'm completely in love with your book author❤❤❤ please update more and more😎😎😎 I'm excited😍😍😍
Just one thing I love most about this book is the relatable words. More are the apocalypse idea about the book. I must say that this book is such with a great potential to grow on this app. Read this book, if you aren't you are missing!!!
Excellent job! I enjoyed reading it. Interesting story, fun characters and well thought out world back ground. Keep writing and I am sure you will do very well!
Amazing concept. The initial chapters sets up the backstory of the MC in a very touching way. And then the mayhem starts. A larger than life concept that I cannot wait to see how the author pulls off. Thank you so much, author! It will surely remain in my library!
Quick author review: Personally, I gave this story a mature, game-like system, bearing in mind the novel's emphasis on gruesome tragedies. The MC, on the other hand, is not your conventional hero rescuing the damsel in distress, but rather an average guy who makes important decisions. "FAIR WARNING" He's not a good guy, but he's also not a bad guy either; it all depends on the scenario. Unless, of course, you read it and judge it for yourself. I've created him as an intellectual male protagonist to the highest standard of my caveman's brain, while also having not too broken talents and limited plot armor. I'm aiming to make this novel as immersive as possible, therefore his plot armor gets thrown away. So, if you prefer heroes or overpowered MC'S, then I'm sorry but I like to take it slow. Of course, as the story progresses, I'll spice up his abilities. Much love, The Author For the release date: Monday-Sunday, 11:30 p.m. (GMT+8)
Quick author review: If the release date and time do not match. Then graciously accept my sincerest apologies to everyone. Because if it does occur. Then I was preoccupied with robbing merchants during that time in order to steal some books for college since this poor little bandit needed to pass. As a result, consider this a future apology to future readers. Once again. Do be careful and keep an eye out for the legendary bandit who is on the run. By the author: BlindBandit
Background is great. Writing quality is noteworhty. Story development is solid and tension is there. Plot is creative. Characters are great and the dialogue is superb. I would have liked to see a bit more description of how the characters looked and what the setting looked like. The world background seems to be solid and well fleshed out. Good job.
Oh wow! I must say, the author's horror writing is incredible. He perfectly portrays a sharp contrast between creepy and normal; horror-thriller and modern-regular. This book is definitely unique and captivating. Great work.[img=recommend]
The epilogues are the crucial foundation to this book. The way the author tried to explain the world background is very detailed, and this has helped for the development of the further story. I can't seem to take my focus away from the book, the plot is too intriguing and the characters are awesome!!!! Great Work!!!
Very descriptive and gory, Right up to my taste. Though it was a slow-paced novel, it's very nice to read nonetheless. Good luck on your journey author! I wish you the best.
I don't usually read these kinds of novels as I would be scared for my life. But, what the heck I gave it a shot, and hartie-har har, I've now petrified. Thanks, author!
Simply amazing, good background, characters are lifelike, no grammatical errors, and most especially, very horrifying to read at night and entertaining. !! It's a great book. I recommend.
It's great, and there is plenty of it to read for now since the author is generous! The story is compelling and the idea is refreshing and all of that is packaged in a giftbox of great writing, unique pacing and immense potential. I wish you the best of luck, author and great work for pumping out such good content! Read it! Have a good day!
Didn't see any errors from it. Well-descriptive narration. The title and the prologue is hooking enough for the readers to read the book. give this a read, everyone!
Wow!!! The cover page is stunning! The synopsis is short, but gives an idea of what to expect from the story and makes the reader interested in the plot. The story is really dark... and nicely written. Well done!
Oh my god! This is an incredibly distinct book. The beginning chapters were full of paranormal activity and terrifying to read. I was so scared of what would happen next as I am afraid of horror stories, but I just couldn't stop reading due to the catchy storyline. The writing style is very descriptive, and the author's imaginations are out of this world. All these spark the readers' curiosity. Nice job on creating such a distinct piece, author.💕
Good stuff you got going here! The opening was quite bizarre in terms of description, leaving me a bit confused at times, but it set a good tone for the rest of the story. Keep up the good work!
This story had an intriguing start and the writing quality is great. The pacing of the story is a bit slow. But I guess it is needed for character and relationship building. You have a good story here! Keep on updating! :)
Your work was really wholesome the story and the idea was hooking I loved the way you explained every little thing and there were few punctuation errors just fix them and it's beyond perfect Good work author
What's about this novel? I got interested in the first part. Can you tell me more and I'm proud of you that you mention the Philippines😅. For the readers who want to read this, there's no problem with the grammar in the first quarter.
This story revolves around a teenager trying to survive in an apocalypse world with religious overtones set with modern and fantasy elements. The first chapter does a good job of setting the horror one will find upon waking up to Judgement Day, and the feeling remains consistent throughout the rest of the chapters. The writing could use some polishing here and there, but otherwise it is enjoyable.
I like a good book that plays with your emotions. I laughed, was sad and even felt angry in this one. What a fantastic control of the readers emotions. It is really worth trying out.
I have not gone too far in this book,but it has a certain catchy element. That make you want to read more, the story development is top notch. Well-done👍 I would definitely want to see June and Bryan love develop too with each chapter. Added to my library 😉
I do very much like the tone and atmosphere of this book. I also like how you add the feel and nature of each time and year that this book takes place. Most importantly, the worldbuilding is fantastic and the character development is in-depth. This story is really great and I do wish for more chapters!
Seems really interesting from the get-go. The starting introduction is really eye-catching and really sucks one inside. Hopefully the trend continues in the future also
Impressive. Chapters are in sync in terms of direction. No info dumps whatsoever. What I appreciate from this novel is the technique of showing all of the things that we the readers need to know as we continue reading on. In terms of info placement, this novel excels at that. The words used here invoke imagery, and that's an important thing if you want to have your readers engaged as they read. So good job author on that. Been a while since I had an engaging read featuring fantasy and horror, and if you're a fan of any of those genres, then this book is recommended for you.
Judgement day has arrived. I judge this book to be..... highly polished. The writing style is clean, not too cloudy and not too informal and underworked. You walk a fine line here mate, and you do it well.
This novel is very enjoyable, and has an interesting plot . the pace the of the story is a little slow but other from that the story is perfect .
This story is interesting. You learn about Bryan and his day to day life, especially his relationship with others. It starts slow but picks up later. There are some writing mistakes but are easy to fix. Overall, this novel is interesting so have a read! It might call to you~
Character build up is really great and capturing in this novel! I don't usually read this kind of novel, but I am sure it gives me true vibes of thrilling world with you writing style! The way you bring up that backstory in the prologue also made easier to inderstand the mc! Keep up the good work author!💛💛
finally I found a interesting book🥰🥰🥰 such a wonderful book💜💜💜 I'm completely in love with your book author❤❤❤ please update more and more😎😎😎 I'm excited😍😍😍
Just one thing I love most about this book is the relatable words. More are the apocalypse idea about the book. I must say that this book is such with a great potential to grow on this app. Read this book, if you aren't you are missing!!!
Excellent job! I enjoyed reading it. Interesting story, fun characters and well thought out world back ground. Keep writing and I am sure you will do very well!
Amazing concept. The initial chapters sets up the backstory of the MC in a very touching way. And then the mayhem starts. A larger than life concept that I cannot wait to see how the author pulls off. Thank you so much, author! It will surely remain in my library!
Quick author review: Personally, I gave this story a mature, game-like system, bearing in mind the novel's emphasis on gruesome tragedies. The MC, on the other hand, is not your conventional hero rescuing the damsel in distress, but rather an average guy who makes important decisions. "FAIR WARNING" He's not a good guy, but he's also not a bad guy either; it all depends on the scenario. Unless, of course, you read it and judge it for yourself. I've created him as an intellectual male protagonist to the highest standard of my caveman's brain, while also having not too broken talents and limited plot armor. I'm aiming to make this novel as immersive as possible, therefore his plot armor gets thrown away. So, if you prefer heroes or overpowered MC'S, then I'm sorry but I like to take it slow. Of course, as the story progresses, I'll spice up his abilities. Much love, The Author For the release date: Monday-Sunday, 11:30 p.m. (GMT+8)