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Hi and welcome to my newest book, AR: LWANBIL for short. This book participated in the Writing Formula and won Gold tier. I hope that as I am enjoying writing it, you will also enjoy reading it. Natalie Jun is a woman with a mystery past and holds alot of secrets. Her trusted friend and husband died leaving her with her brother in law and as their relationship begun Rocky, their feelings start to show. Please show love to this book by commenting, leaving a review and le me know your thoughts. Thanks
I like this kind of story! It gives the vibes of the Chinese translated classics yet it is original. Natalie Jun reminds me of Tangning while Mimi Song reminds me of Ning Xueluo of FMHM. I am so excited for the faceslapping. Overall, the way it was written is good; flow is good as well. I just notice sometimes punctuation is missing before the closing quotation mark ("), but its just minor. Keep on writing author. 🤗👍
A wonderful book... highly recommended to readers 🥰🥰 I've always loved the stories where people can overcome their dark days and move on with their live.. it's very inspiring and this is one such story. This book may not be completely light hearted but it has just the right amount of all the emotions that I didn't want to miss 🤗🤗🤗🥰 Thank you author for writing such a wonderful book ❤🧡💛💚💙💜
At first I was a bit hesitant about the story because of a married woman living with brother-in-law. But in the first chapter it was already clearly described what the situation is. There are always some villains and jealous women in every story 😆 that makes the story more exciting. There is humor in it, but what touched me the most are the sad scenes with the FL. Very vividly written that made me shed a tear (just one tear 😅). I could empathize with the situation very well. Good story. Recommended.
The story was amazing. Well written and the plot kept me looking forward every time I’m done with one. The author really knew the great turn of events throughout the story. Thank you and keep it coming.
the plot is interesting, i am enjoying quite a lot. at first i dont like natalie's character since for me she's only all talk but as the story progress, you can see her growth. too much couple. somehow i feel their relationship is being overforced. personally i like niania's character and joshxalice realationship. how their relationship develop smoother and believable 🤭. and i must say this novel has many gramatical error. it was a bit disturbing. but still love it.
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In the beginning the two main characters didn't seem compatible to me, but when they fell in love, they made a really cute couple. I also love that there are so many side stories about the other characters and everyone found their perfect match!
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Thumbs up to the writer i really enjoy the story and interesting, educative, thrilling story 🥰☺️💋❤️ keep up the good work. i look forward to more of your work ☺️ Love from Nigeria 💋❤️
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love the short story. there is so much love in the story. I love how the story ending. can't say too much because I don't want to spoil anything. if you want to know the end to the story then you must read it for yourself. the story have a great storyline and character developments. it is worth reading.
I like happy ending.. a roller coaster drama thrill action family loyalty and friendship.... well done to the author... i like it and i can recommend it..
I really enjoyed reading this book. The story was a little bit slow at first, but it became very entertaining afterwards. The female lead is strong and brave, and all the characters portrayed their roles very well. All in all, it was a very captivating story.
A must read… pick this one without a doubt. The side characters are equally good. Need more of such stories. …….❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Just completed this novel and as expected it very interesting as of there should be a part two. The author's stories always keeps one glued to reading till the end. It was a very happy reading with all the interesting characters.
Loved the book, expcially the development of characters and story line,if possible I would love to have the book on free reading for 24 hours, cannot buy coins ,
This story is really good . No extra melodrama, direct to the point. just it has so many couples so focusing on each on is not easy. so writer should work on that.Overall the novel is great. Love it😘
Highly recommend! Just started binging on it a couple of days ago and I love it so far! Definitely a great read, just anxious to see how it ends 🥺 Btw author you’re doing an amazing job with your stories so far, new favorite author 💙
This book is really a page turner. I ll compare it with a light breeze with a cup of coffee. Every characters are well designed. I highly recommend this book.
The plot is not something out of the box but the way it's being written. It's captivating and also intriguing. All the characters are given enough screen time for us to know more about them. The updates are mostly on time if nothing happens. World Background is good too. Character development is slow but engaging.
Well this is the Fourth book of Author which i am reading and must say its really a good book with lot of twist turns . The Book is filled with of entertainment to keep the readers hook to the story and every day waiting for new chapter is really the good worth of time . I hope all that author continues wIth her good stories to keep readers like us hooked Keep up the good work . 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
This book is definitely one of my favorite ❤... The story line is refreshingly awesome. The way the story is developing is very addictive.. I'm soo eager to know what will happen next in the story as there are a lot of secrets to unreveal. Requesting author for a mass release...
Oooh I love the drama and the family dynamics! I didn't know what to expect when I picked this novel up but I am so glad I did! I was completely hooked the moment I started it, and only ten chapters later I am here leaving a review 😍 You will not be disappointed starting this!!
Awesome writing quality, interesting plot. I'm looking forward to seeing what Mikael will do to conquer her [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Love the concept. the writing us smooth as well. I really enjoyed the read. there is no grammar mistakes I could see. overall I would highly recommend this novel to all
This book has me hooked. I have to make time for it during my opd hours. I have to sanitize my phone everyday for this book. Because I don't want to take germs home from the hospital. Read on your own risk.
A mystery and a girl sandwiched between 2 brothers! It's everything that makes a story sooooo interesting! (We've all seen that in TVD) I am so going to love this book I already know it
I'm not really one to read romance books, but this is completely new. I loved this book so much than I expected. I'm not done with it yet though, but I seriously want more from the author.... for this Masterpiece, I shall gift you (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧ sparkles
interesting premise and wonderfully written! this author never fails to amaze me with original novels that makes you want to flip through the next chapters nonstop! kudos to the author and best of luck!
Great book. Highly recommended. The writing quality is superb with perfect grammar and there are little to no typos. Updates are regular and the chapters are long. Author Purplebride has a way with her dialogues and I loved it. The FL - Natalie has traumas from the past but despite that, she is being strong in facing the struggles in front of her. A strong woman! The Ml has said somethings in the beginning and I bet he'd regret it all once he gets to know her. He helps her when she is in dire need and when meeting her he's saying hurtful words. But Natalie's MIL Mrs. Regina the adorable, protects her DIL the best. She makes me not mind the one who gave birth to Natalie who only believed her 'perfect' step-daughter. Love this book and will stay to finish it till the end. All the best dear author. ❤️
Hi and welcome to my newest book, AR: LWANBIL for short. This book participated in the Writing Formula and won Gold tier. I hope that as I am enjoying writing it, you will also enjoy reading it. Natalie Jun is a woman with a mystery past and holds alot of secrets. Her trusted friend and husband died leaving her with her brother in law and as their relationship begun Rocky, their feelings start to show. Please show love to this book by commenting, leaving a review and le me know your thoughts. Thanks
I like this kind of story! It gives the vibes of the Chinese translated classics yet it is original. Natalie Jun reminds me of Tangning while Mimi Song reminds me of Ning Xueluo of FMHM. I am so excited for the faceslapping. Overall, the way it was written is good; flow is good as well. I just notice sometimes punctuation is missing before the closing quotation mark ("), but its just minor. Keep on writing author. 🤗👍
A wonderful book... highly recommended to readers 🥰🥰 I've always loved the stories where people can overcome their dark days and move on with their live.. it's very inspiring and this is one such story. This book may not be completely light hearted but it has just the right amount of all the emotions that I didn't want to miss 🤗🤗🤗🥰 Thank you author for writing such a wonderful book ❤🧡💛💚💙💜
At first I was a bit hesitant about the story because of a married woman living with brother-in-law. But in the first chapter it was already clearly described what the situation is. There are always some villains and jealous women in every story 😆 that makes the story more exciting. There is humor in it, but what touched me the most are the sad scenes with the FL. Very vividly written that made me shed a tear (just one tear 😅). I could empathize with the situation very well. Good story. Recommended.
The story was amazing. Well written and the plot kept me looking forward every time I’m done with one. The author really knew the great turn of events throughout the story. Thank you and keep it coming.
the plot is interesting, i am enjoying quite a lot. at first i dont like natalie's character since for me she's only all talk but as the story progress, you can see her growth. too much couple. somehow i feel their relationship is being overforced. personally i like niania's character and joshxalice realationship. how their relationship develop smoother and believable 🤭. and i must say this novel has many gramatical error. it was a bit disturbing. but still love it.
ネタバレを明かす In the beginning the two main characters didn't seem compatible to me, but when they fell in love, they made a really cute couple. I also love that there are so many side stories about the other characters and everyone found their perfect match!
You havenever disapointed me, author sama! This is my second book that I have finished reading with you as the author. And, each of your books is awesome in its own way! August Maijune...then Natalie Jun.. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Thumbs up to the writer i really enjoy the story and interesting, educative, thrilling story 🥰☺️💋❤️ keep up the good work. i look forward to more of your work ☺️ Love from Nigeria 💋❤️
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love the short story. there is so much love in the story. I love how the story ending. can't say too much because I don't want to spoil anything. if you want to know the end to the story then you must read it for yourself. the story have a great storyline and character developments. it is worth reading.
I like happy ending.. a roller coaster drama thrill action family loyalty and friendship.... well done to the author... i like it and i can recommend it..
I really enjoyed reading this book. The story was a little bit slow at first, but it became very entertaining afterwards. The female lead is strong and brave, and all the characters portrayed their roles very well. All in all, it was a very captivating story.
A must read… pick this one without a doubt. The side characters are equally good. Need more of such stories. …….❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Just completed this novel and as expected it very interesting as of there should be a part two. The author's stories always keeps one glued to reading till the end. It was a very happy reading with all the interesting characters.
Loved the book, expcially the development of characters and story line,if possible I would love to have the book on free reading for 24 hours, cannot buy coins ,
This story is really good . No extra melodrama, direct to the point. just it has so many couples so focusing on each on is not easy. so writer should work on that.Overall the novel is great. Love it😘
Highly recommend! Just started binging on it a couple of days ago and I love it so far! Definitely a great read, just anxious to see how it ends 🥺 Btw author you’re doing an amazing job with your stories so far, new favorite author 💙
This book is really a page turner. I ll compare it with a light breeze with a cup of coffee. Every characters are well designed. I highly recommend this book.
The plot is not something out of the box but the way it's being written. It's captivating and also intriguing. All the characters are given enough screen time for us to know more about them. The updates are mostly on time if nothing happens. World Background is good too. Character development is slow but engaging.
Well this is the Fourth book of Author which i am reading and must say its really a good book with lot of twist turns . The Book is filled with of entertainment to keep the readers hook to the story and every day waiting for new chapter is really the good worth of time . I hope all that author continues wIth her good stories to keep readers like us hooked Keep up the good work . 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
This book is definitely one of my favorite ❤... The story line is refreshingly awesome. The way the story is developing is very addictive.. I'm soo eager to know what will happen next in the story as there are a lot of secrets to unreveal. Requesting author for a mass release...
Oooh I love the drama and the family dynamics! I didn't know what to expect when I picked this novel up but I am so glad I did! I was completely hooked the moment I started it, and only ten chapters later I am here leaving a review 😍 You will not be disappointed starting this!!
Awesome writing quality, interesting plot. I'm looking forward to seeing what Mikael will do to conquer her [img=update][img=update][img=update]
A must read. So far the story develops in good Direction. Hoping to get more Chapters update. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love the concept. the writing us smooth as well. I really enjoyed the read. there is no grammar mistakes I could see. overall I would highly recommend this novel to all
This book has me hooked. I have to make time for it during my opd hours. I have to sanitize my phone everyday for this book. Because I don't want to take germs home from the hospital. Read on your own risk.
A mystery and a girl sandwiched between 2 brothers! It's everything that makes a story sooooo interesting! (We've all seen that in TVD) I am so going to love this book I already know it
I'm not really one to read romance books, but this is completely new. I loved this book so much than I expected. I'm not done with it yet though, but I seriously want more from the author.... for this Masterpiece, I shall gift you (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧ sparkles
interesting premise and wonderfully written! this author never fails to amaze me with original novels that makes you want to flip through the next chapters nonstop! kudos to the author and best of luck!
Great book. Highly recommended. The writing quality is superb with perfect grammar and there are little to no typos. Updates are regular and the chapters are long. Author Purplebride has a way with her dialogues and I loved it. The FL - Natalie has traumas from the past but despite that, she is being strong in facing the struggles in front of her. A strong woman! The Ml has said somethings in the beginning and I bet he'd regret it all once he gets to know her. He helps her when she is in dire need and when meeting her he's saying hurtful words. But Natalie's MIL Mrs. Regina the adorable, protects her DIL the best. She makes me not mind the one who gave birth to Natalie who only believed her 'perfect' step-daughter. Love this book and will stay to finish it till the end. All the best dear author. ❤️