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Love's Penalties

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The story runs around Jackcy, who betrayed her only love of life, and he came back for revenge on her, his love turns into hate, and he came to break her, but he could not, the story is full of romance, drama, tragedy, and suspense.

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Amit_Verma_5670

Hats off to the writer of this story. I mean, how a person can write such an amazing story. I'vs read the story, but mentally I'm still in the story. Everyone should read it once and experience a worth reading story.

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Doctor_Min

I want to rate this after i finished reading chapter 1, and I found this story interesting, i really look forward on the upcoming chaps, hoping i won't be disappointed, i know i may felt stress but that is normal for me since all stories will really bring you stress as a matter of fact😂. So yeah I'm wishing the author a good luck on making this mysterious piece.... Fightin'💪

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RedCeiling

A respectable attempt. Nice take on sexual fidelity. Written in first person past tense (limited perspective). Pros: The characters have great integrity and loyalty towards eachother. Cons: Grammatical and punctuation errors in some chapters while others are good (perhaps some are yet to be edited), constant switching between POVs (I feel it is inconsistent; you might like it). I am at chapter 24 now and the while the characters have their strong points, they are rather irrational something (is love truly blind?) and the side characters show excessive care for the FL and ML alike. Perhaps the author wanted too keep the focus of the story intact but that made the side characters start to feel inanimate after some time. Overall, give it a chance. With some editing, it can turn out to be a great work.

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Mia_2550

Wel done author keep writing like this stories I really like this novel... 👌🏻 👌🏻 👌🏻 Great job❤️ this story is commendable 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 You are such a great writer ❤️❤️❤️

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Olivia_2650

Good job! Well done! Fantastic! Perfect! That’s great! Nice work! Excellent! That’s really remarkable. Good grades! This story is praiseworthy 😍😍😍 Very interesting ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Keep writing 🙈 🙈 🙈

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TheDarkest_Girl

I am just in love with this novel, the characters are amazing and the storyline is so interesting, and the way the story is described is so beautiful, I feel like I can imagine every scene♥♥♥😍😍😍 , awesome work author, keep writing 😘😍

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Mynxiii1

As I have read many chapters already, i notice that some grammar are wrong; however, I like the story, full of mystery and very confusing. Wishing a good luck for the author 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

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Kayleigh_Harkins

The translation isn’t good. It make it very confusing. But I love the story. I’ve felt every emotion the characters have. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Rody_Amgad

The story is very great. I loved it. And the story is so interesting, cute and beautiful. I Advise everyone to read it because it is just amazing. ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤♥️💘💝💖💗💓💞💕💟❣️ ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤♥️💘💝💖💗💓💞💕💟❣️

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Chapter 148: LET US HAVE FUN 3 years ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    I LOST THE CHANCE 4 years ago
  2. 2
    LET US GO 4 years ago
  3. 3
    HE LEFT 4 years ago
  4. 4
    I HURT HER 4 years ago
  5. 5
    I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS 4 years ago
  6. 6
    YOU WILL NOT WORK HERE AGAIN 4 years ago
  7. 7
    I MISSED HER FRAGRANCE 4 years ago
  8. 8
    I STILL CAN NOT FORGIVE HER 4 years ago
  9. 9
    I AM STILL A VIRGIN 4 years ago
  10. 10
    JUST TRUST ME ONCE 4 years ago
  11. 11
    I FELT BROKEN 4 years ago
  12. 12
    SHE IS PREGNANT 4 years ago
  13. 13
    I WILL NOT CRY ANYMORE 4 years ago
  14. 14
    MY HEAD WILL EXPLODE 4 years ago
  15. 15
    SHE IS INNOCENT AS HELL 4 years ago
  16. 16
    HE WILL REGRET 4 years ago
  17. 17
    HE MADE ME FEEL DISGUSTED 4 years ago
  18. 18
    TAKING ADVANTAGE 4 years ago
  19. 19
    HER CRUEL FATE 4 years ago
  20. 20
    HE WILL DIE 4 years ago
  21. 21
    I DO NOT WANT IT 4 years ago
  22. 22
    SHE STILL CARES 4 years ago
  23. 23
    NEVER LET HER GO 4 years ago
  24. 24
    HOW SHE WILL PAY BACK 4 years ago
  25. 25
    JUST WAIT AND WATCH 4 years ago
  26. 26
    NEED TO BE EXTRA CAREFUL 3 years ago
  27. 27
    WHAT SHE WILL DO NOW 3 years ago
  28. 28
    I AM READY 3 years ago
  29. 29
    SHE NEEDS HELP 3 years ago
  30. 30
    SHE IS TENSED 3 years ago
  31. 31
    MAJOR PART OF HIS LIFE 3 years ago
  32. 32
    SHE IS NOT PREGNENT 3 years ago
  33. 33
    BE READY FOR THE EXPLANTION 3 years ago
  34. 34
    THANK GOD 3 years ago
  35. 35
    I AM COMING 3 years ago
  36. 36
    I LOST HER 3 years ago
  37. 37
    SHE WAS NOT THERE 3 years ago
  38. 38
    I WILL FIX EVERYTHING 3 years ago
  39. 39
    I DO THE SAME 3 years ago
  40. 40
    FOR YOU 3 years ago
  41. 41
    I WAS SCARED 3 years ago
  42. 42
    BLUSHING 3 years ago
  43. 43
    CONTROLLING 3 years ago
  44. 44
    FEELING NOT GOOD 3 years ago
  45. 45
    A LITTLE EXCITED 3 years ago
  46. 46
    I GOT HURT 3 years ago
  47. 47
    SCARING ME 3 years ago
  48. 48
    HE IS ANGRY 3 years ago
  49. 49
    I WAS HURT 3 years ago
  50. 50
    HUFFED 3 years ago
  51. 51
    INVESTIGATION 3 years ago
  52. 52
    NOT INTRESTED 3 years ago
  53. 53
    NEW BODYGAURD 3 years ago
  54. 54
    BEING A BITCH 3 years ago
  55. 55
    BEING EXCITED 3 years ago
  56. 56
    SOMETHING IS WRONG 3 years ago
  57. 57
    HELPLESS 3 years ago
  58. 58
    SURPRISE 3 years ago
  59. 59
    HAPPY 3 years ago
  60. 60
    LITTLE INTIMACY 3 years ago
  61. 61
    HOT 3 years ago
  62. 62
    MAKING A LIE 3 years ago
  63. 63
    A SECRET 3 years ago
  64. 64
    HOW DARE HE 3 years ago
  65. 65
    HIDING 3 years ago
  66. 66
    THE CONFESSION 3 years ago
  67. 67
    HAVING FUN 3 years ago
  68. 68
    PEACE 3 years ago
  69. 69
    KIDDING 3 years ago
  70. 70
    HE BLUSHED 3 years ago
  71. 71
    PERFECT MORNING 3 years ago
  72. 72
    SHE IS BACK 3 years ago
  73. 73
    IT IS SUSPICIOUS 3 years ago
  74. 74
    SECRET MISSION 3 years ago
  75. 75
    THEY ARE REAL 3 years ago
  76. 76
    GONNA CAUGHT 3 years ago
  77. 77
    WE ARE SAFE 3 years ago
  78. 78
    SOMETHING WAS WRONG 3 years ago
  79. 79
    WHAT HAPPEND 3 years ago
  80. 80
    NOT SAFE 3 years ago
  81. 81
    I AM WITH YOU 3 years ago
  82. 82
    SPEECHLESS 3 years ago
  83. 83
    HE LEFT 3 years ago
  84. 84
    STOP TEASING 3 years ago
  85. 85
    HURT AGAIN 3 years ago
  86. 86
    ANGRIER 3 years ago
  87. 87
    WANNA CRY 3 years ago
  88. 88
    SO SURE 3 years ago
  89. 89
    DO NOT DESERVE HAPPINESS 3 years ago
  90. 90
    FEAR 3 years ago
  91. 91
    PEACE 3 years ago
  92. 92
    I AM TRAPPED 3 years ago
  93. 93
    PLEASURE 3 years ago
  94. 94
    NOT AGAIN 3 years ago
  95. 95
    I WILL PROTECT 3 years ago
  96. 96
    DO NOT WORRY 3 years ago
  97. 97
    HAPPY 3 years ago
  98. 98
    NEED TO SHIFT 3 years ago
  99. 99
    TIRED 3 years ago
  100. 100
    WE ARE LUCKY 3 years ago
  101. 101
    APOLOGIZE 3 years ago
  102. 102
    LET US GO 3 years ago
  103. 103
    SCARED AGAIN 3 years ago
  104. 104
    PROMISE 3 years ago
  105. 105
    RELAXED 3 years ago
  106. 106
    TEASING 3 years ago
  107. 107
    DO NOT WORRY 3 years ago
  108. 108
    ASKING FOR HELP 3 years ago
  109. 109
    I WILL HELP 3 years ago
  110. 110
    BE CAREFUL 3 years ago
  111. 111
    I AM ANGRY 3 years ago
  112. 112
    I WILL NOT LEAVE 3 years ago
  113. 113
    SHE IS NICE 3 years ago
  114. 114
    WALK 3 years ago
  115. 115
    FEELING GOOD 3 years ago
  116. 116
    HURT HER AGAIN 3 years ago
  117. 117
    JEALOUS 3 years ago
  118. 118
    NOT ALLOWED 3 years ago
  119. 119
    JAMES FOLLY 3 years ago
  120. 120
    WELCOME HOME 3 years ago
  121. 121
    HOLY SHIT 3 years ago
  122. 122
    I AM HERE 3 years ago
  123. 123
    RELAX 3 years ago
  124. 124
    lUCKY 3 years ago
  125. 125
    TEACH US 3 years ago
  126. 126
    RUINED 3 years ago
  127. 127
    NICE GUY 3 years ago
  128. 128
    SCARED 3 years ago
  129. 129
    ONLY OPTION 3 years ago
  130. 130
    WAITING 3 years ago
  131. 131
    I WILL ACCEPT 3 years ago
  132. 132
    I AM READY 3 years ago
  133. 133
    NEW CHAPTER 3 years ago
  134. 134
    CUTE 3 years ago
  135. 135
    PEACE 3 years ago
  136. 136
    ENJOY 3 years ago
  137. 137
    GIFTS 3 years ago
  138. 138
    SPEECHLESS 3 years ago
  139. 139
    UPSET 3 years ago
  140. 140
    NECKLACE 3 years ago
  141. 141
    MADE HER CRY 3 years ago
  142. 142
    HE WAS UPSET TOO 3 years ago
  143. 143
    HAPPY 3 years ago
  144. 144
    THE ONLY CHOICE 3 years ago
  145. 145
    HAPPY NEWS 3 years ago
  146. 146
    HIDING 3 years ago
  147. 147
    POOL 3 years ago
  148. 148
    LET US HAVE FUN 3 years ago
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