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Protagonist Killer

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作者: Dereck_Oliveira

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A man that doesn't know his past, except for specific memories, was suddenly throwed on a weird but familiar world, in a dangerous situation. And now he has to survive in this world without any guidance but a system that came out of nowhere.

Read the Tags. I placed a lot of Tags that has mature content as this novel will be full of spicy lemons. But, of course, it will have plot as writing too much lemons is mind tiring. Have a good time reading it.

Also, if you see mistakes at the beginning, don't worry, it becomes better as you read. If you understand me.( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

All the rights of the works I may use as reference are from the respective Authors, with the exception of my OCs. Also English is my third language, so forgive me if you see many mistakes or chronological errors.

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LickSuckEatMyBut

I dont wanna sound direspectfull but i know this novel will get dropped but i aint gonna this is a pretty good book so dont drop it even tho you will some day

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Culture_Lover

my honest opinion on the novel, please don't be offended: The first chapters in the hollow world was a good thing, but when we arrived in the human world everything changed for the worse (at least for me) I know that they do not receive money for this work and they do it just for fun, but wanting to write about some characters like yoruichi or kisuke without even having consideration for their basic personality and forcing a plot so simple that it does not express some love for writing makes the quality of the novel drop very low, I know that in webnovel there are not many good novels, but you The idea is really good, if it had been different you could have had a lot of support I think. Thank you

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Djabilong

It was actually pretty darn good for the first couple dozen chapters, albeit a bit silly at times. But after a cetain point it all devolved into bland smut and two dimensional pointless villainy with no real goal and endless repetition. Still, I highly recommend reading the first thirty chapters or so, then deciding for yourself if you want to read the rest or not.

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theunknown963

The MC and his life in Hueco Mundo was good but when finally went to the Human World coincidentally what the Mc "needs" is happening, but what annoyed me were the inconsistencies in the timeline of cannon for that to be achieved, later the characters with bad personification till the point that i can't tell if was the same character i saw in Bleach. Can you stand this? Try the novel if the answer was yes, but at leat for me was no.

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AllFiction

Honestly? I had already thought about doing a review when I had only 40 chapters, but I waited and hoped to release more so I could give an opinion. Overall, the idea of the work is good and that I do not deny, the work had a huge potential and could have been absolutely incredible. But unfortunately that’s not the case here. It would be better to change the name of the work to something like: 'Collecting Girls by the Multiverse' or something like that, because the last thing the Protagonist of the work tries to do is kill the Protagonists of the world that he goes to. 'He killed some characters, that should be enough' No. He aims to kill the Protagonist, kill other characters while justifying: 'I’m just getting rid of future problems', while the Protagonist of the work (Ichigo) did not even know how to use the Hollow Mask is still just the most pure idiocy. Not to mention that when the Protagonist (in chapter 86) truly believes that he will die, his last thoughts are: 'I only regret not having taken more women'. Really? He already had more than 5 girls and still regrets it instead of regretting being an idiot and growing up? This is the kind of work that readers keep telling each stupid action of the Protagonists the bad points of it and ask the Author to improve, but he simply responds by saying something absurd and worsens the personality of the Protagonist. This message may well seem a message of pure hatred, but unfortunately it is the purest truth about the Work. I understand you’re not paid to write this, but honestly? At least try to listen to the opinion of the Readers and improve, so that in the future you can try to gain something with the work. Not counting the personality of the characters, it is completely opposite to the original work. As I said in chapter 86, I’m just not leaving the work because I have nothing else to read. ( And I sincerely hope that you do not delete this message, Author. )

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david_cuenca

It is very interesting, the truth is, I like how the main character is, I also like that I have the mission to kill ichigo that makes it more interesting and less cliché, it would also be good if

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FBI_Nothis04

as many reviewers have stated before me the first half of the chapters are brutaly good (my opinion) and had potential to be one of the best fanfics on this site, the thing that changed my view was the lemon part of the story, don't get me wrong I'm a lemon lover like most readers here but in this case, at least for me, it worsened the story, many characters feel fake, as if they were automated s-exdolls with powers, I still read it but I have to admit that I will surely drop the moment the mc's objetive in bleach dies, I made this review with my personal opinion and preferences in mind so give it a try you might like it (especially if you love op battlejukie and extremely lusty mc's)also thanks to the author for making it.

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J0ke_R

Yo guys i will warn you in advance... MC is idiotic and it hurts like a bitch to read it sometimes so beware :D It's readable but not really good. Peace OUT !

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JaxWolf4

I don't really know how to feel about this fanfic. It is good for the most part, but a lot of the story feels extremely forced. WQ - Few grammar errors. SoU - Frequent updates so far. SD - Decent but it is being sort of rushed. CD - The MC is a bland OP hollow and needs some more development. WB - Decent so far, it is following canon bleach, so nothing wrong here. Overall it is a decent fanfic if you don't mind the forced parts of the story. 3.8 stars.

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AntiLoliLewding

Okay the story was okay, the prospects were so high but it was when the MC went into the human world where things took a deep dive. The characters feel one-sided, and the women have little to no development. The smut is excessive, and sometimes annoying. It had the chance to be better, seeing as how the term protagonist doesn't entirely mean hero. Overall, it was good, until the MC started to act like a horndog. I'll still be reading it since the author might listen to me but what do I know?

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Waqas
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the story is interesting i just think he's doing to much.especially the chosen thing where they have to fight it's boring and there's barelly anything about the anime

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chenglinqiu_ig

Honestly, I think I received an aneurysm just from reading the first paragraph. The MC fights another Adjucha and wins even though he was just a newly evolved one with all his abilities locked, like I swear there was a least a few chapters of content that just disappeared.

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the_great_old_one

I love fanfics that have to do with with this main character. please keep going there's two few of these out there.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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TooSexy4U

The sentences Is readable, but the grammar is not superb. I don't know what you expected its fan fiction there's no editors or nothing so i don't really mind the bad grammar. What I do mind however is making the characters OOC to meeting specific agendas for the author. No. The author made relationships with other characters feel forced. This basically follows canon so the world background isn't something to write home about. Anyways good luck writing author, but this wasn’t for me.

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goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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PsyLoRD

This story is fun asf BUT makes no sense

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Chapter 129: ANOTHER IMPORTANT NOTE 3 years ago

卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. Characters. 3 years ago

卷 1 : 1st World.

  1. 1
    Chapter 1 : Hueco Mundo. 3 years ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2 : Shop, Quests and Abilities. 3 years ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3 : Time-Skip and Surprise. 3 years ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4 : Beautiful Tiburón and Her Followers. 3 years ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5 : Change of Perspective. 3 years ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6 : Rescue. 3 years ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7 : Getting Out of Hueco Mundo. 3 years ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8 : Getting Inside Soul Society. 3 years ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9 :Meeting the Hot-Tempered Woman. 3 years ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10 : Entering Soul Society. 3 years ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11 : Fight. 3 years ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12 : Negociation and Hot Springs. 3 years ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13 : Distraction. 3 years ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14 : Deal. 3 years ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15 : Enjoying. 3 years ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16 : Rescue. 3 years ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17 : Las Noches and Becoming An Arrancar. 3 years ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18 : Changes and Meeting the Other Espadas. 3 years ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19 : House and Annoying Fly. 3 years ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20 : Karakura's First Invasion. 3 years ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21 : Defection? 3 years ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22 : Shock and Evolution. 3 years ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23 : Report and First Time. 3 years ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24 : Target, Job and Idiot. 3 years ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25 :At Karakura. 3 years ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26 : Justice and Guests. 3 years ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27 : Second Time and Interrupted. 3 years ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28 : Protecting. 3 years ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29 : Plans and Disappointment. 3 years ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30 : Old Man and Punishment. 3 years ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31 : Mission. 3 years ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32 : Let the Games Begin. 3 years ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33 : Battery and Betrayal. 3 years ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34 : Beyond God's Limits. 3 years ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35 : Healing and Hypocrisy. 3 years ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36 : Frustrated Deer. 3 years ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37 : Hefty Paper and Reward. 3 years ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38 : Kūkaku and Another Place. 3 years ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39 : Slave and Guests. 3 years ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40 : Idiots and Resurrección. 3 years ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41 : Fierce Chimera and Bingo. 3 years ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42 : Foursome and Brutal Joy. 3 years ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43 : Unexpected and Free Slave. 3 years ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44 : Specimen #02. 3 years ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 45 : Finally. 3 years ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 46 : Gothic Slave. 3 years ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 47 : Nnoitra VS Nelliel. 3 years ago
  48. 48
    Chapter 48 : {Time Anchor} and Bloodlust. 3 years ago
  49. 49
    Chapter 49 : Īsan Vs Unohana (Part 1). 3 years ago
  50. 50
    Chapter 50 : Īsan VS Unohana (Part 2). 3 years ago
  51. 51
    Chapter 51 : Īsan VS Unohana (Last Part). 3 years ago
  52. 52
    Author's note. 3 years ago
  53. 53
    Chapter 52 : Setting Things In Place. 3 years ago
  54. 54
    Chapter 53 : Punishments. 3 years ago
  55. 55
    Chapter 54 : Shinigami VS Īsan's Subordinates. 3 years ago
  56. 56
    Chapter 55 : Redemption and Suffering. 3 years ago
  57. 57
    Chapter 56 : A Slave's blame and Szayel Aporro's punishment. 3 years ago
  58. 58
    Chapter 57 : Romantic time and Specimen # 03, #04. 3 years ago
  59. 59
    Chapter 58 : Tasty Treat and Relief. 3 years ago
  60. 60
    Chapter 59 : An Interesting Room and Updating the Numbers. 3 years ago
  61. 61
    Chapter 60 : Cleaning Up Hueco Mundo. 3 years ago
  62. 62
    Chapter 61 : Ambition and Agreement. 3 years ago
  63. 63
    Chapter 62 : Bow and Rewarding the Loyalty. 3 years ago
  64. 64
    Chapter 63 : Reprograming. 3 years ago
  65. 65
    Chapter 64 : Fake Karakura War (Part 1). 3 years ago
  66. 66
    Chapter 65 : Fake Karakura War (Part 2). 3 years ago
  67. 67
    Chapter 66 : Fake Karakura War (Part 3). 3 years ago
  68. 68
    Chapter 67 : Fake Karakura War (Part 4). 3 years ago
  69. 69
    Chapter 68 : Fake Karakura War (Part 5). 3 years ago
  70. 70
    Chapter 69 : Fake Karakura War (Part 6). 3 years ago
  71. 71
    Chapter 70 : Fake Karakura War (Part 7). 3 years ago
  72. 72
    Chapter 71 : Fake Karakura War (Part 8). 3 years ago
  73. 73
    Chapter 72 : Fake Karakura War (Part 9). 3 years ago
  74. 74
    Chapter 73 : Fake Karakura War (Part 10). 3 years ago
  75. 75
    Chapter 74 : Fake Karakura War (Part 11). 3 years ago
  76. 76
    Chapter 75 : Fake Karakura War (Part 12). 3 years ago
  77. 77
    Chapter 76 : Fake Karakura War (Part 13). 3 years ago
  78. 78
    Chapter 77 : Fake Karakura War (Part 14). 3 years ago
  79. 79
    Chapter 78 : Fake Karakura War (Part 15). 3 years ago
  80. 80
    Chapter 79 : Fake Karakura War (Part 16). 3 years ago
  81. 81
    Chapter 80 : Fake Karakura War (Part 17). 3 years ago
  82. 82
    Chapter 81 : Fake Karakura War (Part 18). 3 years ago
  83. 83
    Chapter 82 : Fake Karakura War (Part 19). 3 years ago
  84. 84
    Chapter 83 : Fake Karakura War (Part 20). 3 years ago
  85. 85
    Chapter 84 : Death. 3 years ago
  86. 86
    Chapter 85 : The Immortal's advance. 3 years ago
  87. 87
    Chapter 86 : Opportunist. 3 years ago
  88. 88
    Chapter 87 : Between Life and Death. 3 years ago
  89. 89
    Chapter 88 : Revealing the Plan. 3 years ago
  90. 90
    Chapter 89 : Transcedent Being. 3 years ago
  91. 91
    Chapter 90 : Rest. 3 years ago
  92. 92
    Chapter 91 : Īsan VS Urahara (Part 1). 3 years ago
  93. 93
    Chapter 92 : Īsan VS Urahara (Part 2). 3 years ago
  94. 94
    Chapter 93 : Īsan VS Urahara (Last Part). 3 years ago
  95. 95
    Chapter 94 : Going Back Home. 3 years ago
  96. 96
    Chapter 95 : Castle. 3 years ago
  97. 97
    Chapter 96 : Items. 3 years ago
  98. 98
    Chapter 97 : Rewarding. 3 years ago
  99. 99
    Chapter 98 : Designations. 3 years ago
  100. 100
    Chapter 99 : Gifts. 3 years ago
  101. 101
    Chapter 100 : Manipulation. 3 years ago
  102. 102
    Chapter 101 : Relaxing. 3 years ago
  103. 103
    Chapter 102 : Invasion. 3 years ago
  104. 104
    Chapter 103 : Yandere. 3 years ago
  105. 105
    Chapter 104 : Going Out. 3 years ago
  106. 106
    Chapter 105 : Another World. 3 years ago
  107. 107
    Chapter 106 : Meeting the Dragon. 3 years ago
  108. 108
    Chapter 107 : Goblin Village. 3 years ago
  109. 109
    Chapter 108 : The Direwolves. 3 years ago
  110. 110
    Chapter 109 : The Dwarves. 3 years ago
  111. 111
    Chapter 110 : Adventurers. 3 years ago
  112. 112
    Chapter 111 : Ifrit. 3 years ago
  113. 113
    Chapter 112 : Conquering and Release. 3 years ago
  114. 114
    Chapter 113 : Against the Ogres. 3 years ago
  115. 115
    Chapter 114 : Onis. 3 years ago
  116. 116
    Chapter 115 : Lizardmen Visit. 3 years ago
  117. 117
    Chapter 116 : The Dryad. 3 years ago
  118. 118
    Chapter 117 : The War. 3 years ago
  119. 119
    Chapter 118 : Conference. 3 years ago
  120. 120
    Chapter 119 : Regrouping. 3 years ago
  121. 121
    Chapter 120 : Fishy. 3 years ago
  122. 122
    Chapter 121 : Slaughter. 3 years ago
  123. 123
    Chapter 122 : New Skills. 3 years ago
  124. 124
    Chapter 123 : Time Skip. 3 years ago
  125. 125
    Chapter 124 : Dwarf King. 3 years ago
  126. 126
    Chapter 125 : The Destroyer. 3 years ago
  127. 127
    Important Note. 3 years ago
  128. 128
    New Chapter of the New Story. 3 years ago
  129. 129
    ANOTHER IMPORTANT NOTE 3 years ago