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THIS BOOK IS ON A HIATUS until May 2023 (10 chapters), September 29th (15) chapters, and December or October 30th, 2023 (30+ chapters). See you then!
Sound-minded Author synopsis
The book follows a man whose soul drifted from earth to another body in a different world upon his death. He becomes a Demi-god with a system. He journeys out to become stronger while helping his father (a god) take revenge on those that nearly killed him.
Unhinged Author Abstract
It's about a human who becomes a Demi-god and has a system. The characters are evil, at least by human standards; you would rarely find a goody-to-shoe sub-character. The major character is a bipolar sociopath and still will be anywhere he goes. He has a few principles, but that depends on his mood (bipolar). This book will have a lot of action, action, and action, and killings, especially assassinations. I hate the slow pace, there will be slow chapters to create the setting but I will limit them as much as possible. If this book was a drug, then I would be a drug dealer getting high off my supply. I also hate cliffhangers, sometimes there is a need for them but damn do these authors even have a heart, messing with my emotions. I will limit this too. It sounds stupid, but I created this book for myself. Sometimes it's best to put crazy on paper. There is comedy here, too, not the forced kind. If I write and it shows up, it shows up. I admit I Am the type that loves a satisfying kill. I will give you a good kill once a week. So far in every chapter, someone dies.
This book will go all over Greek mythology, Chinese mythology, crazy powers and abilities, religion, gods, Demi-gods, different universes, different planes, badass weapons, and more.
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I will wait till this Novel accumulate more chapters till 40-50. Nothing against you but I hate waiting for chapter. But to encourage you to keep writing I am giving it 5. Keep writing. If it reaches 200 chapters it will be hit.
Wooo****** awesome book. This book captured my attention, it is actually fast pace. This book takes you straight to the point, every detail is well explained. We need more books like this👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This book is similar to a real anime series, it locks you in and you never want to stop reading it. I am looking forward for the author to release a second book. It was mind blowing. It is worth the time reading.
This book is straight up oerfect love it lots man i can honestly see myself acting like the mc in my daily life this book just sucks u in like u were the mc love it
the charater development is awesome. the writing gets better after chapter 9. the MC isnt upur tpically stupid mc and he doesnt want to save the world. which is so refreshing!
This story is about a sociopath who suddenly is in a situation where he gets powers and a fresh start to continue being an evil one. Here you won't find the typical goody two shoes, but something akin an honorable bad guy: he'll treat you well if you treat him well, and will destroy you completely if you cross him (regardless if you've treated him well before). So far the story goes well. There're issues with grammar and spelling that sometimes cause a bit of confusion, but nothing too serious. If you wish to try your luck with an evil MC, this story looks promising. 😈
Amazing!!! Scenery and characters brought to life !!!! The humor keeps btinging me back😂. im rooting for everything Alex is Doing!!!!
really good place in the book so far mc is ruthless and dark it's an amazing change compared to save the world type mcs and it's got a good balance of humor mixed in
Sinopsis ESTE LIBRO ESTÁ EN UNA PAUSA hasta mayo de 2023 (10 capítulos), el 29 de septiembre (15) capítulos y el 30 de diciembre u octubre de 2023 (más de 30 capítulos). ¡Hasta entonces! Esta es su sipnosis actual hace 2 años prometio y critico otras novelas de sistema diciendo que no queria caer igual. Dentro de 1 año pondra otra etiqueta igual y seguira diciendo lo mismo. No recomiento leer a un autor que critica y dice que va a hacer una novela mejor cuando ni siquiera cumple con su palabra. Todo son excusas y criticas a otra persona, deberia mirarse a si mismo. No entiendo como la gente le valora con 5 estrellas para darle animos, cuando no pasa ni de 44 capitulos
Writing quality is pretty good. Author has some grammatical errors but it's easy to overlook them. Story development is very detailed. Author thoroughly explains the settings, the mc's thought process/actions. Cool thing author does is showing different POVs of the same scenarios which gives you a broader view of what's happening. Only thing author mainly needs to work on is the updating stability aspect which I'm sure will be gone soon after they get into a steady writing environment. Overall, story is amazing and keeps making you wanting more. Yikes, I wrote a lot 😬😄
the book is really dark with a lot of plot twist. the writing improves after 15. this author has a unique persepective of what readers who crave action want.
Finally the Author who understand and know my taste and that is why you deceive the 5 stars .............................................. .................................. ................
I have not read this as of typing this but the synopsis literally put what I can only describe as the creepiest smile on my face. I want to read this with all my heart and soul now. I'm going in! LEEEROOOOOOOOY JENJIIIIIINS!
havent read it yet but synopsis literally has me dying to read it it has all the hidden and horrifying desires I have 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
卷 1 : Sin Eater
- 1 Chapter 1: Alex and the god 3 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2: The new world and Lith 3 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3: The Dark System Part 1 3 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4: bombarded with Quests 3 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5: Testing Skills 3 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6: Four Hours until sunrise 3 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7: Alex's Lust, Past & Determination 3 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8: Too much to kill so little time 3 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9: That's a no no no no! part 1 3 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10: That's a no no no no! part 2 3 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11: The Chaos is only starting 3 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12: The wonderful healer 3 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13: Knights are like cops............until benefits are involved 3 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14: The lunatic part 1 3 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15:The lunatic part 2 3 years ago
- 16 Chapter 16: No Witnesses Part 1 3 years ago
- 17 Chapter 17: No witness Part 2 3 years ago
- 18 Chapter 18: wind elementalist Part 1 3 years ago
- 19 Chapter 19: wind elementalist Part 2 3 years ago
- 20 Chapter 20: The Kiss of Death and Chronus 3 years ago
- 21 Chapter 21: Poisoning Spree 3 years ago
- 22 Chapter 22: Preparations 3 years ago
- 23 Chapter 23: The elegy Forest 3 years ago
- 24 Chapter 24: Ives visits Alex 3 years ago
- 25 Chapter 25: Death is Eminent 3 years ago
- 26 Chapter 26: First Insight into space 3 years ago
- 27 Chapter 27: Fickle fire 3 years ago
- 28 Chapter 28: blue skies 3 years ago
- 29 Chapter 29: My mistakes 3 years ago
- 30 Chapter 30: She should be ready to die part 1 3 years ago
- 31 Chapter 31: She should be ready to die part 2 3 years ago
- 32 Chapter 32: Are you going to interfere? 3 years ago
- 33 Chapter 33: I will gladly welcome you to the underworld 3 years ago
- 34 Chapter 34: why are you all surprised? 3 years ago
- 35 Chapter 35: Don't run now 3 years ago
- 36 Chapter 36: Income Reinforcement 3 years ago
- 37 Chapter 37: Killers and Profit-teers 3 years ago
- 38 chapter 38: The Curse Contract 3 years ago
- 39 Chapter 39: The Duke and Theodore 3 years ago
- 40 Chapter 40: A Clue to Vigerřamous Past 3 years ago
- 41 Chapter 41: Alex and the Condemned Priest Part 1 3 years ago
- 42 Chapter 42: Alex and the Condemned Priest Part 2 3 years ago
- 43 Chapter 43: Alex and the Condemned Priest Part 3 3 years ago
- 44 Chapter 44: Alex and the Condemned Priest Part 4 3 years ago
Hey, the author here! first time writing a book. Originally I wrote this because it upset me that some system novel novels that have an awesome name but are a little disappointing. I hope that I don't want to fall in the same category. I am not so strong with grammar but I hope to improve as I write.