Wizard World:Struggles of dimensions

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GoldenKitsune

It's only been 30 chapters, but i can already tell the writing style, and the storytelling are the best things aside from the story itself! Its going well, keep up the excellent work!

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OmriWiz

I am really am enjoying it so far it’s amazing that you’re not just taking the story beats from the original stories one by one so far that’s the only thing I’m getting from other infinite story books yours is something very unique and I found myself enjoying every bit of it please continue to write such an amazing work.

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Origin_Saint

This novel really took me by surprise and I want more people to try it, if you read the first 10 chapters and still aren't interested on this novel, then maybe it's not for you. This story is takes a very unique approach to the concepts of wizards and I sincerely hope it gets more recognition

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Anonymous_Seeker

To be honest, this a great work with potential but i still feel like somethings are missing. These are my opinions tho: Character development; This is a wizarding world, the character is a wizard and i don’t know what u have in plan for the mc’s character but his current character really ain’t satisfying. For a wizard, a dark wizard at that, i feel he is a bit too emotional than he is supposed to be. He has some subtle naivity( calm + curiosity could do the trick regarding his inspiration talent)which is not good for him as a dark wizard who is pursuing the ‘information manipulation path’. He lack the ruthlessness, calculative/ schemic mind required. His control over his emotions is also a bit lacking and his will is a bit too weak for an earthling who hold secrets hidden in his memories which he definetly cannot afford for others to see. Also, he lacks insights into the human heart and mind which is will be fatal to him if no change is made. With his knowledge of novels he read on eath he should know better than anyone the consequences of letting too much emotions affect his cause. As a dark wizard, his thirst for knowledge, rational thinking and spirit for reseach into the mysteries of the the multiverse is weak. It’d be cool if he had some time powers added to his rune tho. He could also create his own A.I to help with his informational path. Also, about his information manipulation and will path, you can gain insights from “ Cyher in marvel comics”, “ the middle chapters of the novel; ‘Original Seeker’ on comrademao.com or mtlnovel.com. Agian these are just my thoughts if you deem them useless for what you have in store for your work you can ignore it.

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livefree

hey everyone the author speaking, please if you have any suggestions or noticed some mistakes I made I would appreciate it if u pointed it out, I would love to get better and be able to share my ideas with the world through my stories.

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PercyJackson_109

this first chapter is really awesome, but after that, the writing quality and story development becomes distorted. Its really poorly written, and the plot deteriorates.

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origin_of_power

The first couple of chapters are actually good then it starts getting more confused like at one point they talk about vow and i’ve never even learned what the he did because they going to battle scenes after that it just could’ve been better the potential is there towards the last chapters like 50 at writing this I was just so confused

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Not_Active

I hadn’t even realised how far into the book I’d reached until I paused to check the time. Its definietly a great story, I’m going to read till the end. All I have to say is that there’s a lot of information condensed into one chapter. It can be a little overwhelming as a reader, but apart from that I really am enjoying it. Great job 👍

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Coty_Rodda

paragraphs needs to be spaced out, naming sence is horrible. should have stuck with original names and simplified things more. overall this is a good story but it's hard to follow in the beginning.

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Blue_Bird_0758

very good novel looking forword for the next chapters see you not for mind mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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Origin_Saint

This book is really unique and interesting, the concepts in the world are being revealed at a steady paste where you don't get large dumps of info, but know enough at each time to understand what's going on and to anticipate more chapters. Just give it a try, you won't regret it

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JohnD

So far the story seems very enjoyable. There are a lot of interesting ideas, but the writing quality and the details throughout the story need a bit fleshing out. I feel like this can potentially become a very good novel. :) Actually, I'm interested in giving feedback and editing your chapters before release. Contact me if you are interested. 🐈🦉

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_Sha

From the very first impression, the storyline seemed well worked out. The flow of reading is superb. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Shatayia_F

Wow, that synopsis was great! I had to take a moment to get my thoughts out about this book, as I'm reading it; A great read it is! I'm enjoying the storyline, the characters! everything! excited to see where it goes

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Valman

It's a very good story, the only flaw I find in it is its slowness and its magic that I have the impression that we show in a hurry after it's my opinion, maybe you find yourself that it's too magical but I find that it's not magical enough and that it should go deeper into it

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taedya

More chapters please 🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿🙌🏿

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Fernrir_Zero999

It’s is a great story if it wasn’t for the updating stabili