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作者: Memonic

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a man transmigrates into the world Harry Porter with 3 wishes.
accompany him on his adventure, through the magical world,
second magical warrior time period and Voldemort's rise as a dark lord.

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amaturewriter

I tried being open minded but this bk is just shallow characters. in each chp the MC handsomeness is explained at least one, like thats the focus. And every chick is enamored by this guy and and it just makes em look shallow. OMG he so handsome...what a prince. thats their mentality, that's presented And theres also the fact that bellatix just trusts this guy within a couple hrs of meeting and takes him to meet her family. bellatrix.... so basically character is OC. I get its AU, but the blacks family ' character ' was untrusting, cold, secretive, arrogant, etc. here they are all open friendly. not a hint of the original shit is here. its all OC. Plus the black family accepts what he says just like that, like no distrust or suspicion or even wariness, nothing. They just believe what this stranger says. Another thats just stupid is the plot used as an excuse for stupid shit. what? well the MC's family was exterminated by voldy cause of their power,etc but MC survived and he managed to become world famous.... "Dovahkiin heir, by chance you are "Max the tyrant dragon", who is a recognized and world famous bounty hunter for catching many criminals, he is also the world dueling champion for 3 consecutive years and great historian of the history of magic, that's you." [ C4 ] how was the MC even allowed to achieve such accomplishments with no backing, and not being hunted down ? especially during a time where voldy had power and also when he destroyed the family?...wishes [ MC wished to be SI'd into a body in early 20's, with a past already build ]....and that just ruins a bk for me. honestly why bother writing when wish can simply be used as an excuse to do shit like this? no story, no character build and it just allows retarded shit like this to happen. The theres the merlins beard shit in C5 [ unless removed ]....not sure if its supposed to be funny cause it just ruins every characters personality and tone of the moment so basically just turn of ur brain and ignore any sense of logic and you'll enjoy this. the good thing about this bk is the time, maruders era, it kinda makes it a gem but the shallow characters, almost completely forced interactions and somewhat cringe characters ruin it

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Memonic

hello friends this is my humble novel, I am a novice writer, who wanted to try my luck and see if I can sustain myself from my writing, I hope you like it and support me, vote as much as you can and thank you for reading my novel. English is not my first language so I translated it with google.

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yokedjaguar

Frankly it's just hard to read. Even if your an ******* some of the mistakes shouldn't have been made especially if you've read other stories. In example your overzealous need for the readers to know your mc is the most handsome man to grace the earth. You also need to learn how to write in general. Hope you'll strive to better your work but at the moment I don't think your up for it. Good luck.

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creepycatisawesone

Now let me be honest. THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY. I have read other stories like this with smart and manipulative MC who is not dark and I easily find it among the top 3 of such novel's in webnovel as far as characters and story is concerned. This is unique as the MC is transmigrated in pre book era and is an *****. Moreover the creativity is good though I find some ideas like goblin copied. Also it is the dark lord Dumbledore version so yeah idiots who like dumbles it's not for u. Updates for now are quite good and much better than many others of same genre(though it may be cause it's new) Now the only problem I find, other than few plotholes (which are genuinely quite Less compared to other FFs ) , is THE LANGUAGE , don't take me wrong as it is perfectly readable but Still it depreciates the quality of Novel as some minor confusion while reading can leave u with a bad taste BUT ULTIMATELY IT IS STILL TOP 5 In the Smart Male Self Insert in Harry Potter type novels (and I don't read novel's with female MCs So I don't know about that ) I still suggest the author to work on language as it would improve the quality of Novel a lot .

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Aeternabilis

I'm not gonna lie, this has very interesting ideas but to me, it was poorly executed. The mc is just way too strong it is a joke. He is basically a god... I loved his backstory (other than the part where the fam should have been killed by Grindelwald and not Voldemort) For me, his three wishes should have been the family background, his looks and maybe something like potent magic power? Then it should have shown the mc growing up, learning all the secrets of his house and the things with the dragons maybe even getting his own. So he won't be a god but is still pretty op from the things he learns in his travels and from his family. We can watch him learn these feeling closer to the character. Then he comes back to do everything mainly build his city and focus on that. Forget all these other things such as controlling muggle world all the magical market's etc He can link his islands as resorts etc that you teleport to from the city, create the private school, the stadium etc. This can then grow and build on into canon and see how it affects the world. Maybe even have it mixed into marvel or something. Having your own magical city in marvel etc. I feel these would have been much more interesting to read tbh. Cause instead I feel what I am reading is a god mc where everything just jumps about, skipping massive parts, making random sht up and adding it in with no thought... It goes way to fast to the point you get confused about what has happened and how. Like he is suddenly friends with the goblin nation, he has all these girls that he gains in seconds etc etc The book is also wayy to focused on how amazingly handsome the mc is and how every girl or person that sees him is start struck and want to worship him... it's honestly like half the story is about this. I hope the author reads this and slows down, think about the plot more etc gl to him

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animadrop

Hard to read. Surprisingly, the general grammar is better than pure mtl, but sadly that doesn't change the fact that the story is no better in its own categories than the grammar.

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i'll be honest. it's clearly a first work, the first chapter skips the begining of the story so there's no development and goes straight to the problem. i'm not gonna get annoying listing all bad things to me here, but when your story starts with a women thinking how handsome and awesome the mc is and how big his dick is... well i knew this is not for me

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uflesh940

It's completely unreadable. Also, his wishes are 90% garbage. For his backstory, he asks for a pureblood family, asks for them all to have died, and asks to look nice ("golden eyes", "white skin"). For his actual wishes, it's even worse Fir his first wish, he wants access to a magical library of some sort, presumably from another fandom. For his second wish, he wants the library to have every book ever written. And for his third wish, which is, by the way, the only halfway decent opinion the MC has expressed to this date, he wants instant mastery.

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SYIHAAKIRA

Hello there Memonic. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

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pointbreak_101

horrible Grammer 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 too hard to read 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 writer cannot even differentiate him and her 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

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DaoOfCopying

"Did Author died? This is my Favorite HP FanFic for real i've read 160+ HP FanFic and this one is on top." [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Groenendaal

terrible grammar, almost unreadable.

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UnholyFalseHeaven

what's up? ? is it dropped or not ? i've had it in my library for about 2 months .... 😂 ........................ ........ .. ...

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Lardeen
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Author dont know when should use him her!! Very often writing wrong genre and its so messed story. You should rewrite it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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J4ke
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[img=recommend]Love it, and i certainly love the expanding universe. Love the black sisters and romanov. ...................................

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mohammediq

thank you for the story whis is very good :).....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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thank you for the story whis is very good :).....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Cutejohn1234

its so interesting that people dont like this story i remember this because i like it so much it was one of first i read on webnovel and forgot about it but after reading it i wanted something similar that i read so many overpower reincarnation hp story however it just wasnt the same this story does something right that others dont match up.

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Agent_Lama_0665

i thought its gonna be a skyrim harry potter crossover and man am i disappointed grammar is bad (almost as bad as mine) and the story is boring (read until chapter 12) mc has nothing interesting but it is harry potter and author tried someting different, failed but he tried

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卷 1 : First volume: the Ascension of House Dovahkiin and the beginning of the second magical war.

  1. 1
    Chapter 1: An End and New Beginning. 3 years ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2: The Beginning Of An Adventure 3 years ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3: A Special Encounter and A Fate-Changing Drink. 3 years ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4: Meeting at Black Mansion 3 years ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5: Uncovering The Deception Of A Dirty Half-Blood. 3 years ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6: Bellatrix's Happiness 3 years ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7: Paying a Debt of Gratitude Between Noble Houses 3 years ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8 Plans for the Future and an Unexpected moment. 3 years ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9 The Great Wizarding Gringotts Bank. 3 years ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10: Big Investments and A Young Rita. 3 years ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11: The Great Tyrant Receives His Loans. 3 years ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12 Summary of 6 months of hard work. 3 years ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13: Take A Wife And You Can Take Another Wife. 3 years ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14: Seven Months and Planning a Vacation in France 3 years ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15: Vacation in France and The Magnificent Villa Drágala. 3 years ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16: I Have a Grandmother and The Old Man Story 3 years ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17: Shocking Discovery And An Exemplary Grandson. 3 years ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18: An Exemplary Grandson and knowing the identity of the grandmother. 3 years ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19: For the Common Good 3 years ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20: Rise to Power of the Dark Lord 3 years ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21: The start of the 1970 World Masters Dueling Championship in France. 3 years ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22: World Dueling Championship 1970 I 3 years ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23: 1970 World Duel Championship II 3 years ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24: 1970 World Duel Championship III 3 years ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25: World Dueling Championship IV 3 years ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26: 1970 World Duel Championship V 3 years ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27: 1970 World Dueling Championships VI 3 years ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28: 1970 World Duel Championship VII 3 years ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29: 1970 World Duel Championship IIX 3 years ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30: World Duel Championship 1970 VIII 3 years ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31: World Dueling Championship 1970 X 3 years ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32: 1970 XII World Duel Championship 3 years ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33: A crack in the timeline 3 years ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34: A crack in the timeline II 3 years ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35: It's My Turn 3 years ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36: Demonstrating Skill 3 years ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37: Grandpa You Are The Best 3 years ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38: A Man of Enduring and Taking Advantage of Circumstances 3 years ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39: It's My Turn II and the Difficulties of a Single Man 3 years ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40: Profit and Mischief 3 years ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41: Who Will Be the Champion? 3 years ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42: A Pitiful Man 3 years ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43: An act of generosity 3 years ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44: A Charitable Cause 3 years ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 45: Modifying Hogwarts 3 years ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 46: A Successful Younger Brother and an Unfortunate Director 3 years ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 47: A Shocking and Unfortunate Event at Hogwarts 3 years ago
  48. 48
    Chapter 48: Hearing the Chorus of Frogs and Laughing Till Cry 3 years ago
  49. 49
    Chapter 49: Bad News and An Untold Story 3 years ago
  50. 50
    Chapter 50: The Vampire Hunter Worries and Coming to Transylvania 3 years ago
  51. 51
    Chapter 51: Sanguina Carmilla and Good news for the dark lord 3 years ago

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