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This is one of the most boring fanfic I've ever read. The only thing it has going for it is the spelling/grammer. The story itself doesnt have anything interesting, I have read phonebooks more interesting than this.
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It's not terrible, just boring. The mc has nothing about him that's terribly interesting other than the sharingan and that's the oldest most cliche power in fanfiction history at this point. The author clearly did not do a whole lot of research on HxH and also nerfed the mc's sharingan for no reason. Still not terrible but if you have anything else to read I would recommend that instead of this.
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This story sucks I cant even get past the 2nd chapter it sucks so bad! Born a Uchiha with only 1 sharingan? That's impossible also he has Uchiha blood so why cant he deactivate his sharingan he's not a case like Kakashi? I'm not reading any further unless someone wants to spoil the story and tell me something actually interesting that happens.
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the story is good so far. HxH is also a really good anime/manga. I like how the author added some elements from Naruto. Overall the story is fit for my taste. Thank you author and I hope you stay well and continue writing~
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fan fic by otaku_king, literally cannot be bad. I didnt actually read yet and i need 140 characters to submit this sooooo... Who lives in a pineapple under the sea?
Love it, need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Il personaggi principale migliore di moltissimi altri che ho letto finalmente uno che non sia un drogato di figa o di fare gesti "buoni" adoro l'autore continua così
I has come to show my support and now a song by a mad king Gunter, why did you gunt my fries? I gunted them, and they were mine. What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries, And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes? Gunter, there were tears there. If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
Nice work, comrade! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Beware the Main Character is a capital D, Dumbass, He thinks he can grow strong from just training in the academy, as a 7-year-old, "Barely has any chakra" because he is 7, your body main develops in your **** years, look at naruto, He was trash in the academy, but was he hits 13, oh boy, his growth is monstrous, same with people like Sasuke or Sakura, or even Itachi.
i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGa N!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!!
finally an si with no 3 wishes and acts like a actual person -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Is mc sharigan always on like in naruto or can he have it turn on and off with his own will now Hope you continue this Book And will there be romance if there is who will it be
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Writing- good enough though beware there are traps everywhere Story development- too early too few Character design- big brain time boi Updating stability- hmmmmmm World background- its the fooking hxh world. what? Is there to say? Have some meme
Un muy buen fanfic me gusto mucho creo que tiene potencial y lo que mas me gusta es el personage y su sed de aventura, espero con ansias el desarrollo de esta historia, sobre todo como se desarrollara el personaje principal y cuales seran sus objetivos
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while the synopsis was pretty ballsy but it's great so far, 11chaps in, so I'm looking forward to where the author takes us!!!!! good luck :D
Despite having few chapters the story is very good so far, and best of all and about HxH one of the top 5 animes ever made for most people, I hope that the author keeps a constant in the releases, because many who write about HXH end up dropping, this is due to the fact that HxH has not yet been completed and the complexity of the anime's energy system, which in my view is the most creative and diverse energy system ever made in anime.
This is one of the most boring fanfic I've ever read. The only thing it has going for it is the spelling/grammer. The story itself doesnt have anything interesting, I have read phonebooks more interesting than this.
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It's not terrible, just boring. The mc has nothing about him that's terribly interesting other than the sharingan and that's the oldest most cliche power in fanfiction history at this point. The author clearly did not do a whole lot of research on HxH and also nerfed the mc's sharingan for no reason. Still not terrible but if you have anything else to read I would recommend that instead of this.
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This story sucks I cant even get past the 2nd chapter it sucks so bad! Born a Uchiha with only 1 sharingan? That's impossible also he has Uchiha blood so why cant he deactivate his sharingan he's not a case like Kakashi? I'm not reading any further unless someone wants to spoil the story and tell me something actually interesting that happens.
ネタバレを明かす the story is good so far. HxH is also a really good anime/manga. I like how the author added some elements from Naruto. Overall the story is fit for my taste. Thank you author and I hope you stay well and continue writing~
A wild loli in it's natural Habitat well maybe not but its natural but my van should be natural enough I have a leather seats after all how could I not attract a carnivorous arm eater loli a rare breed
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Like always I love this. I'm waiting for more. ---------------_-------------------------------------------------------·-------·-----------------------------–—_---------------------------------------------------------------------
fan fic by otaku_king, literally cannot be bad. I didnt actually read yet and i need 140 characters to submit this sooooo... Who lives in a pineapple under the sea?
Love it, need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Il personaggi principale migliore di moltissimi altri che ho letto finalmente uno che non sia un drogato di figa o di fare gesti "buoni" adoro l'autore continua così
I has come to show my support and now a song by a mad king Gunter, why did you gunt my fries? I gunted them, and they were mine. What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries, And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes? Gunter, there were tears there. If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
Nice work, comrade! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Beware the Main Character is a capital D, Dumbass, He thinks he can grow strong from just training in the academy, as a 7-year-old, "Barely has any chakra" because he is 7, your body main develops in your **** years, look at naruto, He was trash in the academy, but was he hits 13, oh boy, his growth is monstrous, same with people like Sasuke or Sakura, or even Itachi.
i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!! i OwN A sHaRInGa N!! i OwN A sHaRInGaN!!
finally an si with no 3 wishes and acts like a actual person -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
i love it everything is perfect 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Is mc sharigan always on like in naruto or can he have it turn on and off with his own will now Hope you continue this Book And will there be romance if there is who will it be
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Writing- good enough though beware there are traps everywhere Story development- too early too few Character design- big brain time boi Updating stability- hmmmmmm World background- its the fooking hxh world. what? Is there to say? Have some meme
Un muy buen fanfic me gusto mucho creo que tiene potencial y lo que mas me gusta es el personage y su sed de aventura, espero con ansias el desarrollo de esta historia, sobre todo como se desarrollara el personaje principal y cuales seran sus objetivos
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while the synopsis was pretty ballsy but it's great so far, 11chaps in, so I'm looking forward to where the author takes us!!!!! good luck :D
Despite having few chapters the story is very good so far, and best of all and about HxH one of the top 5 animes ever made for most people, I hope that the author keeps a constant in the releases, because many who write about HXH end up dropping, this is due to the fact that HxH has not yet been completed and the complexity of the anime's energy system, which in my view is the most creative and diverse energy system ever made in anime.