an excellent fanfic, I must admit that I thought about leaving it because all the mc's drama with Lily was too exaggerated, since when the mc's soul unites with Snape's his feelings should not be so exaggerated, but since the creation of the potion of Fortunately, the story hooked me and I also think it's the first time I've seen a fanfic where the golden finger is luck. Pst: I hope the MC stops being Lily's bitch.
a really good fanfic, although I don't know if the author is going to maintain the same level of writing, at least my first impression is very good, the MC has original power. I only have two questions, when will the chapters be released? And are the curses totally loyal to him or can they betray him?
Will you develop a love interest in the story or will you just focus on the adventure and action? .
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I don't like that he tells everyone his abilities. Besides, shouldn't he have the pride of escanor? when Escanor stops to explain.
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Without a doubt, one of the best fanfics at the moment, it reminded me of Akikan's work, but at the same time different, don't let it fall, this fanfic can become one of the best at the moment.
Will there be a love interest in the future?
Is there a love interest?
Thanks for the chapter
The story in general is very interesting and I hope I can see how far the author develops it, I just hope that the author does not abandon this story, you have potential.
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original El afortunado más grande de la historia
Sigue la aventura de Ray por el mundo de danmachi mientras se enfrenta a diversos desafíos con su suerte y su espada. Todos los personajes, escenarios y conceptos de la serie Danmachi son propiedad intelectual de Fujino Omori, además de los otros diversos elementos son propiedad de sus respectivos autores, a excepción del OC. Nota de autor: 1- Es mi primera obra, la escribo desde mi teléfono, ténganme paciencia, cualquier error de ortografía coméntenlo y lo arreglaré en la brevedad posible. 2- actualmente estudio lo cual me quita mucho tiempo, así que publicaré un capítulo cada que pueda de entre 2000 a 3000 palabras (más si me siento inspirado).2 Chs 0 お気に入り
So far (chapter 11) it looks promising, the mc is a villain who seems like a good person, but at the end of the day he is a villain so if you don't like mc that use any means to achieve their goals this is not for you.
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