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My Dream Girl Is On My Neighborhood

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Hello, i am just a high school/college student.who don't have many friends.we have just moved into new place and i usually get busy with my college works and i play games in my free time
But today,
While i was going back to my home from college the clouds were dark and winds was too fast. Only thing i wanted to do that time is get to home and drink hot tea while watching it rains. !!while i was on my own world i heard the footsteps coming from behind when i looked back i felt like i have seen an angel right from the heaven. She was so beautiful after sneaking up for few minutes i wanted to talk to her . I noticed she didn't have umbrella so she was rushing like me to get home. I just wanted it to rain so we can talk while going home under the same umbrella close with each other holding hands on umbrella. It didn't rain i but i sure reached home !! I was so disappointed at gods.(later on it turned out she is on my neighborhood) read the chapter ! How i found out.

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Justin_lake2

It is fun to read and i actually enjoyed it. The only one thing which i think missing is the more detail about character and make it from viewer perspective it's little bit uneasy for me to read it from your perspective. And it will be easy to understand when we get to know thoughts of other peoples too. Overall it took my interest with only this chapter.

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DaoistDrorzB

i love this book it's original and don't waste my time . feel like I'm watching anime without filler episodes while reading this keep making it.[img=update]

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_devanch76

It's PERFECT and lil bit reletable like what i think when beautiful girl is around. Hope to net next chapter soon . Boy knows how to play cards but don't have guts 🤣

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DaoistDrorzB

I liked the way you explained the story bit i think you should not write in your perspective.i would like to know what girl thinks about her too it's like the things happen in everyday life and enjoyed the character who can't say it but saw it how much he cares. Hopefully it will get better next time improve your words and all is fine for me and please explain little more about shroundings.

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Arjunbhandari1364

(i worked foe a week to improve first chapter and now im also getting hooked into int while reading) it became something from my little idea and thanks for my crushes giving me power to think and write :-D) i know many people gonna relate with this:-P

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DaoistFiMhi7

this is exactly what i wanted. i love these type of novel especially romcom where you don't have to cry but laugh on reletable points . it happens with each one of boys 😂

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watchill_XD

admit it we all are daishin.😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎉🎉🎉❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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_devanch76

i had not high expectations while reading first chapters but second chapter and thirds are best🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🎉

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Novelinmyblood

im enjoying it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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DaoistFiMhi7

I have also fallen in love with this and i also want it to be from reader perspective than author. Overall its good lacking bit character development all is good.

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DaoistDrorzB

again awesome chapter ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎶❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Justin_lake2

let's get it to the top its so underated. those bullshit coc,billanore this is better than those cancers. i don't know who writes those and who read those. but i loved your plots.

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watchill_XD

I hope it have more chapters i was in a mood and there were no new chapter. Can't wait for what will happen next. Highschool love is always something like this can't tell what we feel but thinking about them day n night. I have great expections from this boy. Playing right moves.

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Novelinmyblood

It's something new i have got to read I was thinking about how great plots and twists can appear. let's hope about getting more character development.

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Arjunbhandari1364

opening is really good for me. Hello, i am just a high school/college student.who don't have many friends.we have just moved into new place and i usually get busy with my college works and playing games. so let's begain.

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