/ Anime & Comics / Reincarnation- Reality of Pokemon World
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I will write story of pokemon world reality and cruelty. I was writing a book previously but stopping that as that shows very similarity to anime. I read alot of fan fictions so I am writing something which will show the reality and Please support me,
Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon or Pokemon Company and all rights are reserved by makers of Pokemon.
This Fan-Fiction has similarity to many dropped fictions and I am rewriting with some new part and also some parts are closely similar to few fan fiction (Hope you will love it).
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レビューを書くits alright, if u can get over how he is alwys gifted all his pokemon and all tht crap. this novel is really just something u would read to pass the time. lets just say, everything which can go right for the trainer does, and his luck is absolutely mind blowing if u know wat i mean. like how convenient. i dont like how, he sets his trainer up to be better than another si character from another fiction Alex bart. imma be real and say this dude would get smacked to hell and back if the owner of this novel made it similarily realistic as pokemon, a mystical journey
I dropped it after the 1st chapter. For anyone who is reading the reviews before reading, well let me summarise my view: The title of the novel states that it would be 'realistic' that's what i was hoping for, but the first chapter contradicts it right away and throws it out of the gutter. This has always been the reason pokemon is considered a kids thing, making children 10 years old venturing into the wild where pokemon that can breathe fire that melts boulders, or hypnotize you and eat your dreams, or even swallow you whole are living in abundance, there is no realism in that. Then there are orginizations that would gladly kill you or even rape you then steal your pokemon. Sigh, when i first read the title i was hoping for it to be the real deal. so a nono for me.
welllllllllllllll..............just wanna rate it.................I love pokemon si stories......... .......... ................. .........
its an ok read, its hard to be fully immersed in this fic because some words are missing in the sentences, most missing words are "the, and". comma is also missing most of the time.
I really like this story but the writing quality kinda makes it hard to read and understand and the sentence is choppy in some parts, maybe you should get someone to help or use a writing program?
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1. It ain't realistic. a. Parents force 10-year olds on a journey (despite this world being very dangerous). b. Parents dissuade MC from carrying his strong mons with him. c. Everyone (except MC) is unaware of the existence of Fairy types (this is the stupidest scenario in fanfics imo. So basically, until MC declares the existence of Fairy types, no one ever noticed the fairy type mons being immune to dragon attacks? Or did they take normal damage from dragon attacks?) Lol. 2. Grammar is very bad 3. It's more of a Pokémon- A Mystical Journey fanfic rather than a Pokémon fanfic. Almost everything is copied from there except character names and Pokémon team. I personally don't mind the world background being copied, but this dude has even copied the dialogues as they were 🤦🤣🤣
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this might be a little similar to "pokemon - a mystic journey" fan-fic by darthnorther I honestly cant tell yet if it is better or worse but the other fanfic stopped updating when I was really enjoying it... so I wish this one to atleast finish and not dropped
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pile of garbage all reviews are for xp. they try in the first chapter with the edits but after that is barely readable .............................
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Great job buddy...................keep it up..................................................and don't drop it in the middle OK......................................................................................
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amazing story with beautiful system and background data devolpment .will mega evolution will be brought because I think he deserved a gift for the raid .
good one have to few more unique ideas the rankings of trainer is good.......... .. ....... .... .. .... exp........................ ....... exp
This has remarkable similarity to 'Pokemon -- A Mystical Journey', from character background, pokemon, plot background & progression. Even ranking tiers and plot points are alike. A pokemon chaotic world is a rich idea, but this seems indistinguishable from the above fanfic, besides name changes and some tweaks here and there.