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Author Review Here, Don't Read This Book... Save your coins and time, it was my very first book and truth be told, it had no outline and was written with the flow. I was young and inexperienced. I underestimated the work it took to write a novel but I'm glad I did this because I have gained experience. Very important experience. I came back after 2 years hiatus to warm up and use it to regain my form and boy, was it worth it. So you can check out my other books, don't worry. No more abandoning.
This book is freaking awesome but I do think it could use some improvement. I am glad I read this, the story is worth it. I can see dramatic improvement in how the author wrote this year compared to two years ago.
Things got heated! I love it! welcome back author! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
My only issue here is author writing, and grammar. He put too much 'would' when even that didnt make sense. Byung would, Kwon would, Cho would, anybody fkn would. Story wise its interesting to be honest, but all those mistakes just build up more and more till they make the story uncomfortable to read.
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The book is so aweeeeeeeeeesommmme. I'd shamelessly promote and recommend another book I love. who?¿ by Khenny Esther. You should check it out when you have time, not of this genre but really interesting
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I cant be the only 1 that can relate to Byung. It is scary how similar we are😂🤣😎 Good novel, I personally hope it does not lose the momentum it has built.
i did not like the start, i even stopped reading @ some point but i came due to the constant update and i am glad i did. this story is unfolding nicely. it reminds me of the 7 Keys, a book i read. i like this book, keep it up. love from Japan
Unfortunately, missing the author’s point, or not understanding the book, is not enough to prevent one from reviewing and/or rating it. Read to understand and grasp from the writers reality then visualize in your mind ,this novel has all qualities.
What makes a good novel? Romance? Adventure? I could care less about the genre. What makes a good novel for me is the character development, suspence and anticipation. I want to be on the edge of my proverbial seat, screaming when the character is in danger, laughing when they're happy or joking. This novel delivers it and does it well. I love it so much and I'll recommend it to everyone cause its that good and I have a bias to all and everything Korean 😆❤
I never thought the book would be this amazing..after reading it I realised the author is so talented,Ateb you really did a great job man,I fell in love with it the moment you told me about the book I'm gonna recommend it to all my friends.
I really like this story, it's definitely worth reading if you've read something like... What's a good example? Like a secret society type of thing, but with super powers? I like it, and the development and progress of the MC is pretty good. The main thing the author could brush up on is grammar and wordplay. Other than that, great job!
At first i never thought this book will be that good, but as soon as i started reading it i fell in love it immediately, because the way the story is going is really interesting and the way the character will rise and be that strong to kill a god i really think it will be interesting. All i want to say is i love this book
I was showed by a friend and I have to recommend this novel to anyone looking for something that takes d edge of on a stressful day. The story could use a lot less profanity, i get it is his personality however. Looking forward to next update. UwU
I luv this sooooooooooooooooooooo much! I hope B find luv soon TT The detail good I like. Sorry 4 bad english. Author upload 2-3 chps daily plsss. Wait get tired, I ook foward 2 next chapter 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
I really liked your description it's quite good. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon.. Looking forward to it.
I cannot believe so many people are enjoying the novel. Collections and all, thanks for the support. Remember, if you like it? Add it to your collection and a vote won't do any harm to my confidence. Thank you once more.
Author Review Here, Don't Read This Book... Save your coins and time, it was my very first book and truth be told, it had no outline and was written with the flow. I was young and inexperienced. I underestimated the work it took to write a novel but I'm glad I did this because I have gained experience. Very important experience. I came back after 2 years hiatus to warm up and use it to regain my form and boy, was it worth it. So you can check out my other books, don't worry. No more abandoning.
This book is freaking awesome but I do think it could use some improvement. I am glad I read this, the story is worth it. I can see dramatic improvement in how the author wrote this year compared to two years ago.
Things got heated! I love it! welcome back author! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
My only issue here is author writing, and grammar. He put too much 'would' when even that didnt make sense. Byung would, Kwon would, Cho would, anybody fkn would. Story wise its interesting to be honest, but all those mistakes just build up more and more till they make the story uncomfortable to read.
Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice
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Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
The book is so aweeeeeeeeeesommmme. I'd shamelessly promote and recommend another book I love. who?¿ by Khenny Esther. You should check it out when you have time, not of this genre but really interesting
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I cant be the only 1 that can relate to Byung. It is scary how similar we are😂🤣😎 Good novel, I personally hope it does not lose the momentum it has built.
i did not like the start, i even stopped reading @ some point but i came due to the constant update and i am glad i did. this story is unfolding nicely. it reminds me of the 7 Keys, a book i read. i like this book, keep it up. love from Japan
Unfortunately, missing the author’s point, or not understanding the book, is not enough to prevent one from reviewing and/or rating it. Read to understand and grasp from the writers reality then visualize in your mind ,this novel has all qualities.
What makes a good novel? Romance? Adventure? I could care less about the genre. What makes a good novel for me is the character development, suspence and anticipation. I want to be on the edge of my proverbial seat, screaming when the character is in danger, laughing when they're happy or joking. This novel delivers it and does it well. I love it so much and I'll recommend it to everyone cause its that good and I have a bias to all and everything Korean 😆❤
I never thought the book would be this amazing..after reading it I realised the author is so talented,Ateb you really did a great job man,I fell in love with it the moment you told me about the book I'm gonna recommend it to all my friends.
I really like this story, it's definitely worth reading if you've read something like... What's a good example? Like a secret society type of thing, but with super powers? I like it, and the development and progress of the MC is pretty good. The main thing the author could brush up on is grammar and wordplay. Other than that, great job!
At first i never thought this book will be that good, but as soon as i started reading it i fell in love it immediately, because the way the story is going is really interesting and the way the character will rise and be that strong to kill a god i really think it will be interesting. All i want to say is i love this book
I was showed by a friend and I have to recommend this novel to anyone looking for something that takes d edge of on a stressful day. The story could use a lot less profanity, i get it is his personality however. Looking forward to next update. UwU
I luv this sooooooooooooooooooooo much! I hope B find luv soon TT The detail good I like. Sorry 4 bad english. Author upload 2-3 chps daily plsss. Wait get tired, I ook foward 2 next chapter 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
I really liked your description it's quite good. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon.. Looking forward to it.
I cannot believe so many people are enjoying the novel. Collections and all, thanks for the support. Remember, if you like it? Add it to your collection and a vote won't do any harm to my confidence. Thank you once more.