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章 4: Birth of a legend

(Please put notices under this novel

and tell me the grammar mistakes because I use a corrector and a translator to write so mistakes are not uncommon

sorry if there are plot holes at the beginning I need to write the rest.

So he will have scenes with mood swings or stereotypes to bring emotion and action to continue the sequel.)

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In a large luxurious mansion filled with light and noise to be in front of a closed-door where you could hear tired howls and phrases like, <a little more>, or <a little push and it's over>, or even <he will soon release a last effort>.

While this phrase was heard in the luxurious and richly decorated mansion, but visibly very old, it had the stones of the basement present spellings and traces of honeycombing, in particular at the level of the sill of the window. more to the south. The support of this opening is in very poor condition. Some flint rubble is detached, others have undergone a leveling. The fallen elements litter the path.

In front of the door where the noise came from are two people, one is an old man who was unusually tall, over 2.50m tall. he was well proportioned. He had a long, plowed face due to his advanced age with many rides. Around his eyes and many scars running down his chest, and was very muscular. The other man had very thin he would surely be said to be handsome but no more.

Despite his age (seen he is over 230 years old), he showed a young man in his twenties. Her hair and eyes are dark blacks. He wears a white toga, which goes up to him with a bow, in the form of a cape, on the left shoulder, and which is wrapped

around a black dress with gold borders.

The old man spoke first

<patriarch why are you coming for the birth of a simple concubine, when today is the birthday of the young mistress? > asked the old man curiously, his old man was the butler.

<* sigh * this little girl can't get along are me? Despite what talent his character is lacking> said the young man who was surely the father of our protagonist, with a sigh

<patriarch because she was spoiled too much she became very temperamental even more when she succeeded in triggering her element at the age of 11 now she is 12 years old is a great number of people heals that she is the future of the clan > he said putting a long sigh

Then he continued <* sigh * this newborn baby is not very lucky to have been born on the same day as the young mistress>

<hopefully he got away with this little devil> said the man with another sigh

<but patriarch can I ask you a question? > asked the butler again

<yes ask> he answered

<why you came here today> he said cautiously

<hahaha…. Why can't I see my newborn? > he said laughing loudly

<no, no you have every right to… ..> before he finished his sentence he was cut in

the middle of his sentence by a <ouuuuuuiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ~>

<looks like the baby is born> said the young man call patriarch with a small smile

[P.O.V 3rd person]

[delivery room]

3 good woman was in this room with the woman giving birth who was not long ago a chambermaid but now there is her giving birth to her son.

After a few more moments of pain, screaming, and <a little more>, or <a little push and it's over>, or <it will soon come out the last effort>.

A shrill but angelic sound as if Heaven itself approves this newborn baby, her voice itself rests the souls of those they hear.

<ouuuuuuiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ~>

The first good wife says <well done, madam you had a healthy son, is extremely handsome besides that>

The second good woman <yes, his beauty is so great I think if he says he is the second most beautiful baby in the world, then no one will say he is first>

The third good woman <yes, madam you should hide it the most from another concubine, she could try stupid choices>

Then

* Keeeek *

The door is open when a young man and an old man entered

The young man spoke first

<do you think but a woman would do something so stupid? > he asked with a frown

<I uh…. I meant ...> The third good woman tried to rephrase her sentence but because of the fear nothing came out of her mouth

The butler finally intervenes by saying <patriarch you know like me who concubines are extremely jealous especially your first wife who gave birth to the young mistress>

<hmm> said the young man think about it

<he could surely be useful even if he is not talented, his kicking just so that higher-level young mistresses of a kingdom want to have her as their partner or even first husband>

(A / N: in this world, there is no difference between men and women NO women do not hurt the 'first-time' women in practically the same strength as men, women have the same rights as men so this kind of thing is not uncommon)

<yes, surely> replied the butler

As the young man went to answer he remembered something. Her child after being born does not cry as he approaches the little baby in his mother's arms tired, he enough to see it is very and what he sees shocked him.

The baby looks divine with a small tuft of snow-white hair on his head with delicate lines that could take him like a girl but when he sees his eyes it all stops.

Those eyes were pure purple as if the gods NOT the sky gave her her eyes were filled with the intelligence of calm and preparation as if a storm was coming as if little

lightning was still coming out of her eyes.

It was a divine spectacle.

<you will be called Ning thanks to your divine calm your current full name is Wang Ning (currently, because that will change)>

<thank you, patriarch, for giving a name to my child> finally said the tired woman a word

[P.O.V Wang Ning (currently)]

As I open my eyes a blinding light attack but eyes, so my first reflex and crying

everything but lungs until a warm hug takes it

This warm, loving embrace was her mother's

Looking up he sees a heavenly woman

Faded white hair, emerald green eyes, delicate features a cute little nose and a delicate pink mouth

even if this woman is not the most beautiful in the world but for me, it is the greatest kick that I have ever existed

So he gave her a bright smile even the sun would fade in front of him.

Then two men come in and speak a language I don't know then he turns to me then starts talking I didn't understand anything except one thing.

My name is Ning

and this day is the day of a dawning legend and a bloody adventure

(A / N: Thank you very much for reading this chapter, I wanted to create a cultivation world but BE CAREFUL and CAREFUL this world will have technology like music players, ships fly, etc.

Because I thought it was stupid that they have techniques where it takes 1000 IQs to figure out but they don't have the technology, so I ended that in my novel.

And secondly, men and women have the same rights so forget the stereotypes of the boy who ALWAYS takes the initiative, in the novel women also the Ferron

finally the end of the author's note

THANKS, FOR MEASURING AN OPINION ON THIS NOVEL)

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(Creation is hard, cheer me up!

Have some ideas about my story? Comment it and let me know.

Like it? Add to the library!)


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Creation is hard, cheer me up!

Have some idea about my story? Comment it and let me know.

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