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ultimate legend

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作者: JiyuYami

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In this story, we follow Tian Ning an unknown genius with great contempt because of the "genius" of the older half-sister.
So when the reality is that he has done everything to show a minimum of talent to his sister so that she is not eclipsed.
He was laughed at and scorned by virtually his entire family, but he ended up being able to rely only on his mother and some other (you would know when you read it) to whom she died on her 4th birthday and that is the day of the drop of water that broke the camel's back.
He wanted to cut all ties with his old family which is a secondary branch of the great Wang clan, so he takes the last name of his deceased mother who was Tian of the secondary branch of the great Tian clan.
This day will mark the beginning of a bloody adventure.
An absent legend who will mark his name forever in history

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JiyuYami

Well everyone, I'm obviously giving myself a 5-star bias to increase its rating. - I hope you will put notices under this novel

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Altair_star

Je te soutiendrai avec ma pierre toute-puissante. Regardez comme il brille de puissance. Prenez-le autor-san -

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blackli86103907

From what I could see it's a very good novel with a lot of potential I suggest it to you I hope you continue to write it Mr. author - -

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mysterios_origin_v

Your novel deserves the 5 stars 4-star writing quality grammar errors are quite common but you said it's because you use a translator is a proofreader so it's forgivable for Stability of updates Story development Character design I can't say anything yet because we are in chapter 5 (of the story) the best point is are your vote hold Global Context because you took the risk of putting the Global Context before the MC found out but rather put a Global Context before starting the MC adventure

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Madara1137

Good luck hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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