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Monachre

Hello, the author here. I would like to point things to look forward on my novel. Good Stuff: > I will do my best as an author to create decent chapters that fit your taste. > You can chat with me anytime in discord if you have a suggestion regarding the novel. (You can put it in the comments too). Bad Stuff: > The 2nd until 30th chapters are still in 1st person pov and I notice some readers are liking it so I decided to not changed it. > Expect grammar mistakes. I mostly mixed up he/she, him/his/her but I'm trying to fix it up. (Thanks to the readers who helped out.) > This book is a slow-burn one and sometimes the flow of the story changes. > There are also personality inconsistencies of the characters depending on the situation especially if they experience harsh events. (Sometimes, it also depends on my mood T_T) > I have planned the ending but my mind changes from time to time so right now, I'm writing without an ending in mind and would just go with the flow. So I am as clueless as you are but I hoped you can help me with great ideas to satisfy you, readers. (We start together, we end together). > There are some chapters that I stretched too much and perceived as boring. (My mind sometimes stopped functioning). > This novel is about werewolves but there are also changes of plot in the volumes. New plots that I added to add some spice. > There are also a couple of male leads. (I like hawt men surrounding my MC) but it's not Harem. > My MC has multiple sides, so expect that her attitude and mindset are not always the same and sometimes would conflict with her original self. Warnings: > Before reading this novel, please prepare yourself to blur the reality and enter the world of the MC. > Grab a cushion to punch if you're angry or pissed. > A box of tissue if you wanna cry. > Please prepare your feeling for a roller coaster of emotions that may make you drop this novel but give it a chance. (Please don't leave me). Thank You!

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Lorena_Alvarado

I love the story but I really really wish a happy ending for kanisha and Axel please please keep writing for this book 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Alexandra_Conklin

The general story itself is pretty good but the writing quality leaves much to be desired. It makes it difficult to read because the writing is very choppy.

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memejeany

Love the story but worried that I might not know what happened at the end because the novel maybe incomplete. Sha must be a lonely life after all but destiny kept on calling on her. She must have a better lifer at the end of this book.

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Daoist148564

There some mistake in the spellings. Sometimes their names are misplaced. But overall it's an interesting story. It helps me have knowledge of medieval era.

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Moon_Lee_6633

I love it, the storyline is amazing, explaining the transition of every character is great. I really look forward to other projects from you. keep up the good work.

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Dike_Somto

Great story eagerly waiting for the story to be completed.love the characters and their roles can't wait for the enf. Thumbs up to the writer

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Favour_Uwadia

I love the progress of the story so far. What does fate have in store for Kanisha, Dario and Kanisha's first mate Nathan? Wow! Kanisha is just to awesome and very smart. Kudos author👍.

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Paulyn_Ruth

This story is the best I've had in my life I literally glued toy phone inorder for me to finish it and now that I have,I think I'll start reading it all over. Please load more chapters I really love this story

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Mila_Prugar

The summary is intriguing. I hope that the content itself has less grammar errors than the summary because the plot is good. [img=recommend]

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This author is a good writer. I like reading stories with a female lead. This book has heartbreak, redemption, betrayal and a few others that I can't think of. It will keep you on the edge of your seat or bed as you don't realize your getting closer to the end of the chapter with questions. It has happened to me too many times. Lol. Please excuse the grammar from the author. She's trying to go back and fix those chapters. I'm a long supporter of this book and other books that I find hidden away on webnovel.

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Malignant

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Marian_Aidoo

So addicting This story has got me hooked. Also loooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeee the front cover 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍looking foward to more chapters

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shantalaya23375

Im in love this has surpassed my expectations like oommmgggg this had become liFe so keep it BeCause i dont want it to end any time soon 🥰☺️☺️

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revin_na

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didies
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The plot is nice. and i reallg hate Nathan tho. And Lily too but i Hate Nathan more like how the F you said you love her but u did shit all the tImes

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devil_spirit

I hope that cheating bastard of a mate Nathan is not the ML....I just can't really stand him right from the first chap he was introduced...what an asshole😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬

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MidnightOtter

As a fan of fantasy romance with a bit of myth, this novel has me hooked. The story plot line is marvellous... absolutely thrilling and stunning. Very well written Author! Also have to say that this has brought me on a huge emotional roller-coaster, anger, hate, pain, love, happy, sad, dark depression (haha). Overall, it is a marvellous novel. Keep it up Author!!!

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Monachre

Hello, the author here. I would like to point things to look forward on my novel. Good Stuff: > I will do my best as an author to create decent chapters that fit your taste. > You can chat with me anytime in discord if you have a suggestion regarding the novel. (You can put it in the comments too). Bad Stuff: > The 2nd until 30th chapters are still in 1st person pov and I notice some readers are liking it so I decided to not changed it. > Expect grammar mistakes. I mostly mixed up he/she, him/his/her but I'm trying to fix it up. (Thanks to the readers who helped out.) > This book is a slow-burn one and sometimes the flow of the story changes. > There are also personality inconsistencies of the characters depending on the situation especially if they experience harsh events. (Sometimes, it also depends on my mood T_T) > I have planned the ending but my mind changes from time to time so right now, I'm writing without an ending in mind and would just go with the flow. So I am as clueless as you are but I hoped you can help me with great ideas to satisfy you, readers. (We start together, we end together). > There are some chapters that I stretched too much and perceived as boring. (My mind sometimes stopped functioning). > This novel is about werewolves but there are also changes of plot in the volumes. New plots that I added to add some spice. > There are also a couple of male leads. (I like hawt men surrounding my MC) but it's not Harem. > My MC has multiple sides, so expect that her attitude and mindset are not always the same and sometimes would conflict with her original self. Warnings: > Before reading this novel, please prepare yourself to blur the reality and enter the world of the MC. > Grab a cushion to punch if you're angry or pissed. > A box of tissue if you wanna cry. > Please prepare your feeling for a roller coaster of emotions that may make you drop this novel but give it a chance. (Please don't leave me). Thank You!

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Lorena_Alvarado

I love the story but I really really wish a happy ending for kanisha and Axel please please keep writing for this book 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Alexandra_Conklin

The general story itself is pretty good but the writing quality leaves much to be desired. It makes it difficult to read because the writing is very choppy.

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memejeany

Love the story but worried that I might not know what happened at the end because the novel maybe incomplete. Sha must be a lonely life after all but destiny kept on calling on her. She must have a better lifer at the end of this book.

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Daoist148564

There some mistake in the spellings. Sometimes their names are misplaced. But overall it's an interesting story. It helps me have knowledge of medieval era.

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Moon_Lee_6633

I love it, the storyline is amazing, explaining the transition of every character is great. I really look forward to other projects from you. keep up the good work.

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Dike_Somto

Great story eagerly waiting for the story to be completed.love the characters and their roles can't wait for the enf. Thumbs up to the writer

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Favour_Uwadia

I love the progress of the story so far. What does fate have in store for Kanisha, Dario and Kanisha's first mate Nathan? Wow! Kanisha is just to awesome and very smart. Kudos author👍.

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Paulyn_Ruth

This story is the best I've had in my life I literally glued toy phone inorder for me to finish it and now that I have,I think I'll start reading it all over. Please load more chapters I really love this story

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Mila_Prugar

The summary is intriguing. I hope that the content itself has less grammar errors than the summary because the plot is good. [img=recommend]

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hasvu
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This author is a good writer. I like reading stories with a female lead. This book has heartbreak, redemption, betrayal and a few others that I can't think of. It will keep you on the edge of your seat or bed as you don't realize your getting closer to the end of the chapter with questions. It has happened to me too many times. Lol. Please excuse the grammar from the author. She's trying to go back and fix those chapters. I'm a long supporter of this book and other books that I find hidden away on webnovel.

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Malignant

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Marian_Aidoo

So addicting This story has got me hooked. Also loooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeee the front cover 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍looking foward to more chapters

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shantalaya23375

Im in love this has surpassed my expectations like oommmgggg this had become liFe so keep it BeCause i dont want it to end any time soon 🥰☺️☺️

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revin_na

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didies
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The plot is nice. and i reallg hate Nathan tho. And Lily too but i Hate Nathan more like how the F you said you love her but u did shit all the tImes

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devil_spirit

I hope that cheating bastard of a mate Nathan is not the ML....I just can't really stand him right from the first chap he was introduced...what an asshole😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬

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MidnightOtter

As a fan of fantasy romance with a bit of myth, this novel has me hooked. The story plot line is marvellous... absolutely thrilling and stunning. Very well written Author! Also have to say that this has brought me on a huge emotional roller-coaster, anger, hate, pain, love, happy, sad, dark depression (haha). Overall, it is a marvellous novel. Keep it up Author!!!

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