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it is definitely different and exciting, but it drags a bit... and it needs less self explanation and more romantic feelings also the way she carries herself is modern but no sexual life is crazy boring.
like this book so far wish there was more chapters updated at a time.[img=update]....please update more chapters at a time i relaly am into this book
I think this book has definitely been an interesting read for me, I like the thrill it brings and i want more chapters to be released.👍👍👍😊
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Hi there monachre! i super like your storyy but sad to say i didn't read that much because i didnt have that much time but don't worry I love your story so I will definitely spare some time to continue reading it uwwuuu Godbless
I think that it has been really good and i hope to see more books that are just like it! This is the best book ive read in a while! I love reading werewolf books
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I thought I would drop this book after reading the first chapter but the plot and twist of the story got me already hooked. its a nice book to read and I love the story line.
Loved everything about this story. Really wonderful and easy to read a story with a very interesting plot. The description is perfect as well as grammar. I already love werewolf stories and so I am already hooked up. Loved it so far <3
Uwu the character is so adorable like the reader. I had a smile on my face reading it. The narration was simple and it was easy to understand. Keep up the good work, bb
The writing and dialogue is simple, and the plot seems to go along decently. I do have several issues that I will point out. These are my suggestions, so you are free to ignore them. Main problem is that the plot seems to be disjointed and not flowing well in the very beginning. Like when you introduced the girl as an assassin, I was a bit thrown off at how abrupt the input was. I would highly recommend that you change some things in the beginning chapters to hint at her other side. Your later chapters are much better in writing, but you need to create a better impression from the beginning to draw readers in. But besides that, keep up the good work author !
I binged the whole book, well the free parts and although there are some grammar errors here and there, I love the book. So, facts: Nathan is a b***ard F**k Lily Good luck to Sha and Axel.
this Is odd it feels like its a draft or a storyboard for a full novel. I am enjoying it so far. the plot has potential, but the pacing is very off
It's a nice story and I am already hooked. I love the storyline, please give more chapters.....Please don't middle drop it.I want to follow this book this the end............All the best
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Nice story you have here. Writing style is good too. Didn't find grammatical errors as such. Although the synopsis has one error so do edit that. Good job.Keep writing!
Firstly, I love your first person presentation of your MC, it made your story look unique. Nice idea building of your own version of werewolves. Nice development and storyline. Your novel should be going into recommendations now, because it's too nice to be kept hidden. Nice job.
Interesting plot. I like that it's unique. And that poem-type thing you wrote is very original. Overall, ur story is very gripping and I will keep on reading it :)
This is so amazing! The first chapters is not quite interesting but as you go on. The plot twisted and it's really interesting to read. Recommend!
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
Interesting. The writing is simple and somewhat easy to understand, comprehend, and imagine. Some sentences are long and take a lot of breath to read... but not bad and good overall. The updates are stable... quality is good The development is smooth, there is hardly anything to complain about there. Not too fast or slow. The character's action is described well so I think I am satisfied there The world is described well too... we are able to imagine stuff easily so in a way I am satisfied. Overall a good read, I recommend it.
Romance fix with Fantasy, this is the type of book you want to read! The title speaks for itself! It has out of this world context! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED 💯
Are you like me and you're tired of reading harem novels, useless female leads, baseless romance and finally SYSTEM novels. If you answered yes to any of those then pick this book up and thank me later.
The story is pretty great! The author goes in straightforward! ((Whish is what I like since there's not that much info dumping!)) The characters as well are well thought of, all in all, the author is very good at explaining details and expressing the character's emotion! It hooked me the first time I read it and I hope that the author would update even more 🤗🤗
great story, could be cleaner, and the grammar could be much better, but over all great story, can't wait to read more, I love it thank you.
it is definitely different and exciting, but it drags a bit... and it needs less self explanation and more romantic feelings also the way she carries herself is modern but no sexual life is crazy boring.
like this book so far wish there was more chapters updated at a time.[img=update]....please update more chapters at a time i relaly am into this book
I think this book has definitely been an interesting read for me, I like the thrill it brings and i want more chapters to be released.👍👍👍😊
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Hi there monachre! i super like your storyy but sad to say i didn't read that much because i didnt have that much time but don't worry I love your story so I will definitely spare some time to continue reading it uwwuuu Godbless
I think that it has been really good and i hope to see more books that are just like it! This is the best book ive read in a while! I love reading werewolf books
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I thought I would drop this book after reading the first chapter but the plot and twist of the story got me already hooked. its a nice book to read and I love the story line.
Loved everything about this story. Really wonderful and easy to read a story with a very interesting plot. The description is perfect as well as grammar. I already love werewolf stories and so I am already hooked up. Loved it so far <3
Uwu the character is so adorable like the reader. I had a smile on my face reading it. The narration was simple and it was easy to understand. Keep up the good work, bb
The writing and dialogue is simple, and the plot seems to go along decently. I do have several issues that I will point out. These are my suggestions, so you are free to ignore them. Main problem is that the plot seems to be disjointed and not flowing well in the very beginning. Like when you introduced the girl as an assassin, I was a bit thrown off at how abrupt the input was. I would highly recommend that you change some things in the beginning chapters to hint at her other side. Your later chapters are much better in writing, but you need to create a better impression from the beginning to draw readers in. But besides that, keep up the good work author !
I binged the whole book, well the free parts and although there are some grammar errors here and there, I love the book. So, facts: Nathan is a b***ard F**k Lily Good luck to Sha and Axel.
this Is odd it feels like its a draft or a storyboard for a full novel. I am enjoying it so far. the plot has potential, but the pacing is very off
It's a nice story and I am already hooked. I love the storyline, please give more chapters.....Please don't middle drop it.I want to follow this book this the end............All the best
✨🌺🌺✨🌺🌺✨ 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺 ✨🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺✨ ✨✨🌺🌺🌺✨✨ ✨✨✨🌺✨✨✨ ✨🌸🌸✨🌸🌸✨ 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 ✨🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸✨ ✨✨🌸🌸🌸✨✨ ✨✨✨🌸✨✨✨
Nice story you have here. Writing style is good too. Didn't find grammatical errors as such. Although the synopsis has one error so do edit that. Good job.Keep writing!
Firstly, I love your first person presentation of your MC, it made your story look unique. Nice idea building of your own version of werewolves. Nice development and storyline. Your novel should be going into recommendations now, because it's too nice to be kept hidden. Nice job.
Interesting plot. I like that it's unique. And that poem-type thing you wrote is very original. Overall, ur story is very gripping and I will keep on reading it :)
This is so amazing! The first chapters is not quite interesting but as you go on. The plot twisted and it's really interesting to read. Recommend!
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
Interesting. The writing is simple and somewhat easy to understand, comprehend, and imagine. Some sentences are long and take a lot of breath to read... but not bad and good overall. The updates are stable... quality is good The development is smooth, there is hardly anything to complain about there. Not too fast or slow. The character's action is described well so I think I am satisfied there The world is described well too... we are able to imagine stuff easily so in a way I am satisfied. Overall a good read, I recommend it.
Romance fix with Fantasy, this is the type of book you want to read! The title speaks for itself! It has out of this world context! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED 💯
Are you like me and you're tired of reading harem novels, useless female leads, baseless romance and finally SYSTEM novels. If you answered yes to any of those then pick this book up and thank me later.
The story is pretty great! The author goes in straightforward! ((Whish is what I like since there's not that much info dumping!)) The characters as well are well thought of, all in all, the author is very good at explaining details and expressing the character's emotion! It hooked me the first time I read it and I hope that the author would update even more 🤗🤗
great story, could be cleaner, and the grammar could be much better, but over all great story, can't wait to read more, I love it thank you.