Avatar With A System Dropped (Up to Adopt)

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作者: southgamez

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Join Soren as he joins Team Avatar on their Journey around the world running from the Fire Nation while training to fight and defeat the Fire Lord and end the war to bring peace and balance back to the world.

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50ShadesOfAss

If You like reading about the Mc just following the main cast around and is only there to help them and has no goal at all, then read this. MC Soul purpose in his life is to travel with the Avatar. Train the Avatar. Help the Avatar during his journey it’s so lame. This is why Avatar stories are so bad because 90% of them is just the main character following Aang around. Nothing special about main character at all. He has no special goals except helping the avatar. He has a system, but his goal is to get stronger so he can HELP THE AVATAR. When he gets new bending abilities his first thought is “great, now I can help Aang and train him with these!” Like how lame is that. WQ 3 stars- The dialogue is bland and it’s just not interesting to read. Author doesn’t even use quotation marks so if you are bothered by that then i don’t know what to tell you Updates 4 stars— it just started so I don’t know SD 2 stars— mc gets system, reborn by random god but he doesn’t seem to have ANY previous life memories except vague Avatar story memories he got from ROB CD 2 stars- like I said, mc not even his own person. Train avatar help avatar. he lives for the avatar like he might as well kneel in front of him and kiss his feet. mC MIGHT be a blabbermouth. We’ll see if he tells the gang his secrets in the future but he did tell this random stranger that he received a dream to help AVATAR. Who does that? WORLD background 4 stars - only because it’s Avatar world

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