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The plot was unique and immediately piqued my Interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his hardwork.
I'm going to do an honest review of this novel, so don't mind the stars that I gave because they aren't that accurate. First of all: the story is confusing, I don't know or understand the characters, world, or anything at all. All the chapters feel incomplete, it's like reading a story from the middle of it, I couldn't grasp anything. Second of all: quotation marks, grammar, commas, and punctuations are somewhat off the place. If you can, please take the time and edit your chapters author. Third of all: The pace that the story is going at is very confusing and extremely fast. At first, we were in a cave, then at an auction, then at someone's bedroom. The sudden change from character to character and from setting to setting is very uncomfortable and confuses you, you can't even connect the dots or analyze the story. I am sure that the author has a great story, it's just hasn't been delivered well. Writing needs patience before all, and if that isn't achieved then the story will go downhill, and it also needs good narration and dialogue. If you can, please try to hire someone who can deliver your story the way you want it. Also a piece of strong advice for you, the first chapter is everything. Try to re-write your first chapter and make it captivating for the reader so he can love the story and want to read more of it. Good luck
Well. What can I say... Honestly, this story is extremely confusing at the moment. I couldn't understand anything that was happening, all the characters you introduced sounded obsolete, or to be more metaphorical, soulless. The worldbuilding is barely explained on the synopsis although when reading the story I couldn't grasp anything! I didn't know what the hell is going on the state of the world and the characters! The english is readable, it doesn't have too much problems on the grammar other than the speech and thought pharagraphs. If I'm going to put this story into a few words, it would've been... *Confused clusterfunk*. Sorry if my review is kinda harsh but I'm being honest, your story is simply confusing and could use some work and more detail. Even now I still don't know how the MC looks like! And I can barely grasp anything about the power system or supernatural elements on the story!
So far up to chapter 2, and i already love it. Constant suspense makes it hard to stop reading!!!! At one part i was nervous, it's adventurous and I'm intrigued by the vocabulary. The plot,twists it's admirable!!!Can't wait to read more
Great story I like the way the author makes me conceive an illusion of the characters ☠️☠️ I love the young master... The most beautiful statue 😝😍 He has a good start. I can't wait for Chapter 2👍👍
OMG This story is amazing Phoebe You're really doing a great job At first, I was very reluctant to read this story but I'm glad I did I love the way the characters are being portrayed Nice setup You're really doing a good job I'll continue to vote for you Keep it up Much love 😘 as always 💜
ネタバレを明かす The plot was unique and immediately piqued my Interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his hardwork.
I'm going to do an honest review of this novel, so don't mind the stars that I gave because they aren't that accurate. First of all: the story is confusing, I don't know or understand the characters, world, or anything at all. All the chapters feel incomplete, it's like reading a story from the middle of it, I couldn't grasp anything. Second of all: quotation marks, grammar, commas, and punctuations are somewhat off the place. If you can, please take the time and edit your chapters author. Third of all: The pace that the story is going at is very confusing and extremely fast. At first, we were in a cave, then at an auction, then at someone's bedroom. The sudden change from character to character and from setting to setting is very uncomfortable and confuses you, you can't even connect the dots or analyze the story. I am sure that the author has a great story, it's just hasn't been delivered well. Writing needs patience before all, and if that isn't achieved then the story will go downhill, and it also needs good narration and dialogue. If you can, please try to hire someone who can deliver your story the way you want it. Also a piece of strong advice for you, the first chapter is everything. Try to re-write your first chapter and make it captivating for the reader so he can love the story and want to read more of it. Good luck
Well. What can I say... Honestly, this story is extremely confusing at the moment. I couldn't understand anything that was happening, all the characters you introduced sounded obsolete, or to be more metaphorical, soulless. The worldbuilding is barely explained on the synopsis although when reading the story I couldn't grasp anything! I didn't know what the hell is going on the state of the world and the characters! The english is readable, it doesn't have too much problems on the grammar other than the speech and thought pharagraphs. If I'm going to put this story into a few words, it would've been... *Confused clusterfunk*. Sorry if my review is kinda harsh but I'm being honest, your story is simply confusing and could use some work and more detail. Even now I still don't know how the MC looks like! And I can barely grasp anything about the power system or supernatural elements on the story!
So far up to chapter 2, and i already love it. Constant suspense makes it hard to stop reading!!!! At one part i was nervous, it's adventurous and I'm intrigued by the vocabulary. The plot,twists it's admirable!!!Can't wait to read more
Great story I like the way the author makes me conceive an illusion of the characters ☠️☠️ I love the young master... The most beautiful statue 😝😍 He has a good start. I can't wait for Chapter 2👍👍
OMG This story is amazing Phoebe You're really doing a great job At first, I was very reluctant to read this story but I'm glad I did I love the way the characters are being portrayed Nice setup You're really doing a good job I'll continue to vote for you Keep it up Much love 😘 as always 💜
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