I really like this story so far. That take on the system genre is really unique, and I just really enjoy the atmosphere and characters. I really like Albrecht, he feels really relatable, and I really love those few moments of the comedic undertone. It's just very enjoyable all in all. I also love how the worldbuilding is slow and gradual, leaving that mystery but not dumping everything at you at once, it takes the 'show don't tell' route. The writing quality is just a bonus really. Nearly no mistakes in the grammar or whatsoever, and the paragraph structure is smooth and lets you have an easy read-through and through. I really enjoyed this story, and I definitely am going to continue reading it. All in all, 5/5, worth your time.
The first chapter is pretty much a testimony to what you'll see further on. Plot twists, unexpected character and plot development, and all-out very intriguing and unexpected in terms of events. It tells the story of a villain protagonist in a very unconventional way, from their pov to be precise, and I rarely ever saw something like that here especially with such writing. All in all, worth your time. Absaloutly deserves a read.
I was gonna try to leave a review now, but this is way too intriguing. I'll postpone that until the end of the chapters
I mean, you could still try your luck with a shotgun
"All that preparation for nothing..." the woman commented, "No demon could stop me, no champion could stop me, even North himself wasn't able to end me... And now the only person that had any chance to finally putting an end to my misery is gone as well..."
Fantasy · Breno_Ranyere
Oh, you want to put an end to yourself? Then why not say so from the beginning! Let me introduce you to my best friend, clorox bleach
"Put an end to me... I searched for so long trying to find someone that could finally free me from this life... This never-ending prison..."
Fantasy · Breno_Ranyere
Well....that got me out of nowhere
Even if she ever found herself having trouble getting cursed energy, she would just walk in the middle of a city and kill a random person to trigger either the fear or the hate of those around her. Acquiring negative emotions was never a problem for her.
Fantasy · Breno_Ranyere
"Not because she enjoyed killing them, but because she enjoyed killing them."
Mia discovered a new form of entertainment from the act of eviscerating demons. Not because she enjoyed the act of killing them, but because she loved the thrill of being face-to-face with danger and overcoming it.
Fantasy · Breno_Ranyere
Yep, sounds like season 1 of gambit
After she failed to track down her sister, the ponytailed girl simply returned to the mansion and continued to torment her family until she got bored with it.
Fantasy · Breno_Ranyere
Daryll is just the definite article of what "best girl" means
She just grinned. "I'm dead broke!"
Mechanised Intent
Sci-fi · Hesreth