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First off, the writing style is a mess. A very important quote that generally pretains to good writing is, "show don't tell". The entire story is written in the 'tell' format, and it just makes your story a chore to read.Next onto the actual story that is told. First, I get the premise right, a person with common sense and some modern knowledge transmigrates and actually decides to use said advantages. But, this was executed very poorly in this story, mainly because the author kept dumbing down the cultivation world to make the MC seem smart. Now, if this was the a whole new, unestablished Cultivation world then it would be fine, but the problem is that this is the well established world of Against The Gods(ATG). The author either chose to selectively ignore certain world buildings factors, or the author genuinely lacks knowledge about ATG. Either way the author has made a world that does not makes sense, even when only considering the surface level. Moreover, the author has a habit of vaguely and barely 'telling' and explaining events and story aspects, which makes the story confusing to follow, and someting unreadable.Quite honestly I have way, way more to say but I've already spent five minutes writing this and I wanna get backing to the endless search for a decent novel, so.
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I have nothing bad to say about this fanfiction. I'm just giving five stars for the only completed work by this author.
the original protag is out. the one inside the pearl is a different person. the way the story was written is like a summary very fast paced. but where is the vermilion bird tho. i like it tho. I'd like to elaborate more for the author but this is a completed ff already soooo. this review is for the readers.
Anyone who says it's bad is because they haven't read until about 30 chapters, Very good And there's always something bigger than you Cagdbxhxhxggxbxbxhxbxhxhchchcuchcycyc tá hcnchjfhxyx vc já b
Does anyone still reads this fanfic from time to time or did everyone leave immediately after finishing it? ................................ I say 50/50
........what can I say? as expected on a wish fulfilment based fanfic or novel. .......is it just me or some also think that a proclaimed fanfic without the protagonist knowing about the original story of the world where he's in is downright plagiarism?? can someone explain if I'm wrong. tbh the elder brother(atg) of the author is many times better than this one even if it's a wish fulfilment I can't help but criticise it.
Author nerfed the MC WHICH I DON'T LIKE..................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Feng Xian... ‘I have no name: I am but two days old.’ What shall I call thee? ‘I happy am, Joy is my name.’ Sweet joy befall thee! Pretty joy! Sweet joy, but two days old. Sweet joy I call thee: Thou dost smile, I sing the while, Sweet joy befall thee!
It’ a really good ATG fanfic which doesn’t follow the usual tropes of taking over YC role on the story. Although does things and saves people that originally YC would save and do. For the most part it’ unique as for example he doesn’ have the evil gods veins. It’s not too long either so it’s bingeable in a day or too depending on dedication.
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good book , nice and ahortb. good characters . to be honest somewhat better than the original. would really recommend it as a fanfic . best factor for this fanfic was that it was actually completed and not dropped
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I just finished reading it, and I loved this fanfic. It will not be the same for everyone! But personally, I liked it. Know that there is harem, but contrary to other fanfic from this author, there is NO lemon. It beggings slowly at the start (the harem built I mean) but at a point the story accelerate a LOT. Know that this story goes quickly, you may think it goes TOO much quickly (I thought so too) but I still loved it. MC isn't a simp, you may find harem members annoying at first and MC's descisions stupid, but don't let that decourage you as the girls become 'docile' in the end and MC's harem members are INVOLVED like (almost) no other do, and their interactions with MC and others are funny and well described. This story is extremely well written, not everyone will like the plot or the MC (from what I've seen in some other review), but for me, it was a great story that I took pleasure in reading.
lovely FF, I did enjoy it quite alot, you could say its a refresh. Even the ending was nice and fitting. As it was said in the discription it is a near sliceoflife. Will be looking forward for your next project. I would recommand author to open a patreon, so that people could simply tip you because it was a nice read.
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An overall interesting fic and very good ending. Love other works too. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This book is one of the best i have ever read in many websites. It us even completed as many of the books that i read is not even half done.
I've read other stories of this author, so I can honestly say that it's very visible that it's the first fanfic. Grammar is worse and the MC is unbearable - he is a true hypocrite and a typical young master.
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Story was good until he started to build a harem .........................................................................................................................
First off, the writing style is a mess. A very important quote that generally pretains to good writing is, "show don't tell". The entire story is written in the 'tell' format, and it just makes your story a chore to read.Next onto the actual story that is told. First, I get the premise right, a person with common sense and some modern knowledge transmigrates and actually decides to use said advantages. But, this was executed very poorly in this story, mainly because the author kept dumbing down the cultivation world to make the MC seem smart. Now, if this was the a whole new, unestablished Cultivation world then it would be fine, but the problem is that this is the well established world of Against The Gods(ATG). The author either chose to selectively ignore certain world buildings factors, or the author genuinely lacks knowledge about ATG. Either way the author has made a world that does not makes sense, even when only considering the surface level. Moreover, the author has a habit of vaguely and barely 'telling' and explaining events and story aspects, which makes the story confusing to follow, and someting unreadable.Quite honestly I have way, way more to say but I've already spent five minutes writing this and I wanna get backing to the endless search for a decent novel, so.
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AMAZING FANFICTION OF ATG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ART!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have nothing bad to say about this fanfiction. I'm just giving five stars for the only completed work by this author.
the original protag is out. the one inside the pearl is a different person. the way the story was written is like a summary very fast paced. but where is the vermilion bird tho. i like it tho. I'd like to elaborate more for the author but this is a completed ff already soooo. this review is for the readers.
Anyone who says it's bad is because they haven't read until about 30 chapters, Very good And there's always something bigger than you Cagdbxhxhxggxbxbxhxbxhxhchchcuchcycyc tá hcnchjfhxyx vc já b
Does anyone still reads this fanfic from time to time or did everyone leave immediately after finishing it? ................................ I say 50/50
........what can I say? as expected on a wish fulfilment based fanfic or novel. .......is it just me or some also think that a proclaimed fanfic without the protagonist knowing about the original story of the world where he's in is downright plagiarism?? can someone explain if I'm wrong. tbh the elder brother(atg) of the author is many times better than this one even if it's a wish fulfilment I can't help but criticise it.
Author nerfed the MC WHICH I DON'T LIKE..................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Feng Xian... ‘I have no name: I am but two days old.’ What shall I call thee? ‘I happy am, Joy is my name.’ Sweet joy befall thee! Pretty joy! Sweet joy, but two days old. Sweet joy I call thee: Thou dost smile, I sing the while, Sweet joy befall thee!
It’ a really good ATG fanfic which doesn’t follow the usual tropes of taking over YC role on the story. Although does things and saves people that originally YC would save and do. For the most part it’ unique as for example he doesn’ have the evil gods veins. It’s not too long either so it’s bingeable in a day or too depending on dedication.
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good book , nice and ahortb. good characters . to be honest somewhat better than the original. would really recommend it as a fanfic . best factor for this fanfic was that it was actually completed and not dropped
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I just finished reading it, and I loved this fanfic. It will not be the same for everyone! But personally, I liked it. Know that there is harem, but contrary to other fanfic from this author, there is NO lemon. It beggings slowly at the start (the harem built I mean) but at a point the story accelerate a LOT. Know that this story goes quickly, you may think it goes TOO much quickly (I thought so too) but I still loved it. MC isn't a simp, you may find harem members annoying at first and MC's descisions stupid, but don't let that decourage you as the girls become 'docile' in the end and MC's harem members are INVOLVED like (almost) no other do, and their interactions with MC and others are funny and well described. This story is extremely well written, not everyone will like the plot or the MC (from what I've seen in some other review), but for me, it was a great story that I took pleasure in reading.
lovely FF, I did enjoy it quite alot, you could say its a refresh. Even the ending was nice and fitting. As it was said in the discription it is a near sliceoflife. Will be looking forward for your next project. I would recommand author to open a patreon, so that people could simply tip you because it was a nice read.
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An overall interesting fic and very good ending. Love other works too. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This book is one of the best i have ever read in many websites. It us even completed as many of the books that i read is not even half done.
I've read other stories of this author, so I can honestly say that it's very visible that it's the first fanfic. Grammar is worse and the MC is unbearable - he is a true hypocrite and a typical young master.
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Story was good until he started to build a harem .........................................................................................................................
Great against the gods fan fic. Aaaaaaaaa