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To call this trash would be an insult to trash, the grammar is practically unreadable, the MC is a pathetic retard and the plot is convoluted, idiotic and filled with so many holes it has practically become one giant hole.
Very good novel but the names of people become weird in the second half as if it was copy paste from a translator deadpool becomes dead waiter and other weird stuff
I tried to read more than the 190 chapters but it didn't work, the MC is very bad and weak, he meddles in literally everything but that is not the problem, but that he makes everything he gets worse, be it the story of the man of iron or thor, the system is useless and also extremely dictator who rules the MC, the MC has no goal or ambition, he just goes around wearing a uniform and facing low level people, 190 chapters and the guy remains poor and hiding identity , disgusted
Translation wise: it's good but at one point this is half MTL half human translated. So much more readable than pure MTL. The novel itself is quite consistent. The system doesn't devour the novel. The MC doesn't become so OP that he's going to boringly succeed whatever he tries. It does a good job mixing plot from the different movies. There is consequences to MC's action. Exemple: mc call iron man to beat the destroyer, so Thor doesn't have to sacrifice himself and earn his power back. So MC will have to teach Thor how to be worthy again somehow. That being said. Though the novel's average level is pretty good. There is no real peak. No WOW moment. Overall this is good. Not amazing. But a good fan fiction is already rare enough.
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I have not read it yet but i am bout to start. this Is only for exp. Equivalent exchange,5 star in charge for 5 exp.
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Not worth the time.........hero complexity is to crappy. @-@. ...........................................................................
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Well I have read upto 210 chapter and all I can say is This is such a fantastic marvel novel. Why is no one continuing to translate it?
From chapter 273 onwards the translation becomes horrible. A real shame as i really enjoyed it so far. Cant recommend reading past chapter 273 as it is.
This is someone else's translation..................................................................................................................................................................
Overall, no... I put world building and story development as 2 as this is a fanfic. The character is a no from me, just no, and I hate the system. The writing quality... Oh god the writing quality, it's just the worst how can you call this writing it's all wrong. I'll try and be a little constructive, the dialogue is awkward as in it sounds stiff and if you where talking you would sound like your embarrassed. I don't know how to describe the rest of it... Overall, I hope you get a bit better at writing and go back and rewrite everything. It has a good premise but the execution is terrible.
Motherfu*cker, the later part of this novel is translated by using machine translation, blatantly copied from the MTL website. Please fix the god damn translation if you put this novel in webnovel in the future. And also if possible, please fix the translation in this novel
Epic epic epic than you translator. I read this story a while back and it was dropped i dont know if this is all of it or if quality drops later. What i do know is i spent at least 7 hours searching the web when i first read it trying to find a new chapter thanks if i could show my happiness at moment through words i would. Going to read this over a week or two
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To call this trash would be an insult to trash, the grammar is practically unreadable, the MC is a pathetic retard and the plot is convoluted, idiotic and filled with so many holes it has practically become one giant hole.
Very good novel but the names of people become weird in the second half as if it was copy paste from a translator deadpool becomes dead waiter and other weird stuff
I tried to read more than the 190 chapters but it didn't work, the MC is very bad and weak, he meddles in literally everything but that is not the problem, but that he makes everything he gets worse, be it the story of the man of iron or thor, the system is useless and also extremely dictator who rules the MC, the MC has no goal or ambition, he just goes around wearing a uniform and facing low level people, 190 chapters and the guy remains poor and hiding identity , disgusted
Translation wise: it's good but at one point this is half MTL half human translated. So much more readable than pure MTL. The novel itself is quite consistent. The system doesn't devour the novel. The MC doesn't become so OP that he's going to boringly succeed whatever he tries. It does a good job mixing plot from the different movies. There is consequences to MC's action. Exemple: mc call iron man to beat the destroyer, so Thor doesn't have to sacrifice himself and earn his power back. So MC will have to teach Thor how to be worthy again somehow. That being said. Though the novel's average level is pretty good. There is no real peak. No WOW moment. Overall this is good. Not amazing. But a good fan fiction is already rare enough.
ネタバレを明かす Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I have not read it yet but i am bout to start. this Is only for exp. Equivalent exchange,5 star in charge for 5 exp.
ネタバレを明かす Typical Chinese Shit Typical Chinese Shit Typical Chinese Shit Typical Chinese Shit Typical Chinese Shit Typical Chinese Shit Typical Chinese Shit
Not worth the time.........hero complexity is to crappy. @-@. ...........................................................................
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ネタバレを明かす It's a pretty good story and it also have unique ideas so I like this story and xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good xp is good
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HAREM ??? HAREM ??? HAREM ??? HAREM ??? ❤️❤️🙂❤️🙂❤️🙂❤️🙂🙂👍🙂❤️🙂❤️🙂👍🙂👍🙂❤️🙂❤️👍👍🙂👍🙂👍🙂🙂❤️❤️🙂❤️🙂🙂👍👍🙂🙂❤️❤️🙂🙂❤️🙂👍👍🙂👍👍🙂👍🙂👍🙂👍🙂👍🙂👍🙂👍
Well I have read upto 210 chapter and all I can say is This is such a fantastic marvel novel. Why is no one continuing to translate it?
From chapter 273 onwards the translation becomes horrible. A real shame as i really enjoyed it so far. Cant recommend reading past chapter 273 as it is.
This is someone else's translation..................................................................................................................................................................
Overall, no... I put world building and story development as 2 as this is a fanfic. The character is a no from me, just no, and I hate the system. The writing quality... Oh god the writing quality, it's just the worst how can you call this writing it's all wrong. I'll try and be a little constructive, the dialogue is awkward as in it sounds stiff and if you where talking you would sound like your embarrassed. I don't know how to describe the rest of it... Overall, I hope you get a bit better at writing and go back and rewrite everything. It has a good premise but the execution is terrible.
Motherfu*cker, the later part of this novel is translated by using machine translation, blatantly copied from the MTL website. Please fix the god damn translation if you put this novel in webnovel in the future. And also if possible, please fix the translation in this novel
Epic epic epic than you translator. I read this story a while back and it was dropped i dont know if this is all of it or if quality drops later. What i do know is i spent at least 7 hours searching the web when i first read it trying to find a new chapter thanks if i could show my happiness at moment through words i would. Going to read this over a week or two
.................................................. ....,............................................. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .sorry, 😅
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