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It was irritating with grammar FONTS. The MC became a new person out of knowwhere. Sorry the story was good but it sucks with the FONTS. The MC literary became a women slave. U know chasing girls he just met.
thestory development so far is going pretty good, the grammar is okay, however there is just to much CAPS lock for me to get into this book. if there was less CAPS lock i could probably give 5 stars.
Muito bom espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Knight 😅🤣🙂😂😂 by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone 📱😅🤣🙂😃😉😅 up 😂🤠
Story makes no sense, only a few chapters long, everything is in caps and impossible to read, and the wishes are really stupid lol it sucks dont bother reading youll get a headache
good start but then not so good lazy writing no substance or proper plot line . op mc just makes multy wish ever week gets everything way to easy in short boring
The story is good so far man Just make your chapters a little longer. and release Some more of dem chapters good buddy 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾
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hi everyone im not the author but i just wanted to say i will be writing and editing this story on my account because i think this story can go places the author didn't even dream of
Just a working and that is that there is a lot of caps. ———————/-//—/—————————2/—————————————————————————————————————————————————
Read first chapter typic srart but with errors Read 2nd chapter typical with even more errors, and boring choice for wishes for a story. If this happened in real life yes you would wisj for super saiyan bloodline thats fine, but to wish for dragon balls with 7 day reset in theory sounds great but in truth is terrible for a story. Mcs girlfriend dies doesnt matter ill wish them back Thanos kills half universe doesnt matter i have drsgon balls to wish for the infinite stones without side effects Lame and **** for a story
its a really good story will he get any super saiyan tranformations or and god ki he can use the super dragon balls for becoming a saiyan god since whis isnt there t help ad hes the only saiyan. **. you should write smaller those big words are really an eye sore
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It was irritating with grammar FONTS. The MC became a new person out of knowwhere. Sorry the story was good but it sucks with the FONTS. The MC literary became a women slave. U know chasing girls he just met.
thestory development so far is going pretty good, the grammar is okay, however there is just to much CAPS lock for me to get into this book. if there was less CAPS lock i could probably give 5 stars.
Muito bom espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Knight 😅🤣🙂😂😂 by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone 📱😅🤣🙂😃😉😅 up 😂🤠
Story makes no sense, only a few chapters long, everything is in caps and impossible to read, and the wishes are really stupid lol it sucks dont bother reading youll get a headache
good start but then not so good lazy writing no substance or proper plot line . op mc just makes multy wish ever week gets everything way to easy in short boring
The story is good so far man Just make your chapters a little longer. and release Some more of dem chapters good buddy 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more!
Keep going 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹👌👌👌👌👌👌🥰🥰🥰👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
hi everyone im not the author but i just wanted to say i will be writing and editing this story on my account because i think this story can go places the author didn't even dream of
Just a working and that is that there is a lot of caps. ———————/-//—/—————————2/—————————————————————————————————————————————————
Read first chapter typic srart but with errors Read 2nd chapter typical with even more errors, and boring choice for wishes for a story. If this happened in real life yes you would wisj for super saiyan bloodline thats fine, but to wish for dragon balls with 7 day reset in theory sounds great but in truth is terrible for a story. Mcs girlfriend dies doesnt matter ill wish them back Thanos kills half universe doesnt matter i have drsgon balls to wish for the infinite stones without side effects Lame and **** for a story
its a really good story will he get any super saiyan tranformations or and god ki he can use the super dragon balls for becoming a saiyan god since whis isnt there t help ad hes the only saiyan. **. you should write smaller those big words are really an eye sore
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