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This is an excellent novel!! I have no idea how it's rating is it so low... so I give it five stars at an attempt to raise it up!! Don't be fooled by the 80 chapters only, as each chapter is close to 10,000 words!! And sometimes even longer! All in all, I love this novel. Thank you author for bringing this to this site :)
I liked it very much I thought it was also very interesting, the personality is very good and the two heroines are amazing they are all individual, the amazing harem are alive, I have no complaints only Hinata hyuga dead betray her back
This story is the hottest, exciting and most awe-Inspiring book that I have read and I can't stop reading it's just to awesome that if their another like this.
This is without a doubt one of the best lewd fan fiction stories I have ever read. I hope to see a continuation of this story in the future.
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Nice story, I like it specially the plotting of the story the only down side is that it never ends but then again it will be the reader's imagination what will be the ending of the story that's why KUDOS TO YOU AUTHOR... KEEP IT UP...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I really like the plot of this story, hoping for more of this kind of story. I don't really care if there is some LOLI, NTR, and INCEST as long as the plot of the story is good. Thanks author...
I love the novel and I am now sad that I finished it but it deserves every 5 star I can give it because it was that amazing! I don't know if I can find another #r-18 better than this but if someone knows one then please send it my way.
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At first this was pretty interesting and I was sure that I would read it to the end. But then everything becomes too absurd and not logical. There are a lot of holes in the plot which cannot be explained in any way.
No effort was put into this story by the author because he plagiarized it from the actual authors on fanfiction.net! I should know because I'm ONE of those authors who actually wrote this story. I never got asked or anything of the sort to have this story put up here. It was brought to my attention and this guy STILL uploaded the chapters without my or my co-writer's permission! Plagiarising garbage.
It's actually pretty damn good. Cjdjshxhhfdjvj d's gehcjvywhxjcjxjdrvdjsi ...... .............................. .............................................................lol
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this is a really good story, I'm waiting for it to continue. Keep the author's spirit. You have to finish this story. I like the story that links with the original story from Naruto. And still waiting for the rise of the Uzumaki clan
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This story wild enough and great,have MC built own kingdom.anyway thank you for novel.
Just going to put this here, because someone finally wants to write about Naruto going against the Leaf. Finally!!! Can anyone else say that they are not fed up with that cliche??
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This was actually good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is an excellent novel!! I have no idea how it's rating is it so low... so I give it five stars at an attempt to raise it up!! Don't be fooled by the 80 chapters only, as each chapter is close to 10,000 words!! And sometimes even longer! All in all, I love this novel. Thank you author for bringing this to this site :)
I liked it very much I thought it was also very interesting, the personality is very good and the two heroines are amazing they are all individual, the amazing harem are alive, I have no complaints only Hinata hyuga dead betray her back
This story is the hottest, exciting and most awe-Inspiring book that I have read and I can't stop reading it's just to awesome that if their another like this.
This is without a doubt one of the best lewd fan fiction stories I have ever read. I hope to see a continuation of this story in the future.
I SEE #LOLI, I GIVE 5 STARS I SEE #LOLI, I GIVE 5 STARS I SEE #LOLI, I GIVE 5 STARS I SEE #LOLI, I GIVE 5 STARS I SEE #LOLI, I GIVE 5 STARS
Nice story, I like it specially the plotting of the story the only down side is that it never ends but then again it will be the reader's imagination what will be the ending of the story that's why KUDOS TO YOU AUTHOR... KEEP IT UP...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
saya suka banget sama anime Naruto boruto 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳dan semua anime terimakasih ya ceritanya debest 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 tapi saya ingin cerita yg Naruto dan Sasuke
I really like the plot of this story, hoping for more of this kind of story. I don't really care if there is some LOLI, NTR, and INCEST as long as the plot of the story is good. Thanks author...
I love the novel and I am now sad that I finished it but it deserves every 5 star I can give it because it was that amazing! I don't know if I can find another #r-18 better than this but if someone knows one then please send it my way.
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👀💙️Thanks for the Book💙👀 👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕
At first this was pretty interesting and I was sure that I would read it to the end. But then everything becomes too absurd and not logical. There are a lot of holes in the plot which cannot be explained in any way.
No effort was put into this story by the author because he plagiarized it from the actual authors on fanfiction.net! I should know because I'm ONE of those authors who actually wrote this story. I never got asked or anything of the sort to have this story put up here. It was brought to my attention and this guy STILL uploaded the chapters without my or my co-writer's permission! Plagiarising garbage.
It's actually pretty damn good. Cjdjshxhhfdjvj d's gehcjvywhxjcjxjdrvdjsi ...... .............................. .............................................................lol
great novel you are amazing so keep going thanks cccccccccccccccccccooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....plagiarism.....
Wow***. This is just wow. I really don't know what to say cos the book is amazing! . it has everything I want in a book. Please write more like this 🖤🖤🖤
this is a really good story, I'm waiting for it to continue. Keep the author's spirit. You have to finish this story. I like the story that links with the original story from Naruto. And still waiting for the rise of the Uzumaki clan
😶 ...... .... ..... ..... ..... .. ... ... ... .... ..... .... ...... ..... ..... ...... ...... ...... ...... ..... ..... .... .... 😅 nice
This story wild enough and great,have MC built own kingdom.anyway thank you for novel.
Just going to put this here, because someone finally wants to write about Naruto going against the Leaf. Finally!!! Can anyone else say that they are not fed up with that cliche??
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