Game of Thrones: The Golden Lion

LV 2

GermanRoulette

It doesn't really feel like you understand neither Game of Thrones nor human behavior very well. On top of that, your writing is just incredibly lazy. It's stock filled with easily fixed spelling errors, he/she mixups and general obvious french translation errors. The army building is ridiculous. So is the idea that he can just send people out to track down meteor iron and expect it to be the same material as what Dawn was made of (lol, Arthur yelling that they could have made 4 'morning swords', like that actually means fu,cking anything). The absolute worst though is how he just meets women, has sex with them (skipped over in a sentence or two) and all of a sudden they mean the world to each other.. absolutely terrible romance and not at all how people work. Lazy and incompetent author.

LV 3

AndromedaAirlines

what if game of thrones was a terrible, badly translated anime made by a 15 year old ............................................................

LV 4

amaturewriter

AN SI fanfic ..dope.. Look its GOT..its gonna be dark..just dont make it too dark...OP MC..one man army style..smart and not stupid....only MC has special powers...add some romance and fluff [just no wife stealing or whores or man whore or perverted MC]......if harem keep it small..

LV 3

Wallabalooza

Writer has no idea what they're doing. I'm assuming they're translating this from some other language, as English is clearly not their native tongue. It's clear they're at least trying to make something decent, but there's just too many errors; too many mistakes. Very, very basic writing. Keep working hard and I'm sure you'll get better.

LV 14

Skepparn

This story was really good until ch28 where it did a complete 180 and turned into the most retarded work I’ve seen on this site I’d recommend the story up until ch28 and then stop reading to not ruin the memory of the story

LV 14

NewGoldie

Story is decent maybe worst ATM. Grammar sucks, dialogue is decent perhaps some interchangeable (he/she), the story structure is good most of the time. The MC goes to good likable character to decent tolerable character to worst retarded individual. I drop this already so I don't see any point in continuing reading this Shlt. It just a Bad way to start new year reading this in experience so not recommending to others.

LV 12

steeve971

The author did not respect the book. It's ****. He wants all the women they see. Mc delayed! No conspiracy! He becomes weak with all the families of his harem protected! This fan fic is completely nonsense! it's a tasteful isekai!

LV 4

EnDeNd

don't let the ratings fool you this story bland at best the mc is plain stupid that only knows how to think with his dick and wants a harem consisting of all the pretty girls in game of thrones this is why you shouldin't put harem in your story if you don't know how to handle them

LV 4

Uncle_Sheogorath

A somewhat decent story, I guesss??. However, there are so much lose of realism that it makes it hard for me to keep reading. Especially how characters react to the mc. Also, mc being bastard then being legitimised makes no sense. Why even make him a bastard at the first place if there's no plot for it and he gets legitimised quite early on without any difficulties. Lastly, I doubt Aerys would legitimise Tywins, son, as they hate each other.

LV 3

Chili_Dog

So... just another harem fanfic... The story went downhill after the MC started chasing p*ssy at every chance he got... Anyway, I'm out... **************************************************

LV 4

Apophis_

The story is good until CH 25 after that the author started doing **** destroyed the whole story just to save a woman drop .

LV 14

Hakkira

I am in disbelief that this story is in the top 100 powerstones ratings. The grammar is atrocious but at times I can forgive such a thing as I can see that an author is passionate about their story or the story they are making a fan fiction of but the most unforgivable thing this story does is getting names of places and important saying in game of thrones wrong. A good example of this is calling Casterly Rock "caster rock" continuously or calling the seven kingdoms the seven crowns all the time and many other mistakes that show the author was not paying attention when watching or reading game of thrones! The worst and most unforgivable mistake the author made though was not even getting the Lannisters famous motto correct which in a game of thrones Lannister fan fic is just plain ridiculous! 🤨 I can only imagine that some people support this novel due to the lack of any good GOT fan fics on here because you seriously have to turn your brain off to try and enjoy this novel! If you are a fan of such movies as "The Room" or just can enjoy something when it is so bad it becomes good then I recommend this novel to you! 😊

LV 5

_James_Jones_

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LV 5

Fortunate_Soul

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LV 12

Kraos5168

This book use to be really good until the war where the Mc just go full retard and started only thinking about his dick. And what’s worse is that he doesn’t even listen to his readers like wtf r u even writing a book then?

LV 5

Vali_3582

Overall story has unique features. After many searches I have found a good GOT story. The Main character Aslan has strong personality and have a mature mind. Few authors just write about story and don't concentrate on it's characters. I like this Fanfic because of good characters and of course for a good story. Thanks for your hard work author. Expecting A new chapter soon.

LV 4

perseusd24

The story has been absolutely amazing but **** hit the fan when the rebellion arc took place, first off all the MC only began thinking with his dick, which is really something that screwed up the entire book. He could have saved the 2 starks from being killed but he did not and no valuable reason was given but he saves Rahealla [Queen] for no reason than wanting to fu** her. The author is a brilliant writer but u messed up heavily during the ********* arc, you should have stopped trying to go and make more women fall in love with him and start thinking about what other benefit you would get besides s*x. If you want to use the excuse of wanting the dragons than you should have kidnapped Daenarys when she was born and raised her with love and kindness.