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Just finished chapter 1 and it’s not looking good. Let’s not forget that the man is a kage. So him just saying year alright to that confession is kinda not right. He would at least use Genjutsu to get all the info out first then talk. The parents being Tsunade and Jiraiya is a good new twist I haven’t seen before. And I feel like the MC is a tad bit slow with the whole existing before part. But apart from that the rest is good. Don’t get me wrong, I’m still gonna read a bit more to decide if imma stick to this but I hope the story sticks a bit more to the OG characters personalities. But overall it’s an ok start, I’ve seen worse.
So I’m chapter 26 and WOW just WOW the novel is awesome I can’t stop reading it people just say like I’m gonna drop it because she say it’s an anime and reveal everything but that one of the thinks i like about it and it’s not like the other fanfic just truck-kun and i liked it[img=recommend][img=update]
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first 15 chapters brought tears to my eyes, the story is very relatable for some and you can feel ithit your soul. In other words well done .
I kinda excused MC abusing someone close to her first couple of times but further on she's getting Sakura levels of annoying, especially since you take into account that she herself was abused. I hope she comes to realization that she's continuing the cycle, maybe in further chapters(by hurting someone more then intended etc.) Overall I enjoyed the read, hope there's update sometime in the future
I've had to have read the at least 4 times. it is by far the best book I've found on this app, I just wish I it would update more often. Ps. author if you read this, please don't drop it.
This is a great Naruto fanfic I absolutely recommend To Anyone \(. /. But I must ask is this dropped
my dude....you drop this story and I'll drop you from a skyscraper. ..well in my head since I have no idea where you are...but it's the thought that counts.....seriously don't stop!!!!!
i only wish that mc is not bound by anyone, imean it's okay if she have a lover but don't reason that lover for her to live not the entire story pls😐, not that i hate hinata...., I just hate her bc she's so timid aaaaa i hate that but no offend i just like to say my thoughts
I really enjoy this book, can't wait till there is more and to see where you go with the story line, especially at the chunnin exams and how you'll do the 3 year timeskip.
why whywhwywhwywgwywywhgwywhwywhwywywywheywhwywhwgwywywh ol let's be straight you just woke up in Naruto world and you decided to tell that you replaced a soul and you have future knowledge I mean it's stupid I get if you have strength but she don't she weaker than normal adult like aghast wait till you can defend yourself but other than sum dumb character flaws like kindness lots of it it's a good novel
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You should really update it more frequently please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
Alot better then I was expecting for a fanfic type of novel, but now im hooked and want more.... well, it's in my library now and ill definitely be excited for chapters that will come
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This story is pretty good. In the beginning, the mc is depressed, but that's only for a short period of time. After that though, the story just gets sweeter and sweeter. The interactions with the mc's love interest (I won't tell you who) are just too wholesome!
I have a lot of things to say about the story, the characters, the world building, and most importantly the MC but it boils down to 2 things, 1. my love for it i can't get enough of the story. 2. my hate for you for playing with my heart and emotions because every time I read it I lose half a box of napkins from the tears and I am the kind of person who doesn't cry a lot but i still love the story and I hope you continue writing this masterpiece of a FF and I hope you have a good day
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Awesome story with great fight scenes with sweet romance and a mc with a tragic backstory that made me cry It's a really awesome story just ignore the hateful comments of whiny b*tches Try to give this story a shot try to read about 10 chapters And if you like it just drop the story and don't ruin it for others.
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onion ninha is op the first 20 chapters and charakters stand out its great the worst wold be tha grammar not du tp author not understanding welp easier showing yes but somthimes it be ys or yrs not a lot of it tho but you notice it ones in a while
Hey author I really like the story that you have going on and I hope that you are going to continue writing it because it is very good, but I guess you cant have everything so here's to you and your health and hope for more to come.
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Very good fanfic of the Naruto world!! while I won't say anything that spoils the story I am really excited and hope that we get more of the story soon!!
The story is really good and i really enjoy the concept of it and the only problem would be the updating stability but its understandable due to the authors current situation.
Well review is the same as I gave in your other 2 fan-fics simply AWESOME.🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍✌️
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I love it but plz bring out more chapters for us; poor, starved, and addicted readers✌️
The story itself isn't ALL bad. It pains me to leave such a bad review when the other stories are entertaining... This character is literally a Mary Sue, for those who don't know, that's an overpowered character that has everything and barely any, IF ANY, weaknesses. Right off the bat, she tells everyone she knows literally everything from the beginning of time to the end of the plot. They accept it and don't even ask any questions to know more about what's to come and whatever else. She literally just dissed hard the leader of one of the strongest clans, he'd never allow that, even if she's "protected" by the Hokage. Banking his reaction on a chance that most likely only happened near the end of Shippuden for plot reason, Hiashi isn't a nice person who'd chuckle at being shat on by a kid. I like the other stories a lot, understand that this one however isn't all that great.
Please don’t drop this Im really enjoying the story so far id really like to see more.
Just finished chapter 1 and it’s not looking good. Let’s not forget that the man is a kage. So him just saying year alright to that confession is kinda not right. He would at least use Genjutsu to get all the info out first then talk. The parents being Tsunade and Jiraiya is a good new twist I haven’t seen before. And I feel like the MC is a tad bit slow with the whole existing before part. But apart from that the rest is good. Don’t get me wrong, I’m still gonna read a bit more to decide if imma stick to this but I hope the story sticks a bit more to the OG characters personalities. But overall it’s an ok start, I’ve seen worse.
So I’m chapter 26 and WOW just WOW the novel is awesome I can’t stop reading it people just say like I’m gonna drop it because she say it’s an anime and reveal everything but that one of the thinks i like about it and it’s not like the other fanfic just truck-kun and i liked it[img=recommend][img=update]
ネタバレを明かす first 15 chapters brought tears to my eyes, the story is very relatable for some and you can feel ithit your soul. In other words well done .
I kinda excused MC abusing someone close to her first couple of times but further on she's getting Sakura levels of annoying, especially since you take into account that she herself was abused. I hope she comes to realization that she's continuing the cycle, maybe in further chapters(by hurting someone more then intended etc.) Overall I enjoyed the read, hope there's update sometime in the future
I've had to have read the at least 4 times. it is by far the best book I've found on this app, I just wish I it would update more often. Ps. author if you read this, please don't drop it.
This is a great Naruto fanfic I absolutely recommend To Anyone \(. /. But I must ask is this dropped
my dude....you drop this story and I'll drop you from a skyscraper. ..well in my head since I have no idea where you are...but it's the thought that counts.....seriously don't stop!!!!!
i only wish that mc is not bound by anyone, imean it's okay if she have a lover but don't reason that lover for her to live not the entire story pls😐, not that i hate hinata...., I just hate her bc she's so timid aaaaa i hate that but no offend i just like to say my thoughts
I really enjoy this book, can't wait till there is more and to see where you go with the story line, especially at the chunnin exams and how you'll do the 3 year timeskip.
why whywhwywhwywgwywywhgwywhwywhwywywywheywhwywhwgwywywh ol let's be straight you just woke up in Naruto world and you decided to tell that you replaced a soul and you have future knowledge I mean it's stupid I get if you have strength but she don't she weaker than normal adult like aghast wait till you can defend yourself but other than sum dumb character flaws like kindness lots of it it's a good novel
ネタバレを明かす You should really update it more frequently please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
Alot better then I was expecting for a fanfic type of novel, but now im hooked and want more.... well, it's in my library now and ill definitely be excited for chapters that will come
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One of my favourite Naruto Fanfics I've ever read ,>¥.>¥,+%,,,+%,,%+,+%.+%|.+%,+%.¥%...>.¥%.%¥.¥%.¥%+%.%¥.%¥.¥%.%.¥%..¥%.¥%.¥%,¥%,,%¥,%¥.¥>
This story is pretty good. In the beginning, the mc is depressed, but that's only for a short period of time. After that though, the story just gets sweeter and sweeter. The interactions with the mc's love interest (I won't tell you who) are just too wholesome!
I have a lot of things to say about the story, the characters, the world building, and most importantly the MC but it boils down to 2 things, 1. my love for it i can't get enough of the story. 2. my hate for you for playing with my heart and emotions because every time I read it I lose half a box of napkins from the tears and I am the kind of person who doesn't cry a lot but i still love the story and I hope you continue writing this masterpiece of a FF and I hope you have a good day
Gostei de como ele escreveu o drama da MC... confesso que chorei.........................................................................................
Awesome story with great fight scenes with sweet romance and a mc with a tragic backstory that made me cry It's a really awesome story just ignore the hateful comments of whiny b*tches Try to give this story a shot try to read about 10 chapters And if you like it just drop the story and don't ruin it for others.
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onion ninha is op the first 20 chapters and charakters stand out its great the worst wold be tha grammar not du tp author not understanding welp easier showing yes but somthimes it be ys or yrs not a lot of it tho but you notice it ones in a while
Hey author I really like the story that you have going on and I hope that you are going to continue writing it because it is very good, but I guess you cant have everything so here's to you and your health and hope for more to come.
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Very good fanfic of the Naruto world!! while I won't say anything that spoils the story I am really excited and hope that we get more of the story soon!!
The story is really good and i really enjoy the concept of it and the only problem would be the updating stability but its understandable due to the authors current situation.
Well review is the same as I gave in your other 2 fan-fics simply AWESOME.🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️👍✌️🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍🤗❤️😍✌️
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I love it but plz bring out more chapters for us; poor, starved, and addicted readers✌️
The story itself isn't ALL bad. It pains me to leave such a bad review when the other stories are entertaining... This character is literally a Mary Sue, for those who don't know, that's an overpowered character that has everything and barely any, IF ANY, weaknesses. Right off the bat, she tells everyone she knows literally everything from the beginning of time to the end of the plot. They accept it and don't even ask any questions to know more about what's to come and whatever else. She literally just dissed hard the leader of one of the strongest clans, he'd never allow that, even if she's "protected" by the Hokage. Banking his reaction on a chance that most likely only happened near the end of Shippuden for plot reason, Hiashi isn't a nice person who'd chuckle at being shat on by a kid. I like the other stories a lot, understand that this one however isn't all that great.
Please don’t drop this Im really enjoying the story so far id really like to see more.
It's a really good read. I can't wait for the rewritten version to come out