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TRAVELLING THROUGH HIS PHONE(DXD to ATG every world)
4.09 (76 レビュー結果)
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It is now in the fanfic section if you want to read it the search the same name(+fanfic) in Fanfics section on webnovel.
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I find this story hard to read. There are a bunch of spelling mistakes. You forget to add spaces and you basically make the character's super bland. I hope this helps in your writing. P.S. Stop adding emojis.
A ****ty self fullfillment story. Nothing seems real and it is too fast paced. Read it if you have time to spare, but I won't recommend it.
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Thanks for Fan-Fic, your work is great, me and my friends were very excited waiting for the next chapter, don't let it fall..............................................................
Buddy you're letting this story get boring because 90% of the time they're having sex and no adventure nor emotion just sex you should just say '' we had a long night of love '' and make the story more interesting because it's going downhill
More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please! More chapters please!
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP THIS
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Man, i really dont like your novel.... Just dont give a shit about a damn plot.... MC present already altered the plot.... This is why i dont like some fanfiction novel.... Because some author who's doesn't want to change the plot Just for the sake of having more chapter and always give some shitty excuse about the consequance if MC Change the plot..... Huh, meh.... Just another brainless author....
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Complete wish fulfilment. English is fine, it's readable but with errors, text lingo, etc. Power system and wishes are whack, but those don't matter at all since the MC is broken, and the story is about fantasy fulfilment. MC is hollow and so are the characters. Reads like a script, rather than a story. Not my type of story, but definitely has a reader base that will be interested. Maybe 13 year olds that want some something to store in their spank bank. TL;DR: Don't think while reading and you might be able to read all of it. Not for those looking for quality but some mindless time-pass material.
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卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1 : HS DXD
- 1 Goddess and Wishes 5 years ago
- 2 Life as a baby with goddess 5 years ago
- 3 Omni System and Phone 5 years ago
- 4 Starter Package and System Functions 5 years ago
- 5 Meeting Irina and Daily Life 5 years ago
- 6 7 years old and First mission 5 years ago
- 7 Irina's departure and parents 5 years ago
- 8 One year later and Second Quest 5 years ago
- 9 Becoming Nekomata's Master 5 years ago
- 10 Saving Kuroka and Koneko 5 years ago
- 11 Quest completion and Hidden quests 5 years ago
- 12 Ddraig and Massaging Nekos 5 years ago
- 13 Shuri and Akeno 5 years ago
- 14 Saving Shuri and Akeno 5 years ago
- 15 England and Griselda 5 years ago
- 16 Going to Gremory House 5 years ago
- 17 First time(+18) 5 years ago
- 18 Nekomatas and New functions (+18) 5 years ago
- 19 Shuri thoughts and Confession 5 years ago
- 20 Shuri And Akari (+18) 5 years ago
- 21 Passing Days 5 years ago
- 22 Kuoh Academy 5 years ago
- 23 Rias And Sona 5 years ago
- 24 Sona's Loss and Getting Many Girls At Once 5 years ago
- 25 Rias Thoughts and Decision 5 years ago
- 26 Raynare and A little Twist 5 years ago
- 27 Loving all part 1 (+18) 5 years ago
- 28 Loving all part 2 (+18) 5 years ago
- 29 A few Guests and Trouble 5 years ago
- 30 Meeting Asia And Killing Freed 5 years ago
- 31 Asia's Goal and 'Classmates' 5 years ago
- 32 Rias' New Pawns 5 years ago
- 33 Kalwarner and Mittelt 5 years ago
- 34 Gasper Vladi 5 years ago
- 35 Riser Phenex 5 years ago
- 36 Issei VS Riser 5 years ago
- 37 Issei VS Riser 2 5 years ago
- 38 Fighting Lord Phenex 5 years ago
- 39 Ravel And Her Peerage 5 years ago
- 40 Touring Underworld 5 years ago
- 41 Curing Misla Bael 5 years ago
- 42 My day in Underworld 5 years ago
- 43 Leaving Underworld 5 years ago
- 44 Irina and Xenovia 5 years ago
- 45 Kokabiel's Arrival 5 years ago
- 46 Killing Kokabeil 5 years ago
- 47 Vali Lucifer and White Dragon Emperor 5 years ago
- 48 Long Night (+18) 5 years ago
- 49 Cooking Skills and Recipes 5 years ago
- 50 Dragon God Bloodline 5 years ago
- 51 Super Devil and New Powers 5 years ago
- 52 Meeting Ophis 5 years ago
- 53 Adia and Ravel Phenex 5 years ago
- 54 Tiamat 5 years ago
- 55 Masaomi and Cleria's Daughter 5 years ago
- 56 Claire Belial 5 years ago
- 57 Kensei Amagiri 5 years ago
- 58 Adia(+18) and Return 5 years ago
- 59 Meeting with Mom 5 years ago
- 60 Three Factions 5 years ago
- 61 Khaos Brigade Arrival 5 years ago
- 62 Issei VS Vali 5 years ago
- 63 General, Commanders and Contracted Magicians 5 years ago
- 64 Helping Heaven 5 years ago
- 65 Reincarnated Angels 5 years ago
- 66 Returning from Heaven 5 years ago
- 67 Ingvild Leviathan 5 years ago
- 68 Visit 5 years ago
- 69 Dinner 5 years ago
- 70 Odin's Arrival and Youth Gathering 5 years ago
- 71 Rating Games 1 5 years ago
- 72 Going Back 5 years ago
- 73 Fight Starts 5 years ago
- 74 Fight Ends and Killing Shalba 5 years ago
- 75 New Quest and Confessions 5 years ago
- 76 Diodora's Peerage and Grayfia 5 years ago
- 77 (+18) 5 years ago
- 78 (+18) and Becoming Odin's Bodyguard 5 years ago
- 79 Loki, Fenrir and Balance Breaker 5 years ago
- 80 Taking a God's Divinity 5 years ago
- 81 Rossweisse and Birthday 5 years ago
- 82 Party and Going to Kyoto 5 years ago
- 83 Yasaka and Kunou 5 years ago
- 84 Fighting Hero Faction 5 years ago
- 85 Hades and Cao Cao's Decision 5 years ago
- 86 Attack 5 years ago
- 87 Hades' End and Venelana 5 years ago
- 88 Going back 5 years ago
- 89 Party and Grayfia 5 years ago
- 90 New Powers 5 years ago
- 91 Luck on Lottery and Ruby 5 years ago
- 92 Lady Sitri 5 years ago
- 93 Rossweisse and Selena 5 years ago
- 94 Matches 5 years ago
- 95 Breaking Marriages 4 years ago
- 96 Breaking Marriages 2 4 years ago
- 97 Jen's secret 4 years ago
- 98 New General and (+18) 4 years ago
- 99 Elmenhilde and Vampires 4 years ago
- 100 Rizevim and Crom Cruach 4 years ago
- 101 Meeting the Great Red 4 years ago
- 102 The End of the world and Trihexia 4 years ago
- 103 Amaterasu 4 years ago
- 104 NOTICE!! 4 years ago
Cliches and difficult to read because of poor placement and grammar. That's all my opinion in the first to second chapters.