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just finished the fifty chapters on WN well balanced and clean with plenty of EQ for a romance with open ends for harem(stay clean). not the epitomy of perfection but the author definitely knows how to and how often action is needed without making a solo lvl dungeon slog or a slice of life with way to many unused details. author is aware of political backdrop of the Naruto world as well as the historical events characters hold to original personalities while also interacting in a way above two dimensions all in all a VERY refreshing take on Naruto fanfic or otherwise
I didn’t see dates for last updated so I really can’t say anything about its updating time. Great story I think. Timeline is good and I really like how the MC just fits into the original without tossing things out of wack. Shows that they know the characters.
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le concept est bien. mais le développement du héro est trop rapide. le héro devient trop fort très vite et trop facilement. lorsqu'on lis le synopsis on pense à un héro qui aurait partagé les peine de Naruto mais ce n'est pas le cas même comme tu essaye de le forcé.
It is a really great fan fic . The MC has a good personality and is a caring brother. This story has good potential in it . But sadly I think it is dropped .
This is one of the only fanfics I've read for Naruto as a series, but so far its pretty darn good. The main character has his own personality, and doesn't seem to be just a self insert. The way the MC was placed in the story is believable, and the author for the most part has weaved it pretty well into the established cannon. Thankfully (at least so far) it doesn't appear to be a harem. However so far it does have a few things that mildly irk me, I wouldn't consider any of these to be full on deal breakers at this point though. His 'system' is a little too well rounded and OP, I much prefer a MC to be more focused and less 'do everything'. You'll notice in most of the really good anime / manga the MC will have only a handful of things they excel at, and will branch out later from there. Take Naruto for example, good at shadow clones, has Kurama which serves as his "problem solver" in the early stages, and then gets Rasengan which becomes the butter to his bread (shadow clones). Thats pretty much all he has in the early stages anyway. Now for this MC he has....pretty much everything. There is no feasible way the author can use all the jutsus / other things hes given the MC. It isn't really a problem per se, since even though he HAS them, they'll never get used. It just makes no sense to give him all of them at once instead of spacing it out as gradual progression. Not to mention what has been done with his affinity, I get it has a lot to do with his 'system', but if the result was literally giving him everything right off the bat before he even has a mission as a ninja, then I'd rather there be no 'system' at all. But other than those minor things I've enjoyed the story so far, the combat could use just a bit of work, but is more or less fine. Admittedly I vastly prefer the downtime between missions, and interactions between the characters. I especially like what hes doing with Sasuke, certainly seems like an improvement at least so far. Oh and bear in mind when I say 'system' I don't literally mean a system. Just that what he has is somewhat similar to one, you'll understand very quickly what I'm referring to when you read it.
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Character's are very realistic with their personality's and traits. Decent backstory and alright story development but need to improve a bit in updates. All around, i love the Fanfic but i'm really confused with the parings. Will the MC have a harem or just a single love interest, i seriously want a harem but like 3-4.
I love the mc that always have red hair or red eyes which is just something I love,but the mysterious premise of this story is interesting to me,so please keep it up I love this story please.
The system is not used by the MC properly other than that the novel is one of the best novels i read. The fact that mc cannot use shadow clone like naruto is bringing down the potential of mc. The mc and naruto both have emmence chakra but the author is making is have something to do with yang chakra.
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so I started reading be cause I was bored but the I continued because its just so damn good. honestly its so interesting. he has his op stuff but isnt ionywt because if lack of experience. rings a nice balance to the book
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Good read. Fascinating truly. The plot gets very interesting along the way. Need to update more regularly. I am still liking the overall storyline. Hope for more.
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thank you for keeping up this story even if the updates are slow i rlly like this fanfic and i recommend others to read it as well although occasionally the grammar can be a little annoying most of the time it is good
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I love this story just wondering when he will use his chains in battle.when will he meet kurama and will he unlock sage mode like naruto.Did a wonderful job building up character.
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This one is Masterpiece anybody who read this novel please give 5 star rating. Author San good work with this novel I enjoyed quite a lot. And again please don't drop this novel.
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just finished the fifty chapters on WN well balanced and clean with plenty of EQ for a romance with open ends for harem(stay clean). not the epitomy of perfection but the author definitely knows how to and how often action is needed without making a solo lvl dungeon slog or a slice of life with way to many unused details. author is aware of political backdrop of the Naruto world as well as the historical events characters hold to original personalities while also interacting in a way above two dimensions all in all a VERY refreshing take on Naruto fanfic or otherwise
I didn’t see dates for last updated so I really can’t say anything about its updating time. Great story I think. Timeline is good and I really like how the MC just fits into the original without tossing things out of wack. Shows that they know the characters.
Satu power stone dariku untuk cerita yang bagus! Aku hanya tertekan dengan bagaimana lambatnya dia berlatih ketika dia memiliki cheat seperti The Gamer. Lalu aksesnya pada Yin Kurama juga terlalu dibatasi, tapi jika mengikuti kanon dan mengambil contoh Naruto, arc ujian Chunin akan menjadi waktu dimana dia akan bertemu Yin Kurama. Aku menunggu kelanjutan ceritanya 💪
le concept est bien. mais le développement du héro est trop rapide. le héro devient trop fort très vite et trop facilement. lorsqu'on lis le synopsis on pense à un héro qui aurait partagé les peine de Naruto mais ce n'est pas le cas même comme tu essaye de le forcé.
It is a really great fan fic . The MC has a good personality and is a caring brother. This story has good potential in it . But sadly I think it is dropped .
This is one of the only fanfics I've read for Naruto as a series, but so far its pretty darn good. The main character has his own personality, and doesn't seem to be just a self insert. The way the MC was placed in the story is believable, and the author for the most part has weaved it pretty well into the established cannon. Thankfully (at least so far) it doesn't appear to be a harem. However so far it does have a few things that mildly irk me, I wouldn't consider any of these to be full on deal breakers at this point though. His 'system' is a little too well rounded and OP, I much prefer a MC to be more focused and less 'do everything'. You'll notice in most of the really good anime / manga the MC will have only a handful of things they excel at, and will branch out later from there. Take Naruto for example, good at shadow clones, has Kurama which serves as his "problem solver" in the early stages, and then gets Rasengan which becomes the butter to his bread (shadow clones). Thats pretty much all he has in the early stages anyway. Now for this MC he has....pretty much everything. There is no feasible way the author can use all the jutsus / other things hes given the MC. It isn't really a problem per se, since even though he HAS them, they'll never get used. It just makes no sense to give him all of them at once instead of spacing it out as gradual progression. Not to mention what has been done with his affinity, I get it has a lot to do with his 'system', but if the result was literally giving him everything right off the bat before he even has a mission as a ninja, then I'd rather there be no 'system' at all. But other than those minor things I've enjoyed the story so far, the combat could use just a bit of work, but is more or less fine. Admittedly I vastly prefer the downtime between missions, and interactions between the characters. I especially like what hes doing with Sasuke, certainly seems like an improvement at least so far. Oh and bear in mind when I say 'system' I don't literally mean a system. Just that what he has is somewhat similar to one, you'll understand very quickly what I'm referring to when you read it.
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Character's are very realistic with their personality's and traits. Decent backstory and alright story development but need to improve a bit in updates. All around, i love the Fanfic but i'm really confused with the parings. Will the MC have a harem or just a single love interest, i seriously want a harem but like 3-4.
I love the mc that always have red hair or red eyes which is just something I love,but the mysterious premise of this story is interesting to me,so please keep it up I love this story please.
The system is not used by the MC properly other than that the novel is one of the best novels i read. The fact that mc cannot use shadow clone like naruto is bringing down the potential of mc. The mc and naruto both have emmence chakra but the author is making is have something to do with yang chakra.
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so I started reading be cause I was bored but the I continued because its just so damn good. honestly its so interesting. he has his op stuff but isnt ionywt because if lack of experience. rings a nice balance to the book
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Good read. Fascinating truly. The plot gets very interesting along the way. Need to update more regularly. I am still liking the overall storyline. Hope for more.
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thank you for keeping up this story even if the updates are slow i rlly like this fanfic and i recommend others to read it as well although occasionally the grammar can be a little annoying most of the time it is good
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ネタバレを明かす I love this story just wondering when he will use his chains in battle.when will he meet kurama and will he unlock sage mode like naruto.Did a wonderful job building up character.
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This one is Masterpiece anybody who read this novel please give 5 star rating. Author San good work with this novel I enjoyed quite a lot. And again please don't drop this novel.
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